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3.1.0.1 (LBP2) (Returning Feedback asap!)

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Single Player ONLY.

http://lbp.me/v/x29ygv

Introduction level:
After 750 years orbiting a Super-massive Black hole, a perserved pilot (you) must grasp his last chance of returning to planet Earth.
2011-02-19 11:05:00

Author:
drei
Posts: 158


Why are the pictures not working d;2011-02-19 12:13:00

Author:
drei
Posts: 158


Having trouble finding the lvl. results for your PSN richochet-drei. don't match with your levels listed here. Searched 3.1.0.1 and found one with simpliar description, PSN doesn't match though. Dont we just post level links? Im new here

Well I played 3.1.0.1 for 30 minutes trying to finish. Once I got to the the fallen rubble with the electricity the problems started. Took me a long time to figure out how to get the fingerprint, then even try to find where to use it. All the while dying and having to run ALL through the level again ( which looks great btw ) at some points. There is a word thats just says ****** in the messages near Where u get the fingerprint. Check if it's censored. Also The message near the maintenance about ISA gets annoying after 20 times passing it. Just make things more clear. It's tough judging what to do and where I should be going. After I finally made it past the awkward rubble I got stuck to the right of the computers in a gap that should be closed off. Cant get out once you fall in. Had i just taken the teleporter thing up I'd be good lol. Just make it run more smooth and I'll try again and be able to rate it properly

Check mine at
http://lbp.me/v/xybq69

Thanks for the feedback
2011-02-19 12:45:00

Author:
Unknown User


Ok I Updated it and fixed the bugs you addressed, try again vinny? :O2011-02-19 20:41:00

Author:
drei
Posts: 158


1st off it took me awhile to find the level... I would recommend using the LBP.me to upload a direct link to it here.

Once I found your level IT started out really visually pretty.
As Vinny--- stated the room with the electricity and rubble was were all the problems started. I spent about 20 minutes trying to figure out what to do, After that I honestly gave up. I was so frustrated at getting killed over and over at the same spot trying to find how to get past it, and the siren was starting to give me a headache after so long of listening to it. I would love to see the rest of the level but you need to make things a little more clear as to what to do to progress.

Please F4F my level Crystal Sky Chronicles (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=50206-Crystal-Sky-Chronicles&p=781514)
2011-02-19 21:02:00

Author:
Unknown User


Yea THRE IS A TELEPORTER MAYBE 5 PIXELS away from the asteroids that hit, it's really big how could you miss it...?2011-02-19 21:31:00

Author:
drei
Posts: 158


It's not that we didn't see the teleporter, I just had no idea to think to grab the thing to charg it up initially.

Ill gladly playbit again, np. Just as soon as you get around to returning the favor
2011-02-19 21:52:00

Author:
Unknown User


Vinny: Well I had added a magic mouth to direct you when she played it, I played your level bout to review it.2011-02-19 23:06:00

Author:
drei
Posts: 158


Still running into problems here. The rubble is still way to awkward to cross. Dont get me wrong it looks cool but trying to pass it does not feel right. It feels like I'm not supposed to be there. Anytime I get passed it just feels like I got lucky an idk how i did it honestly. Way too many deaths here still. So I get into the teleporter thing finally this time, and then die somehow behind the big comp after the cutscenes. Now gotta go all the way back to the rubble lol. Then the level went all black and white and I go put into this area where I used fingerprint again to unlock the grabinaters. The cool style an presentation I like about this level started showing again and I got really excited again.... Only to find out I'm stuck in this area...again. Nothing to grabinate to, or walk, or jump to. Idk. This level needs work. You gotta really test it out ALOT more. It looks great but plays terrible. Sorry but it's gotta be said2011-02-20 04:43:00

Author:
Unknown User


No other people have played it and loved it now that fixed all the bugs, I think maybe your were a little to quick to quit this time but w/e u go off into space once you get the grabbinator and swing on asteroids... I'd ask you to play it again but I know I wouldn't have the patience too if that happened to me..,?2011-02-20 05:07:00

Author:
drei
Posts: 158


This is not a bump...2011-02-20 10:56:00

Author:
drei
Posts: 158


This is not a bump either (promise)2011-02-22 05:52:00

Author:
drei
Posts: 158


- Why gas death? We have death-less teleporters now in LBP2.
- I agree about the rubble.
It's hard (I have no idea how to pass it) and combined with running to get to it each time you die, and that gosh darn alarm (I had to mute my tv) it gets a little annoying.
It doesn't even look possible to pass.

Looks great (like you other levels), but I would ease up on the rubble difficulty.
And I do want to see more to see what you have done with the new LBP2 tools, as they could really add to your style of levels.
No feedback required.
2011-02-22 08:33:00

Author:
midnight_heist
Posts: 2513


Deathless teleporters??? Really? Explain please2011-02-22 23:18:00

Author:
drei
Posts: 158


Ok I fixed the "rubble" (asteroids that hit since the I.A.S was turned offline) without takeing off looks, runs alot smoother now, as well as some other things people mentioned, I fixed em. Now if somebody would please play my level, finish it, and give me some feedback. AFTER FINISHING IT D:

I'll review any of yours.
2011-02-23 00:40:00

Author:
drei
Posts: 158


Deathless teleporters??? Really? Explain please
Yeah, you have a sensor switch attached to an emitter.
The emitter emits an invisible (auto enter) controllinator which then spits you back out.

I played it again.
I see now the first rubble is meant to be impossible (without grapple). Make it so it looks 100% impossible to the player. For example no gaps in the hazards.
(I didn't hold the console during my last play)
- The lightning/electricity coming off the rubble in unpredictable, leading to cheap deaths.
- Censored magic mouths.
+ Bug scare! Nice.
- A bit too much walking for my taste.
At black and white section, if you go to the right you fall down to your death which you can't prevent.
- Typo on "pressurizing".
- "...is back online, I just need to..." magic mouth goes by too quickly.
- "Destination Earth breached" magic mouth. I assume it's meant to be "reached"?
- "****** atmosphere" (entering) is censored.
- Lethal dismount from controllinator.
+ Earth!


Most important suggestions:
- Tell the player to hold R1 on console at the start. (case and point the post after this one)
- Non-lethal teleporting please. I'm sure there are plenty of tutorials on LBPC and in game.
- I don't know if anyone has mastered this yet, but skippable magic mouths on sequencers don't play out so well.
Plus fix all censored words.
If you perfect those, your level/s greatly benefit.
(this creator has some nice visuals people)

No feedback required, but you should check out my level anyway. It may help you a little.
Oh, and add a LBP.me link + pictures on this thread.
I guarantee your level will get more attention/feedback.

EDIT:
Well yeah, they are censored. You need to replace them with some synonyms.
2011-02-23 03:36:00

Author:
midnight_heist
Posts: 2513


Angiefaramarzii? that was the name of the author of the level I played, anyway theres a room like with electricity randomly sparking back and fourth, its impassable, seems like a cool idea i'd like to be able to play it, sorry i can only get fried so many times2011-02-23 04:55:00

Author:
reiko57
Posts: 115


Hm ok thanks, but how am I suppose to fix those bleeped out words, their spelled correctly.2011-02-27 22:11:00

Author:
drei
Posts: 158


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