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Hi there. I'll give this feedback thing a try. 2 feedbacks please.

No one has yet to finish my level. So I implemented "Hint or Score". That way at least people will know there actually is more to the level if they figure out how to proceed, and the hints make it much easier.

Thanks!
Z
http://lbp.me/v/Xbh3tw
2011-02-26 16:58:00

Author:
Mr_Man007_
Posts: 9


Ill give your level a shot and get back to you with some F4F in due time buddy.2011-02-26 17:14:00

Author:
Chornijbumer
Posts: 14


Alright so I did a quick play through several times... heres the verdict

You have great ideas but your objects and or ideas are all over the place at times.... At times not user friendly

-I loved the elevator at the start how it went up, down,right with the random magic mouth moments but
* when your in the elavator you can see the very top of the cube on which its based on.. I suggest adding something to the rod thats its connected to , maybe a custom made hook.

-Loved the hippy guy but
*The hippy guy who you rescue from the cave says " well im going back to sleep" he trys running back to the cave but gets stuck in the switch that opens up.

-I dint seem to catch on to the back story , one second your on an elevator the next your in a desert
* try to add a little side story in the beginning.

- There is a point in time where its possible to get stuck I took an image

http://i1086.photobucket.com/albums/j459/chornijbumer/APhoto_3.jpg

*This is when you give your boss the info you got from the desert. You go up the tube and if you move you can get stuck in the middle. I know you can do the blow up sack thing and go back but its just unrealistic

-When you first enter the desert there is a ticker with the hint and when it goes down a bird comes with a hint ..good idea but...

* It seems that the hint is really not hint but a command because you HAVE to wait for the hint thus the guy to pop up and throw explosives at you....

- The cart that goes up the staircase that the guy electrocutes is a good idea but
* its not automatic , you have to push it had to play a few times to figure it out

OVERALL

Good ideas , I see you put your mind to work but just work on the edges and add more elements ... Make it more user friendly
2011-02-26 18:08:00

Author:
Chornijbumer
Posts: 14


Thanks for the feedback. I just made a bunch of changes based on your comments.2011-02-26 22:00:00

Author:
Mr_Man007_
Posts: 9


Queued, will give some feed back, do the same for me? link to my level https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=51081-RPG-Demo-V12011-02-26 22:02:00

Author:
arsenalfan_1995
Posts: 229


Thanks for the feedback. I just made a bunch of changes based on your comments.

ill go check it out again in a while
2011-03-01 18:27:00

Author:
Chornijbumer
Posts: 14


Just played it you made good improvements from what it was before.2011-03-01 18:43:00

Author:
Chornijbumer
Posts: 14


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