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Lost Episode 1 - Pilot

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I recently discovered this site. Great site! I'm fairly new to creating levels on LBP. I made 1 level a year ago, but with the new level tools on LBP2, its a LOT more enjoyable for me. I love the tv show Lost, and with the new cinematic tools, it was fun to experiment with that for this level. I'm trying to get better as a level creator so I can make more levels in the Lost series. Enjoy!
http://lbp.me/v/w6f3vm
2011-01-30 17:26:00

Author:
Greensmurfy
Posts: 300


I'm a huge fan of Lost Adding this to my queue!2011-01-30 22:36:00

Author:
hilightnotes
Posts: 1230


This looks great, added to my queue !!!!2011-01-30 22:49:00

Author:
jaboyle
Posts: 23


thanks for offering to give feedback on my level, Doodle Jump! I've never seen an episode of Lost, so forgive me if I'm unsire as to what is happening. I'm writing this as I go along, so bear with me:

Opening scene was nice and mysterious, well done. I have to say, the piston looks out of place on the elevator and the music constantly changing is odd, it'd stick to one or two songs. Um, what do you do with the green ball? I took it with me to the bit with loads of bounce pads, and then just left it and carried on. Also, instead of emmiting a new block when you spray it, why not just use a danger tweaker to turn off the fire? The plane wreck looked very nice. Oh, and the woman that says "I saw smoke in the jungle, it could be *****", yeah, the last word is censored. Oooh, mysterious fog. The woman's sppech dissappears far too quickly though. And that's the end.

Overall, a nice level. Visually it was a bit lacking, though otherwise, it was fun. Please stop changing the music though.
2011-02-01 20:05:00

Author:
kirbyman62
Posts: 1893


I love LOST. It is my favorite show ever. Definitely checkin this out. Please check out my level as well. Link in sig.2011-02-01 22:15:00

Author:
Pojo_King1987
Posts: 32


Thanks for the feedback. I enjoyed both of your levels and left feedback.

For your comments, I've fixed everything you mentioned. The weakest part of my level was the elevator, green ball, bounce pad section, which I got rid of and redesigned. I replaced it with a scene that actually occured in the show, and not the elevator, which never happened in the show heh.

Thanks for the tip about the danger tweaker. Helped a lot.

The word that got censored was cockpit lol. I changed the lingo anyways, but kind of silly that word got censored.

Also, I fixed the speech at the end, so it doesn't end too quickly. I got rid of some music that was too distracting.

And... I added more fire!
2011-02-06 02:42:00

Author:
Greensmurfy
Posts: 300


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