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...as he hears MuddledMuppet again tortures one of his works. All comments appreciated, tho tbh the thermometer is fairly full so not too sure if I can change much, am thinking of having another tweak of the camera angles & transitions... anyhoo all feedback appreciated http://lbp.me/v/x4v5eg

2011-02-24 00:01:00 Author: MuddledMuppet Posts: 115

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I have left you a review in the game itself, but accidentally it got deleted, so I will write it here instead. I find this to be your best work so far. The quality of the sound recording is of better quality than in your previous work. Did you change the technique, microphone or something? You have a very pleasant voice and can control it quite well, while being immersed in the interpretative reading. Your voice is probably the best one I have heard on LBP2 so far. And you really give additional depth to the movie. (Which is why I also contacted you on PSN. ) The scenario itself is well thought out, and it works rather well. I feel that it could have used couple more scenes in the middle, the purpose of which would be more meaningful transition to the flashbacks. Maybe more elaborated character background? But then again, the effect of the short and condensed feeling would be lost, so I am not all that certain on this one, but one can always ponder. Regarding the issue of subtitles, which I saw you touched upon in previous topics, please use them in your next levels. They are not distracting if well synced. I mean the limitations of LBP recording have to be accepted. It is an unavoidable fact that voice quality is not all that great, due to which some words can be lost and/or muffled. Subtitles would help to deal with this issue. You don’t want your viewers to struggle and focus all their attention on deciphering some words, while loosing the flow of the story. I look forward to your future works. Edit: Oh yea, do some Greek tragedies.

2011-02-24 09:48:00 Author: Stampy Posts: 86

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I very much liked the idea of an actor getting in touch with the humanity of that scene. Very nicely done. As you asked for suggestions, I'm a fan of classical theater so Shakespeare (done well, which you did here) is always welcomed. At the same time some funny stuff is excellent. Mix it up do some of both, so long as you enjoy it too.

2011-02-24 10:36:00 Author: lochnar Posts: 59

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This was cool. I thought it was a big improvement on the Hamlet film, just because you managed to create more variety/interest for the viewer. Giving the speech some context was nicely done and definitely gave the final speech more impact. Well done. You've carved yourself a unique niche in LBP with these films. Stick at it! A and a <3 from me

2011-02-25 09:50:00 Author: shropshirelass Posts: 1455

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Qued up and as for F4F my level and thread are in my signature

2011-02-25 12:10:00 Author: Angelgozen Posts: 286

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Thanks everyone, very much appreciated. Stampy, I do hear what your saying, I will re-consider, but I have a feeling i won't change my mind(obstinate little so & so me) btw it was great hooking up with you, and i'm really looking forward to seing your final product and very proud that you asked me to be a part of it Oh and mic ettings weren't changed at all, so don't know what i did different Thanks for kind comments Lochnar & shropshire lass, I've added all here to queue aqnd will have a looksee later My next project has been started since the 'chat' at the end of MoV, so I may remove that (tho it does add a cosy touch) I Like i say, I KNOW that's a very bad way for me to look at it but i'm only humen Thanks to those that have given me fedback on my movies so far tho

2011-02-25 16:43:00 Author: MuddledMuppet Posts: 115

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Hey i have queued your movie can you try my level too please https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=50942-Stronghold-of-the-Lost-Empire

2011-02-25 18:24:00 Author: hitman_472 Posts: 52

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