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Its Just as the title says lol a freaky christmas!!! Check it out lots more to come!!<3<3<3 http://lbp.me/v/y7vrtq

2011-02-25 20:33:00 Author: Manny77607 Posts: 101

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I played through this and didn't expect where you took the story, it does set up a bit of a cliffhanger to give the player a reason to see the follow up to the story. I think it would be good to set this level as a cut-scene level so that they player can't close out the dialogue boxes before they are done. Might make things a little more smooth in the presentation. There are a few spelling mistakes in your magic mouths like mabey and tommorrows but if you are fine with this then you don't need to worry about that part. Your audio recordings are fairly well done, easy to understand and of a decent fidelity. For a level you put together because you were bored you did a good enough job. As far as the story and camera shots is concerned the beginning and ending bits are the best parts. If you are able could you check out my Tutorial Tutorial level and let me know what you think?

2011-02-26 06:46:00 Author: Trindall Posts: 297

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Will do soon thanks for the feedback!!

2011-02-26 08:42:00 Author: Manny77607 Posts: 101

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