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meteor blaster

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i made this level with space theme is about a minigame that the user controls a spaceship to destroy meteors and survive as long as you can

im very open mind and i will consider your opinions to improve my level and i hope you like it

thanks

update

im working on the spaceship camera and the fire rate
im working on adding more enemies
working on the meteors color
http://lbp.me/v/xp7v71
http://ia.lbp.me/img/ft/16ab381e3de6766bb6b37c111502b36743dc1e7d.jpg
http://i7.lbp.me/img/ft/f4762ed660b62514d2da9bed795e0d354550a2d3.jpg
http://ib.lbp.me/img/ft/1fb473ec3d75bd7baa758ca3b0cc01201068efdd.jpg
http://lbp.me/v/KRXninja		2011-02-13 17:32:00

Author:
KRX
Posts: 110

i recommend you make the screen zoomed out more cuz i cant see the meteors coming at me
and when they're on the screen its too late to go for them and get the points

the shooting/ rate of fire i think u should make it like the flight of the bumblebees where u can hold it for a steady rate of fire
and 1shot for spam, ya know


https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=49315-TRON-Light-Cycle-Battle-%28versus%29		2011-02-14 01:53:00

Author:
sonofbrave
Posts: 107

Thanks for your feedback.
i'll update it as soon as possible		2011-02-14 18:40:00

Author:
KRX
Posts: 110

Hey i just played your level and enjoyed it. Sometimes i couldnt see the meteors before it was too late and it would certainly be better with more enemies but other than that i liked it.
Can you try my level and leave some feedback please?
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=50942-Stronghold-of-the-Lost-Empire		2011-02-25 23:39:00

Author:
hitman_472
Posts: 52

I queued it, but it will have to wait till next week since I'm going away for a week.

F4F: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=47909-Frantic		2011-02-26 00:04:00

Author:
Voganlight
Posts: 60

Hey i just played your level and enjoyed it. Sometimes i couldnt see the meteors before it was too late and it would certainly be better with more enemies but other than that i liked it.
Can you try my level and leave some feedback please?
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=50942-Stronghold-of-the-Lost-Empire

yeah i queue it
what kind of enemies i should add?		2011-02-26 02:56:00

Author:
KRX
Posts: 110

I queued it, but it will have to wait till next week since I'm going away for a week.

F4F: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=47909-Frantic

i queue your level and dont worry about it 		2011-02-26 02:59:00

Author:
KRX
Posts: 110

I liked it, its mega easy. The meteors are super dark though, I just never quit tapping X and I did good. I always measure space shooter types against Vectroids (my favorite level in LBP2) which isn't fair, but I think some faster brighter looking meteors, a faster rate of fire for the weapon, and moving enemy ships would make this a sweet level. A little presure makes people like a level more i think. my f4f thread is in sig ty.2011-02-26 05:19:00

Author:
reiko57
Posts: 115

I liked it, its mega easy. The meteors are super dark though, I just never quit tapping X and I did good. I always measure space shooter types against Vectroids (my favorite level in LBP2) which isn't fair, but I think some faster brighter looking meteors, a faster rate of fire for the weapon, and moving enemy ships would make this a sweet level. A little presure makes people like a level more i think. my f4f thread is in sig ty.

ok thanks for your feedback
i queue your level		2011-02-26 20:38:00

Author:
KRX
Posts: 110

what material can i use for the meteors?2011-02-27 18:20:00

Author:
KRX
Posts: 110

Hey! I played this a long while ago, but left my feedback in game.

I said:
"Simple concept, very well executed. Old school arcadey feel - perhaps some additional hazards, enemies or a boss could add some excitement?"

Sorry for the delay in bringing it to this thread!		2011-02-28 16:42:00

Author:
Unknown User

Hey! I played this a long while ago, but left my feedback in game.

I said:
"Simple concept, very well executed. Old school arcadey feel - perhaps some additional hazards, enemies or a boss could add some excitement?"

Sorry for the delay in bringing it to this thread!

yeah i read thanks for your feed your feedback		2011-02-28 20:13:00

Author:
KRX
Posts: 110

I just queued it, please check out my level

https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=51244-Journey-To-Mysterious-Mountain-(Screens-and-Video-coming-soon)		2011-02-28 22:09:00

Author:
Unknown User

Nice level and concept too. The only things I can think of is that you could make it so that the ammo doesn't get affcted by the ships movement, and you should decorate the level a bit more.2011-03-04 14:12:00

Author:
Potunator
Posts: 58

Nice level and concept too. The only things I can think of is that you could make it so that the ammo doesn't get affcted by the ships movement, and you should decorate the level a bit more.

Thanks ill work on it		2011-03-04 18:42:00

Author:
KRX
Posts: 110

hi you!
i played your level! i liked it! just got some things to say:

1: don't make it this deep blue on black. that hurts in the eyes (for the text)
2: the zoomed in text is not necessary when you come back from the tutorial info
3: it took only half a minute and i was on the ground of your level... bug? better prevent this
4: hitting the walls? thats space not walls better do something without moving the ship and without hitting sound!
5: why can you reach the red hologramm end? you should prevent this as well! maybe just moving left and right? or something else?

fazit: i'm sorry i can not say much about your level. i just see that you getting started with lbp2 but don't tested your level for fun, for bugs, and don't looked what you could do better. you allways should play your own level to see if you like it for your self. do you have fun playing this level? or do you just got fun to build it but not more?

(sorry for the hard words, i don't mean them in a bad way! i hope i help you with them!)
i see you can do something! but you need to work a lot on it! a little bit more hun! keep it up! do more! *hug*

for f4f plz go here: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=51868-Skunk-Bunny-Adventures-Swifown-Chronicles-%28long-single-player-english-german%29 thank you!^^		2011-03-04 19:51:00

Author:
ForcesWerwolf
Posts: 475

hi you!
i played your level! i liked it! just got some things to say:

1: don't make it this deep blue on black. that hurts in the eyes (for the text)
2: the zoomed in text is not necessary when you come back from the tutorial info
3: it took only half a minute and i was on the ground of your level... bug? better prevent this
4: hitting the walls? thats space not walls better do something without moving the ship and without hitting sound!
5: why can you reach the red hologramm end? you should prevent this as well! maybe just moving left and right? or something else?

fazit: i'm sorry i can not say much about your level. i just see that you getting started with lbp2 but don't tested your level for fun, for bugs, and don't looked what you could do better. you allways should play your own level to see if you like it for your self. do you have fun playing this level? or do you just got fun to build it but not more?

(sorry for the hard words, i don't mean them in a bad way! i hope i help you with them!)
i see you can do something! but you need to work a lot on it! a little bit more hun! keep it up! do more! *hug*

for f4f plz go here: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=51868-Skunk-Bunny-Adventures-Swifown-Chronicles-%28long-single-player-english-german%29 thank you!^^

thanks for your feedback is very helpfull 		2011-03-04 20:52:00

Author:
KRX
Posts: 110

Alright, I played this a few days ago (so did my daughter). I give it a great review, seems pretty fun and very much like playing an old style shooter in the arcade. I believe I gave it a smile after I was done playing as well.

My suggestions would be to add a bit more color.
And the other was that when I bumped into the side walls, it really broke the flow of the game for me. Maybe do something like an electrical sound , and a spark or something, right now it just feels and sounds like you are bumping into cardboard.

Again, nice level, I really enjoyed it.. but I always try to offer some constructive criticism :-)		2011-03-05 17:39:00

Author:
Unknown User


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