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Starstone Universe

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This is my first Little Big planet 2 level I created and published. It took around a week to design and create to a accurate and neat standard. The scenery was described as excellent, but the level is a little short. I am willing to go back, re-create any of the level, or any of my levels i publish to match any of the suggestions or errors you find in game to make it a much more enjoyable experience for you and for everyone else. The level was designed based on scenery, with close attention to detail. The story for those who like that is, you are in a shaft, heading down to the lower decks of a spaceship while orbiting a newly discovered planet. You are attack by what you can only call " those things". The level contains puzzles, movie to gameplay camera changing sequences and a ending movie.

Any levels you want me to review, and give suggestions about i'd prefer it if you were to contact me in-game with a message telling me what level you want me to try, and also leaving feedback on my level reviews.

My PSN name is RacingCreed.

I will however check this forum every few days, but to get me to review your levels faster, on the same day as you posted, i recommend you message my PSN.

I will only review your levels if you have already reviewed mine, with honest comments.

Thanks, hope you enjoy my content.
Keep an eye out for my new up-coming level "Bounce Pad Level 1". To be published within the next week.

Much appreciated,

RacingCreed.
http://lbp.me/v/w66e4v
2011-02-01 23:06:00

Author:
Unknown User


Played this earlier and couldnt pass it! didn't happy or sad face it though cos i can see it's good it just needs to be fixed in places::
I got killed on the elevator up to the rotating wheel puzzle by some gas (easily fixed) but i couldn't complete the puzzle itself! For one its way to hard to control cos its quiet fast so the ball keeps flying over the gap and in one instance it just got stuck (i took a picture, psn rabbodirect, but it didnt come up on lbp.me for some reason).
Some tips:: Don't do so many movie sequences as they can break up the gameplay if they are quiet slow.
Make the rotating wheel puzzle easier by using a controllinator or making the gaps bigger. I'll play it again next time i'm online and rate it then! Could you please play mine? http://lbp.me/v/xeqtb9
Thanks and I'll post again tomo or the day after
2011-02-02 17:15:00

Author:
Dangerlove
Posts: 88


I played it as well. The room where you first get the controllinator is simply way too dark. I had no idea how to get across that pit, I just stumbled onto the switch by accident. And the elevator kept killing me (once I found that switch). The puzzle was unclear where you are supposed to get the piece. I apparently got it wherever it was supposed to go, because eventually I just stopped and the door was open and I finished the level. Maybe a cut scene when you first go in that room explaining it a bit would be helpful.

I liked the low gravity bit near the beginning and the movie at the end, and the level design seemed well done. I'll definitely give it another go if some of the stuff above is fixed!
2011-02-02 17:26:00

Author:
Dietomaha
Posts: 156


Just played it. A few points of improvement, but I really liked the feel of the starting and ending movies. They just seemed a lot more epic than the action in the middle!

It is a little dark in places which can be fixed. Didn't really care for the lift with the gas bit, wasn't obvious that you had to avoid the ! signs.

I would suggest you add a lot more combat with the "things". I feel like I didn't really see them till the end. Maybe some traps for them to fall into, or more interesting fights with them. The fight in the end movie would be good to play!

Hope that helps. Keep up the good work!
2011-02-02 22:18:00

Author:
Unknown User


Beautiful level, but ... It's too dark! I can't see anything. It took me awhile to realize that that I could avoid the hazards on the elevator. The camera angles are a little too low.2011-02-03 22:50:00

Author:
RagTagPwner
Posts: 344


I played your level, gave you a long review and a .2011-02-05 13:33:00

Author:
Leafy101
Posts: 154


Playing it now, after i'm done i'll leave my feedback on your level reviews ok?
In return could you check out my level in my sig? "when movies go wrong?"
2011-02-05 16:53:00

Author:
onaga666
Posts: 293


Pretty good! You should make the lever at the very beginning more obvious; I couldn't see it at all and only pulled it by accident. It also took me a long time to figure out that I could jump down in the next section.

I liked the flashback but it felt too short to be its own sublevel.

You should change all your movie cameras with transitions so they don't fade the audio out because it makes the music sound bad.

It's kind of unclear what's happening in the story. There are only 3 speech bubbles in the whole level as far as I could find, and I accidentally ran past the last one.

Will you please leave feedback on my new Cave Story level? The link is in my sig. Thanks! [Edit] sorry didn't realize you left your feedback in my level's reviews. Thanks.
2011-02-06 05:55:00

Author:
phort
Posts: 74


i got stuck in the beginning for a while. the scenery is cool and the layout is very creative but there is nowhere near enough light to make the level easily understandable if that was what you were going for.2011-02-06 14:45:00

Author:
yomamma12120
Posts: 11


Thanks for your comments guys, i have tried my best to fix all of these problems, but the darkness thing is hard to judge since i have my brightness on my tv much higher than other players, so for that i can not judge the lighting.

If you want to retry this level, please do so, but i also have a new level i would like you to try, heres the link.

http://lbp.me/v/xk-j9v

Thanks, enjoy!
2011-02-08 21:13:00

Author:
Unknown User


Unfortunately this level was removed due to too many problems and glitches throughout the gameplay.
Apologies for any inconvenience.

However, I would appreciate it if you are to play my level in the signature.

It has been fully tested for errors, smooth gameplay and any faults. It will always be published and updated regually in response to feedback.
2011-02-11 23:03:00

Author:
Unknown User


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