Archive: 8 posts

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You play as an astronaut in the first Sackman mission to the moon. Upon landing you find that a Martian and his people are being tormented by an evil beast and his minions. It's up to you to go through his minions, obstacles and eventually take down the beast to free the Martians and find your way back home. I put a lot of hard work into this, about 30 hours or so. I hope you all enjoy it. Feedback is always appreciated. http://lbp.me/v/x98q6g

2011-01-31 13:45:00 Author: Keith Posts: 37

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Queued will leave some feedback after playing, would you try my level and leave some feedback? Link in the sig

2011-01-31 15:20:00 Author: arsenalfan_1995 Posts: 229

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Queued will leave some feedback after playing, would you try my level and leave some feedback? Link in the sig Thanks, I'll do the same now.

2011-02-01 07:00:00 Author: Keith Posts: 37

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Put it in my queue. Please leave some feedback on my level. Link in sig.

2011-02-01 08:03:00 Author: Pojo_King1987 Posts: 32

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Sounds Exciting! I think i'll Queue this one and have a go later Also check out my level link is in Sig

2011-02-01 08:20:00 Author: DesignerLuke Posts: 31

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Thanks guys. I'm going to boot up LBP2 now and play your levels. At the end is a nice boss fight. I wanted to have it a 3 stage boss fight but I maxed out the therm. so I got away with what I could. It was a good learning experience as I never really made a level before.

2011-02-01 09:14:00 Author: Keith Posts: 37

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Hey Keith, I left you some feedback. Overall for what is basically a first time good job. There is definitely a level there. I would just focus on a couple things. The level needs more of a visual style to it. Add stickers and decorations because as it stands it is a little bland. Add some sense of direction in there as well. After I freed the sackbots I didn't know where to go, also on the end fight I was lost as to what I was supposed to do. Fix the walkway at the beginning so you can't fall off if you switch planes. Also try to not use stairs as much as you can, I personally find them annoying especially when they keep coming, lol.

2011-02-01 22:25:00 Author: Pojo_King1987 Posts: 32

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Thanks for the feedback. Those things will definitely be taken into account. It was all a learning experience so any feedback I get helps make me better levels. Thanks once again.

2011-02-02 00:10:00 Author: Keith Posts: 37

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