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Hamaska

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HamashkaButter-Kicker
A new Level from Butter-Kicker and the first in a series
This is my First professional level as I am getting Rid of Forgotten Fields for a Slightly newer Version of Forgotten Fields, but this is Hamashka where you will learn that Tales Mean Nothing, Myths mean the world. Without Myths The world would mean nothing, Please Don't leave too harsh FeedBack but tell me any Problems with this level and I will Update the level. Level will be followed up by Acorns soon. (Please May I have a Volunteer to take Pictures of this level and Send them to me please)
2011-02-21 11:12:00

Author:
butter-kicker
Posts: 1061


heyho butter! this was a nice level with decent platforming but it lacked detail, stickers and the scoreboard could be in a better place
I gave you :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: for encouragement

oh and what photos of the level would you like taken? eg. place ect
2011-02-21 11:46:00

Author:
jimydog000
Posts: 813


Can you take a picture at the climbing bit the electric floor bit and the LBPC bit Please and thanks a ton for the feedback

too bad your the only won two plays 3 stars
2011-02-21 12:27:00

Author:
butter-kicker
Posts: 1061


I definatley must give this a go!2011-02-21 15:23:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Sounds good pal, will try it tonight.2011-02-21 16:56:00

Author:
JetArtois
Posts: 232


Hey man. Yeah not bad, but quite short. I thought the level could of been a bit longer, just getting into it then it slows down and the end comes, but i guess you are carrying it on with Acorns. A bit more sticker action would of been nice like jim said and the scoreboard was in a strange place. There was one part when i got crushed by the stone door (my fault, didnt move fast enough) and when i came out of the reset point i fell all the down to the games background floor. I restarted the level and it was fine then so not sure what went on there. All in all though matey, not bad, little basic but then again so are mine. Interested to see how the story/series unfolds dude.2011-02-22 20:32:00

Author:
JetArtois
Posts: 232


My Feedback?

The Bad

A 'Lil short
-A tad on the short side, wouldn't you agree?-

The Good

Material Cohesiveness
The materials blended together magnicifently-

Lovely Level Design
-Everything worked as it would in a movie, Perfect-

The Overall feel
-The feeling of this level was kind of cool, throughout-

The What

Which one is it?
-You Wrote "Hamaska" on the level's Title and "Hamashka" in the level thread-

Hamska?
-What does hamaska mean anyway?-

The Verdict
:star::star::star::star::star:
Splendid Job My Dear Boy

Since this is your BEST level, I'll heart it when I go back on LBP PSP.


?
Just joking, you can use it if you want.
2011-02-23 15:47:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Thanks questor, I love the style of review it's epic2011-02-23 16:19:00

Author:
butter-kicker
Posts: 1061


here goes ...
*playing*
AWESOME=:star::star::star::star::star:+<3
new high-score is owned by me
question: wheres page two?

please play my levels too and leave some feedback
2011-02-23 20:06:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


I'm really busy with school right now, I'll give ya some pics on the weekend 'k?2011-02-23 21:14:00

Author:
jimydog000
Posts: 813


?

Just joking, you can use it if you want.

Lol.

Anyways I'll try your level out later Butter and leave you some feedback here! If you want you can give some feedback on PSP Mario 2010 but it's not required I enjoy giving feedback

One question: Hamaska? How'd you come up with that? It's cool I'm just curious.
2011-02-23 21:23:00

Author:
WoodburyRaider
Posts: 1651


Hamaska is A old saying Of peace And Adventure I just searched up some words to do with the following subject and this appeared and seemed Perfect

*edit* if you guys gave it five stars then someone must of gave it one because its rated 3 stars.
2011-02-24 09:27:00

Author:
butter-kicker
Posts: 1061


Hamaska is A old saying Of peace And Adventure I just searched up some words to do with the following subject and this appeared and seemed Perfect

*edit* if you guys gave it five stars then someone must of gave it one because its rated 3 stars.

That's a pretty cool name and a great way to find it

As for your level rating I've had levels that have had a 2 star rating and like 5 plays. I figure it's because of some little LBP fairies prancing around getting stuck in levels and rating them low because they're not talented enough to get through. In short, don't worry about it. If you want you can re-update it with fixes that you get from feedback once you have an idea on what you need to work on. Oh and I'll leave you some feedback tonight I gotta get goin now
2011-02-24 11:30:00

Author:
WoodburyRaider
Posts: 1651


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