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Colours in Concealment

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Hi! This is a light level designed to be an artistic platformer. Any comments, suggestions, bugs and constructive criticism are welcome. I wasn't sure if I made the level too dark or not, so....

Thanks for any F4F!
http://lbp.me/v/x4mj2d

http://i5.lbp.me/img/ft/1659ccd840bfe6a61f5f3de543bf8fa1a021fb6a.jpg
http://i7.lbp.me/img/ft/9879d9a96d024ba595549034c0676abe55f4760a.jpg
http://i8.lbp.me/img/ft/1989db4890d7b4931e879f963483d10482b484db.jpg		2011-02-22 20:40:00

Author:
creator22
Posts: 162

Sounds cool, ill check it out 2011-02-22 20:53:00

Author:
Bloo_boy
Posts: 1019

Hi! This is a light level designed to be an artistic platformer. Any comments, suggestions, bugs and constructive criticism are welcome. I wasn't sure if I made the level too dark or not, so....

Thanks for any F4F!
http://lbp.me/v/x4mj2d

I have it queued for later, if you want you can try my levels in my sig for fun.		2011-02-22 20:55:00

Author:
Ghost
Posts: 114

Im queueing now and ill play later for sure, im actually working on my own light level i started a few days ago. I went with dark as well. Look foward to playing yours and for my F4F id love for you to give Candy Land a go. http://lbp.me/v/xw2bt6 Ill be back with feedback.2011-02-22 21:20:00

Author:
PurpleIris88
Posts: 108

Very nice level, very nice indeed. You have some major ideas going here and they're all working out for you. It wasn't very easy on the eye at times but maybe that's just me needing to go to bed. The idea is perfectly executed. 2011-02-22 23:16:00

Author:
nerthus
Posts: 28

No bugs?:O This is the first time I ever had a level with no bugs. 2011-02-23 01:02:00

Author:
creator22
Posts: 162

Can't wait to play it later.2011-02-23 01:06:00

Author:
tuyyui
Posts: 175

First thought...WOW.The colors are amazing the lights are twinkling perfectly. The journey throughout the level was smooth i didnt encounter any messed up areas or bugs. As far as feedback all i can really say is that you built a perfect level.2011-02-23 03:24:00

Author:
PurpleIris88
Posts: 108

- Ugh. You don't need a camera showing you the result of the switch.
The player will run foward, see they cannot progress, go back, flip the switch and run foward again!
It's even more unnecessary when the level is black, its the only obstacle so far in the level, it's zoomed in too much, and the camera doesn't even show it changing from red to green! It could be a completely different block and the player wouldn't notice the difference.
- Player can jump over weapon remover.
- Also do not need a camera for the next switch. The darn thing is right in view, no more than a sackboy step away.
*contains rage*
- The same thing again on the next switch. My oh my.
- Colour switches. What do the circular lights have to do with anything?
They are distracting from the "puzzle" which makes people over think it. Rawr.
- Might be a bit dark on the last bounce pad/bubble combo section. It's hard to see sackboy (had to hold L1).
- Decorate your scoreboard.

You also have some 2 plane/layer shifting throughout that distracts from the pace of the level.
I feel it would be in your best interest to play my level (in sig).

EDIT:
It means when sackboy runs into a wall, he changes layer twice in one spot.

EDITEDIT:
No prob, glad you are open to constructive criticism. 		2011-02-23 04:09:00

Author:
midnight_heist
Posts: 2513

The level is really well done, looks like you spent alot of time of it and its visuals make it unique to everything else i've played. Its fun to play and nice to look at, its a shame its got so few plays, it seems like it could easily get picked, its got puzzles and its a long platformer, people like these kind of levels. I like the song you used to, it suits the level. I really don't have anything to say that could help you update this level and make it any better, nice job!2011-02-23 04:13:00

Author:
reiko57
Posts: 115

All the bugs should be fixed now.2011-02-23 08:33:00

Author:
creator22
Posts: 162

Thanks for the help midnight. 2011-02-23 16:23:00

Author:
creator22
Posts: 162

Very relaxing and cool platforming! And extra points for R?yksopp
Didn't have any issues whatsoever... This is just minor details, but a couple of times, the flow is interrupted by having to manually change layers.

Still, 		2011-02-23 18:52:00

Author:
Discosmurf
Posts: 210

Pics added. 2011-02-23 23:31:00

Author:
creator22
Posts: 162

Bump after a day.2011-02-25 12:18:00

Author:
creator22
Posts: 162

Bump after another day.2011-02-26 16:28:00

Author:
creator22
Posts: 162

I just played your colourful level and absolutely enjoyed it. The platforming was fun from start to finish and the visuals are unique and very beutiful. Cant find anything bad to say.

Id love it if you try my level and leave feedback in the thread.
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=50942-Stronghold-of-the-Lost-Empire		2011-02-26 18:04:00

Author:
hitman_472
Posts: 52


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