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Neon maze - complete darkness

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I made it a while ago but forgot to post it - have fun!
http://lbp.me/v/tqvx6m
2011-02-18 00:34:00

Author:
Julianotis1
Posts: 110


I'll queue it and play it tomorrow, er, technically today (1:30am). You might want to put some more description or screenshots to entice others to want to play your level. Look for feedback later this weekend.2011-02-19 06:25:00

Author:
getyourwings5
Posts: 35


This level is OK. The concept of a jetpack maze is a fun; allows for multi-path options.

A couple things I could suggest:

1. Make it longer - I actually picked the right path on the first try. When I played a second time to see the other paths, there wasn't much. Maybe make the timer longer and fill out more of the level space.

2. Include some interactions - this doesn't need to be a variation of the R1 race levels, but a few sounds or switches could make it interesting. Try placing a proximity switch near a deadend and have it give a subtask failed sound. The level title includes "total darkness," so maybe some lighting effects would spice it up.

3. Try varying the neon colors in the level. The maze is a lot of red. Multiple colors of neon would look interesting and also possibly add a good amount of confusion to those navigating the maze.

Hope this helps. If you make any adjustments to the level, let me know and I will play again.
2011-02-19 14:14:00

Author:
getyourwings5
Posts: 35


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