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the forgotten forest series

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You wonder into a uncharted forest. You do not know where you are and think your all alone intill you hear a noise in the distance and realize your not alone. You feel scared and worried. Can you go threw this forest and find civilization. part 1 of 3 also i posted credits If your curious who helped I have working on this for a wile I hope you will enjoy
http://lbp.me/u/WESFUN/levels
http://lbp.me/v/xxpnem
http://lbp.me/v/xxpm8h
http://lbp.me/v/xxpkcn
2011-02-17 20:36:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


I cant click the link 2011-02-17 20:38:00

Author:
EinRobot
Posts: 739


updated it2011-02-17 20:40:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


Link doesn't work2011-02-17 21:00:00

Author:
OriginalCreator
Posts: 217


strange very strange
ill try again
I edited it with my published levels link it doesnt work for some reason.
2011-02-17 21:02:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


Wow, that was a great job! Very interesting visual style and gameplay, I enjoyed it very much. One thing I really liked was the music... Kudos to you for making very good original soundtracks! The cave music of the first level was my favorite...(It reminded me very much of the Crash Bandicoot music). One thing you'd probably want to change are the sound effects played in the beginning of your first level... They are fine for the intro you have, but they keep playing non-stop as you continue to the little water puzzle, and it gets a bit annoying after a while (plus it makes the music hard to hear). Perhaps you could make them end when you spawn? Additionally, it wouldn't hurt to add some background with the back thin layer... Or maybe put flat clouds or something, because the sky seems pretty blank. The other visuals, however, were fantastic and well done. All in all, great job!2011-02-19 03:38:00

Author:
Jdsfrog
Posts: 97


thanks for the feedback ill keep that in mind when I edit my series.2011-02-20 06:25:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


Loved the letters appearing across the trees
to much forest noise to many loud croking and bird noise. the wildlife sounds are to over whelming by the pond with yellow blue and red floaty switches
had to mute tv to play
the camera angle by the u shaped spike trap past the red light makes geting jump just right tad bit difficult
right befor the part 2 level link the buildings with the sackbots on fire i was able to jump over roof tops even though looks like you had them set up for doging unless suppose to go over roof tops might want to prevent that route
part2:
the red green yellow blue puzzle was difficult due to game making me grab the lower switches when i was trying to grab rotating wheels
the 2 wheels with 4 fire poles in the shaft you fall through next would be better iff you tok off 1 fire pole from each
the platforms wher the fire blocks follow a pateren the stairs are to close to the platform on the right making the turn back jump a little harsh
on the slide parts double check the distance on a couple of the slides the momentem kept sending me into laval.
after slide the smashing pillars are a little to fast and slightly out of sync making jumping with out being squashe or falling to your doom nearly impossible
2 swings in the middle seem just a hair to far apart and bouncing fire logs timing needs a hair tweaking
also some reason only every 3rd attemp out of check point do i seem able to grab 1st swing up to 20th respawn by fire swings
also checkpoint needs sensor or be closer to edghe as i let go of last swing just barely slipped off other edghe after 30th try to swing across and with the next spawn point not activating was kinda fustrating.
add hair more wait to floating triangles as the seemed a hair difficult to pull under water
part 3:
at this point by some tiki look guy and fire logs rolling down hill it wasnt clear what else to do i tried going back up jumping fire logs but switch didnt do anything else
over all though looks nice but some of the obsticles were a little to challenging i look foward to playing it again soon

please play
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=50259-One-salt-shooter-1-to-4-player-top-down&p=781986#post781986
2011-02-20 07:45:00

Author:
TSFRJ
Posts: 249


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