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Treetop Trouble

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Hello!

"Treetop Trouble" is my first LBP2 map, it's a regular platformer with a race in the end.

Hope you'll enjoy it, feedback is appreciated!

Take care.

http://i54.tinypic.com/108i8uu.jpg
http://i51.tinypic.com/2wnbeax.jpg
http://i52.tinypic.com/j81o91.jpg
http://i51.tinypic.com/zkriv7.jpg

http://lbp.me/v/xenycb
2011-02-01 17:26:00

Author:
Jeppe431
Posts: 4


Congrats on your first LBP2 level! Do you have any pics to share with us (it's always a good idea to post pictures if you want to convince people to play your level)? I'll drop it in my queue and tell you what I think when I get to it (probably in a day). 2011-02-01 17:33:00

Author:
Powershifter
Posts: 668


^The dude is right about the pictures.

I'll give it a go later though and tell you what i think. Give the level in my signature a go?
2011-02-01 18:25:00

Author:
LukeCF
Posts: 790


Queued! Please try out my level (in my sig) and tell me what you think, if you get a chance 2011-02-01 19:12:00

Author:
Dietomaha
Posts: 156


Fun level, SUPER frustrating at parts though lol. Some parts just felt flat-out cheap, but it was never bad enough where I gave up before the finish. I liked it overall though.2011-02-01 20:22:00

Author:
Dietomaha
Posts: 156


Queued! Please try out my level (in my sig) and tell me what you think, if you get a chance

I noticed you played my level, so I gave your a try aswell.
It was great! Hearted + Yay!

Added pictures to my post aswell
2011-02-01 20:47:00

Author:
Jeppe431
Posts: 4


Got it in my queue. Please F4F my level as well. Link in sig.2011-02-01 22:37:00

Author:
Pojo_King1987
Posts: 32


Hey Jeppe431! I finally got around to playing this last night. For your first level in LBP2 (and second level overall in both games), I thought you did a great job! I played through it a couple times and didn't come across any glitches. I do have a little bit of constructive criticism, along with some things I really liked:

- When it comes to the design, I thought parts of it were very straight and lacked detail, while other parts were unique and fun to look at. More detail (stickers, objects, tree branches and leaves, etc) throughout would be great.
- There was one part that I felt could use a different camera angle - it was where you bounced across and went inside a leaning tree, then came out only to find spikes. This was definitely a fun gameplay element, but there's almost no way of knowing the spikes are there your first time through. Maybe a slightly different camera angle would help?
- However, I loved your use of bounce pads and score bubbles.
- I wished you would have used the grappling hook more instead of forcing the player to grab + release across the tree tops. Maybe balance it out more .. half grab + release, and the other half use the grappling hook.
- Your choice music was excellent and was even stuck in my head for a while after I played your level - was that an original piece?? If so, nice work
- Along with the bounce pads and score bubbles, the platforming was very fun throughout. I really enjoyed the race at the end as well.

Overall I thought it was a solid level, one that you should be proud of for your first LBP2 project. Keep up the good work
2011-02-03 13:58:00

Author:
Powershifter
Posts: 668


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