Home    LBP Showcase / Reviews / Recommendations    Level Showcase
#1

Aliens Attack! v1.0

Archive: 9 posts


Hi Guys this is my third level and is based on an idea of an alien invasion.

You are a survivor of earth and must survive hordes of Aliens using only your gun and your wits.

There are 2 areas currently and cool features such as teleporters.

There will be more to come like new areas, new guns, new features etc.
:l ove::lov e:
http://lbp.me/v/ycfk4p
2011-02-28 19:24:00

Author:
TaylerBurke
Posts: 12


Im also working on a versus lvl atm ^_^2011-02-28 20:53:00

Author:
TaylerBurke
Posts: 12


What shuld the new area be???2011-03-01 22:24:00

Author:
TaylerBurke
Posts: 12


A few things.

The first area is grey, the weapon fires grey objects, it's hard to see where you're shooting as they blend in with the background. Also there is no noise when you shoot, you could add a sound effect to the object that plays when it is created which would make it better.
The first area is a bit empty, it's just a flat floor, it needs some decoration and height variation, anything to make it a bit more interesting.
The second area needs a better camera set up as it just zooms in to track the player so you can hardly see anything. Also it could do with some more decoration and variation.
You should work on a better way to go from the menu selection to playing as it seems a bit odd, you just see your sackboy die and a bit of platform falls down, then you're playing.

Concentrate on fixing up the first area rather than adding new areas that are just as plain. It would make it a lot more fun!
2011-03-01 23:42:00

Author:
Frostinski
Posts: 40


Adding to que right now2011-03-01 23:45:00

Author:
tuyyui
Posts: 175


Ty for the feedback, i will do that and take it into consideration!2011-03-02 16:07:00

Author:
TaylerBurke
Posts: 12


Added to my queue. Please check out my versus levels sometime2011-03-02 17:43:00

Author:
Jenkins21
Posts: 19


- This needs work. It is not very pretty. I would focus on adding detail and making the zone make sense.
- The bullets are hard to see.
- One of the options in the menu was broken when I played.
I liked the font used in the menu. I liked the costumes you picked.
2011-03-05 13:38:00

Author:
OrangeTroz
Posts: 90


hi there! i played / tested your level!
here is a short review with some ideas how to make it better!:

ok i know this will be fixed later if you put something in but... the game stopped working on the menu if you push on the second option - maybe make it not pressable till you fill something in?

aw comon... why do i need to buy to exit the menu? you can connect the controllinator in a way that it throws you out befor you destroy the controllinator item of the menu.
as well you can do a second controllinator out of an emitter to catch you up and than throwing you out in a 0,1 second and than destroying itself after a 1 second. DONE your warp.

my first try on the actual level took me 5 seconds - jump new screen - lookk bzzt death... goal... that was fast! better make it save for the beginning so you can see ahh... now it starts.

the enemies are way to strong for the beginning.
maybe you can do them getting stronger with time?
at first you should be able to kill small ones with one shot.

*hugs* i hope i helped you!

for F4F plz go to my signature link "skunk bunny adventures" thank you!
2011-03-06 01:46:00

Author:
ForcesWerwolf
Posts: 475


LBPCentral Archive Statistics
Posts: 1077139    Threads: 69970    Members: 9661    Archive-Date: 2019-01-19

Datenschutz
Aus dem Archiv wurden alle persönlichen Daten wie Name, Anschrift, Email etc. - aber auch sämtliche Inhalte wie z.B. persönliche Nachrichten - entfernt.
Die Nutzung dieser Webseite erfolgt ohne Speicherung personenbezogener Daten. Es werden keinerlei Cookies, Logs, 3rd-Party-Plugins etc. verwendet.