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A short level. Originally intended to look like a swamp but im not sure how it worked out. I tried to add something "new" to it, but all i could come up with was a "ship repairing" mini game. Well hope you enjoy it (Darn school... I barely get enough time to make a level. The education system here forces the student to memorize every single detail about billions of subjects instead of actually learning them, you end up being have to study 7/24. Oh well) I was actually working on the sequel of "an average adventure;1st discovery" but i created a scenery that i liked while i was up to it, that made me want to use it in a different level. So i ended up creating something completely different than originally intended. I HAD TO rush it. Otherwise i would have to wait for the next weekend to work on it. I decided to publish it early so that i can see what the community thinks about it, makes it easier to notice my mistakes. I will probably be working on what i should have been working on already (the sequel i mentioned earlier) but i might be able to fix this one too. Im not sure if this level works properly on LBP2. A friend of mine played it in LBP2 and reviewed the level, but i couldn't spot the mistakes he did. So, consider that if you are lucky enough to have LBP2 and (unlucky enough jk ) play this level. I hope you enjoy it http://lbp.me/v/x2v4dh

2011-02-23 21:12:00 Author: Mick'o'Mania Posts: 83

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I think a lot of users here will stop reading when they see that you spelled "break" as "brake". Unless that was intentional, I would recommend fixing spelling & grammar. It really lowers people's expectations. And levels should not be rushed. If it takes you another weekend to complete, then so what? Take another weekend then. Create and playtest your level thoroughly before you publish it.

2011-02-26 16:52:00 Author: zabel99 Posts: 179

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Played it. Nice level. My comments below: 1. The dialogue is too fast. You should let the player control it better. I missed half of it. 2. Water is frustrating and it's too easy to fall. Almost quit playing after my seventh time falling in. 3. I like some of your puzzles. The boat crossing was neat and tricky to figure out. 4. Beginningn might be too hard. I almost assumed the first room was all there was to the level. Please try my F4F! "Section 17" http://lbp.me/v/xbh3tw

2011-02-26 17:29:00 Author: Mr_Man007_ Posts: 9

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I liked it. I agree with Mr_Man, The dialogues are a bit fast and when you cross the bridge it's very frustrating, the gaps between the pieces are too large. Good work with the ship repair minigame

2011-02-27 10:08:00 Author: Unknown User

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Thank you for playing Well, i got LBP2 a couple of days ago, so im unlikely to go back and work on a "lbp1" level although i guess i should fix it. -dialogues are fast? Well, i must admit i assumed everyone would read it as fast as i could, i should have considered the fact that reading what I wrote is faster than reading something someone else wrote. -A friend of mine also pointed out the bridge issue. I simply said "it's a part of the challenge, besides, it isn't that hard". It appears he was right and i was wrong. I will work on it. -Yeah... I think i should make one of the pirates at the beginning tell the player to use the box to go upstairs. I expected the bubbles to be enough though. I'll fix these as soon as i can... I will probably be busy in the create mode while playing with the new features though.

2011-02-27 20:52:00 Author: Mick'o'Mania Posts: 83

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