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My Garden Level ^^

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Hey guys, please play my garden level! I don't think it's bad but I guess it is since no one plays it So I would like for you all to play it and rate it, it doesn't matter if you rate it "yay or boo" just leave a comment that lets me know what I need to do to make a better level

Heatex~
http://lbp.me/v/xbjzb-
2011-02-05 06:04:00

Author:
h_tx_52
Posts: 14


BTW, it's kinda of a challenge level, you need to find things to help you go through some parts. There's is always something hidden somewhere close. 2011-02-05 18:09:00

Author:
h_tx_52
Posts: 14


Some pics would be appreciated. 2011-02-05 18:11:00

Author:
Yofig
Posts: 288


hmm I'll try to post some xD2011-02-05 18:19:00

Author:
h_tx_52
Posts: 14


I'll play this now I'll leave my feedback on your level, Could you play the movie in my sig? Thanks2011-02-05 18:59:00

Author:
onaga666
Posts: 293


Thanks for the feedback I will try to do what you said
I really did like your film
2011-02-05 19:28:00

Author:
h_tx_52
Posts: 14


Played your level and I thinkk the tree you have to climb across is a little too tough. I can forsee a lot of people not even figuring that part out and giving you a

The spinning fire wheel. You should have impact sensors on the wheel hooked toa counter to take out the wheel, not just one area of the wheel to shoot. It'll look nicer and work better.

Before the fire gap, put the arrow on top of the spawn and point behind the hill, otherwise it looks like you need to go back left. Not to mention that you are given a paintinator then have to drop it immediately in order to grab something you cannot see. Move the paintinator onto the hill.

Make a better game camera at the fire gap so you can see the thing above (unless you WANT it hidden, but then you're just easter egging along).

Before the boats you can use the hill to jump over the X that takes away the paintinator.

The flower boat was a cool part. Very cute. I also liked you score bubbles being all flowery. Put a gyro on the boats so the don't tip and look awkward.

The part where you go underwater to hit the button, would have been cool if you needed to take that floating part down and have IT hold the button in order to hold that door up.

And I am in agreement with the fact there is too much dissolve material. Use wood, make drawbridges and real doors or even vines blocking the path. I think vines would be great.

Cool ending, liked the little race.
2011-02-06 20:39:00

Author:
RSQViper
Posts: 302


I liked the flower bubbles and flower spawn points.

I have to agree about the fire gaps. Use a camera to show the target.
I also agree about the floating bit. I took it down there and was confused when it didn't fit over the button. I had to go back down for it after I came back up.

F4F https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=48072-Circus-Minimus-Maximus
2011-02-06 22:00:00

Author:
OrangeTroz
Posts: 90


Ok updated! Please check it out! ^^2011-02-16 19:18:00

Author:
h_tx_52
Posts: 14


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