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A Snowball Platformer - By guy12345 and flashanimator

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Ok I know there are a few bugs but there WILL be future updates. STRICLY ONE PLAYER OMG DEFINETLY NOT 2 3 or 4 PLAYER!!!!!!
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I will zoom the camera out.
If I make they snowball go faster, the level will be shorter, should I still fix? Y/N
Sorry I cant make the slope any longer, it will reach the bottom of the level and if I make it less steap, the snowball would just go slower, and I know many of you want the snowball to go faster.
http://lbp.me/v/w4rpm7
2011-01-29 14:07:00

Author:
Unknown User


Queued for later, sounds like a decent level.

when your ready leave feedback on my level? Links in the sig
2011-01-29 14:28:00

Author:
xForrest
Posts: 72


Queue'd for later please play my level in my sig as well 2011-01-29 14:43:00

Author:
Unknown User


Queued, could you F4F my level its in my sig
I fell innto the gap and had to restart? you should make it so you die.
Pretty fun level, a more zoomed out camera would be helpful
2011-01-29 15:08:00

Author:
arsenalfan_1995
Posts: 229


I will be sure to check this out soon! Queued and bookmarked!2011-01-29 17:07:00

Author:
ShamgarBlade
Posts: 1010


Very nice. I think maybe if it was a little faster, but the camera more zoomed out it would be a little better. Also, I don't know if I'm going to be the only one with this problem but I felt like the controls were backwards. I felt like it should be L2 to go away from the camera, and R2 to come closer to the camera. I think it's because if I was the snowball I'd be thinking "left to go in, right to go out" and that translates to the L and R buttons.

My F4F level is in my signature
2011-01-29 17:29:00

Author:
NoddingPenguin
Posts: 71


Nice little mini-game.

Very simple but also fun to play, i like the little inter titles on the gaps and hills too.

It would be nice if the speed increased a bit faster, and maybe if the camera angles changed faster too.

Apart from that its great, and i can't think of much else to say!

If you could check my level out it would be much appreciated! Link in my sig.
2011-01-29 19:06:00

Author:
Steve
Posts: 134


Queuing for later playage. Try out my level in my sig?2011-01-29 20:00:00

Author:
LukeCF
Posts: 790


Just got done playing this level, and I think it's a really great concept with a lot of potential. I pretty much agree with what's been said already, faster speed and a more zoomed out camera would be nice. I would also think about shrinking the snowball somewhat, it feels a little too big.

A longer run would also be cool, maybe you could even have the snowball hit a cliff face and start rolling down from right to left down the mountain? That's just a suggestion, the concept you have going is solid as it is.

All in all this is a great idea and I would look forward to seeing you expand on it, keep up the good work!

Since you're doing F4F would you check out my Zen Mastermind level and leave feedback in its thread at https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=45106-Zen-Mastermind-by-Elijah_Caine? I'd appreciate it!
2011-01-29 20:08:00

Author:
Unknown User


After playing through it twice, here is what I thought:

Menu: 4.5/5
- Very nice job with the menu. Many levels do not even have a menu, so I applaud you for that!

Gameplay: 3.5/5
- It was pretty good for the most part. The camera angle is a little tough because it is hard to see what is coming next. Also, I felt that it was very slow. But other than that, I loved the concept!

Scenery: 3/5
-I would say that the scenery was very simple. There was not too much too it. It was just rock material with the snow material on top of it. But it did match the theme, so I give you props for that.

Sounds: 4/5
- You really can't overcomplicate the sounds on a level like this. I thought the sound effects were good enough and I thought your choice of music was fine.

Overall, great level! It was fun to play! Keep it up. If you could, would you please check out the level in my sig? Thanks.
2011-01-30 00:14:00

Author:
ShamgarBlade
Posts: 1010


Ok sorry about F4F delay. I will have everyone's feedback soon.2011-01-31 21:13:00

Author:
Unknown User


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