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Cardbord City (Unique Car Survival) UPDATE 1.17

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So this is my first LBP(2) Release.
In this level you have to dodge the cars.
If one crashes you, you will die.
Press L1 to sprint. If you do that, your sprint bar will raise.
If its full, you won't be able, to sprint anymore.
This Level is Multiplayer Compatible.

I'm open for feedback and critic and update this regulary!
Please Que, play and review it
http://lbp.me/v/x0kx1k

<3Wohlerzock
2011-02-20 02:04:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


No one wanna play it? ):
Im doing F4F.
2011-02-20 03:59:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


Ha pretty funny man, I guess, gimmie more sprint? I would make a bigger map and maybe checkpoints to aim for to build a bigger score, you could do a lot of things with it.2011-02-20 04:34:00

Author:
reiko57
Posts: 115


Played it. It's a cool idea that I would definetly try again so I say YAY. I just think it needs more work. The beginning starts off weird as you roll into your thing. Plus I can see the speech bubbles ( which I couldn't read anyway- too small) I would add some more camera to it, to open up the level more. If possible make the cars smarter. I was able to hide out in a corner for a while before they finally got me

Check out mine
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=50177-Smooth-Getaway
2011-02-20 05:09:00

Author:
Unknown User


Thanks for the Feedback.
In the next Update i will Fix some Bugs, and do some Changes to the Map.
(And maybe some car-logic changes.

@Vinny Your Level is qued.
2011-02-20 10:59:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


UPDATE 1.02
-Bug fixes
-little Map Changes
-Car AI changes ( not that big, too)
-You get more points now.
2011-02-20 13:02:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


Good level, but I know this is already mentioned above but the map needs to be bigger and maybe increase the sprint meter. Try and also add some power ups which always make gameplay much more better than the same repetitive consistency.2011-02-21 09:42:00

Author:
TheDesertDrifter
Posts: 72


yea Next Update should be for you.
If you reache like 800 Ponits Or something your Sprint Bar will reset.
So you still can't just sprint trough the level,
but still have a chance to reach higher scores.
2011-02-21 13:11:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


OK UPDATE IS THERE
If you reach 700, 1400, 2200 or 3000 Points, your Sprint Bar will reset.
Please try it out and I bet you wont beat my highscore
Gimme Feedback, i will Update this level!
2011-02-21 18:59:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


AAh, come on people.
I have a open ear for feedback and critism and I update this level regularely
2011-02-21 20:04:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


I thought this was a great level.

But your main problem is the difficulty of the cars. You just cant survive without sprint, and theres no way you can make it to 700 points for a reset without it. I think what you should do is incorporate a variety of cars. So have less emit at once, and slower emitting, and have them slower cars and maybe smaller. Then once the player reaches a certain score level, say 500, have a new type of car come out that is slightly larger, a different colour or shape and a bit faster, but fewer of this type emitting.

Then at say 1000 points you should do the same again, and maybe add in some bonus enemy vehicles like trucks or buses that are much larger and harder to escape from.

Another idea would be to have bonus stars or barrels or something that you can pick up that will reduce your sprint bar, that way you have more objectives instead of just surviving.

But i really liked the idea and with improvements it could be much more fun and addicting!

Id appreciate it if you could take a look at my mini-game, link in my sig.
2011-02-23 12:21:00

Author:
Steve
Posts: 134


Thanks for your feedback Steve! For me it's no problem to get 700 Points, but i'm the creator so yea.^^
Ok first I will make the cars slower, and reduce the emmiting a little bit.
Hope that makes the Level a bit easier and mor enjoyable.
Oh and I like the idea with those Stars, I think i will make different, ones.

I will checkout your minigame!
2011-02-23 13:40:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


OK, NEW UPDATE! 1.05
It should be a bit easier now, and if you reach 500 Points
there will be a new big yellow car want to kil youl.
Please tell me if its easy enough now.
2011-02-23 14:42:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


I shall play it again later! My little bro played it (hes generally much better than me lol) and he got the high score, so maybe i just suck ha ha.

Thanks for playing my level but if you could leave some feedback in the thread on things you would like adjusted/changed or you think need to be improved, i would be grateful!
2011-02-23 16:06:00

Author:
Steve
Posts: 134


you mean the highscore of 1000?
he got that highscore with the new version I think, because after I updated it i saw someone playing it and breaking the highscore.

Yea, I wanted to leave feedback, but how I can see the Level is made for multiplayer, so
I decidet to leave my feedback to your thread when I played your level with a friend.
2011-02-23 17:34:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


Just played this (quite a few times! ), you've managed to get that just one more go feel.

Needs a little more graphical polish although I guess it is called cardboard city (could add a title screen though), the gameplay is simple but good.

For some reason the sprintbar didnt reset at 2200 or 3000 points for me either.
2011-02-23 18:02:00

Author:
Shinogi
Posts: 31


Thx for the feedback, i will look for that bug.
Maybe i just change the streets Material, so the Buildings are still cardboard.
2011-02-23 18:19:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


Ohh, cool Yeah its much better multi player.

Cant wait to play it again later!
2011-02-23 19:35:00

Author:
Steve
Posts: 134


Nice level but a little difficult. The cars are a bit too fast and so fast is how I died 2011-02-23 20:50:00

Author:
TimeH33
Posts: 51


I played it a few times and found the learning curve a bit steep. It seems the key to this one is remembering the pattern. Never got over 300 points. As has already been said the boost seems very important for survival but unless you sit and play over and over to get the pattern down you may never get the points needed for it. I would suggest starting off slow and ramp up as the game moves a long. Release 3 cars and the player, if they live and the 3 die start another wave. Say 4 this time. They live again the next wave is 6. Then 6 more but faster cars then before and so on.2011-02-24 11:11:00

Author:
lochnar
Posts: 59


Thx 4 Feedback. But i dont know what I should do.
Because some says the difficulty is perfect or even to easy, and some say it's to hard.
I think about the idea with the waves.
2011-02-24 14:56:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


Played it again.

Not sure if its easier now or im just more used to it but i did get on better.

However i still think it needs much more variety, because its a little too simple at the moment in my opinion. Try what i said with the different cars maybe, or even make it so that there are random barriers that apper and will kill you if you touch them, forcing you to go a different way.
2011-02-24 21:04:00

Author:
Steve
Posts: 134


yea, I already made a third car for the level, but Its not in the upadte
And yea it should be easier.
cars speed was 9, now 8.2 or something and i reduced the cars that get emmited.
btw i wanted to play your level today, but i couldn't connect to the lbp server o.o (?)
I played it one time with my sister, had fun, wanted to play more but she was tired and has been gone to sleep.
2011-02-24 22:25:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


UPDATE 1.06
little "intro"
you can quickstart and destroy the walls in the beginning with square now.
bug fixes
2011-02-25 16:29:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


Update 1.07
added some stupid music
if someone wanna make good music for this level, he can PM me or add me on PSN
2011-02-26 17:13:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


just played it

Idea : Awesome
Design : Ok, but you really could make it looking better
Other stuff i like : Gameplay very stable! and the movments of your character really good.
Suggestion : Make the sprint reloading without sprint it crazy hard to dont get hit by a car ^^

good job for your first creation! Keep going and you'll get better and better.
2011-02-26 20:36:00

Author:
Unknown User


Yea my level just got a new update. 1.08
City Design Changes, and the Sprintbar is reloading every 700 Points (700, 1400, 2100...)
Please play it again and say if its better
2011-02-26 20:41:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


I played it again.

Liked the bar you have put beneath the reset to show how close you are to it, really helps.

Although i still think you need some kind of bonus points in the level.

Its definitely improving though!
2011-02-26 22:31:00

Author:
Steve
Posts: 134


Ok UPDATE 1.09
There are now Bonus points, that appear every 6-12 seconds, and give you 100 Points if you touch them
2011-02-26 23:12:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


Awesome!

Also if you want to, i think it would be awesome to have more than three types of car, so you have less of each type but the same amount overall. Maybe have slow things like bulldozers or dustbin trucks and fast motorbikes?

Just a thought.
2011-02-26 23:18:00

Author:
Steve
Posts: 134


I just get mowed down, lol its like the oppisite of my level (in sig, im sure you can guess which one)

edit: did you make the music on your level?
2011-02-26 23:27:00

Author:
reiko57
Posts: 115


Thx for the feedback
@Steve
Cool idea, i think about that, but the problem is, my level would need whole new logic for the car emmiting

@reiko
Yes, I made the music for my level.
Do you think it's still to hard?^^
Qued your level feedback will come
2011-02-26 23:55:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


UPDATE 1.10
If you reach 1000 Points, there will be a new car, that wants to kill you
A bit easier now, Boost reloads faster now.
car-emitting is a little bit smaller now, so little you won't recognize it
2011-02-27 12:47:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


BIG UPDATE 1.11
you can Sprint longer now, the difficulty got improved.
first easy later hard!
And an overall Car Balancing Improve!
2011-02-27 15:48:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


Update 1.12
Difficulty got improved even more
2011-02-27 18:15:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


Update 1.14
Difficulty improved even more
There is now a magic mouth for multiplayer people, so they know what do do,
to make sure everything works fine.
2011-02-28 20:07:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


Yea just a quick update.
It fixed a bug, which made the level a lot harder.
Play it again if you like to
2011-03-15 18:57:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


1.17 quick Update
Menu added
2011-03-23 22:31:00

Author:
Wohlerzock
Posts: 50


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