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In The House Adventures: Boxed Up

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This is my third created level on LBP2, In Boxed Up you'll play through the short level and at the end find some certain sacks that need saving.
This will be the beginning of a series of levels, which take you through a house, rescuing sacks and whatnot...

For the level you want feedback on, level the level ID in the reply and i'll add it to my queue ASAP

Thanks <3

http://lbp.me/v/w3k7nk
2011-01-28 14:05:00

Author:
xForrest
Posts: 72


Queued the level, can you play mine and leave feedback, link in the sig

Nice level.
I will definitely be trying the later levels in this series.
you should add some music to the level.
2011-01-28 14:08:00

Author:
arsenalfan_1995
Posts: 229


Neat level. A couple things to think about. Maybe make your cinematics into one shot cameras. I found that i had to watch them over and over because i moved one step the wrong way when then cut scene ended. Also on your grapple section maybe switch to hard connections? I was able to totally distort their orientation while swinging, because i was trying to get altitude to see if there was anything up above. Not a bad level though. Hope this helps.2011-01-28 16:09:00

Author:
Unknown User


Thanks for the help guys, I added a few more sounds, as I'm unsure of what music would suit the situation of being in a box :S
as for the camera, they are currently being changed and I've also changed the grapple section for the better
2011-01-28 16:49:00

Author:
xForrest
Posts: 72


Sounds really cool just queued it up I'll tell ya how I like it.


Can you try my level The-Amaze-ing Labyrinth http://lbp.me/v/wy89cx
2011-01-28 17:09:00

Author:
almozd
Posts: 27


It was an ok level. I had fun playing it but it seemed kinda dull. The dullness was enhanced with no music. It didn't really feel like you were in a box.... just a huge cardboard landscape with walls that randomly explode when you go near them. I thought that was a bit random. Overall it was fun but you should add some more err.... scenery, and make it longer. As for the music, try something simple since your in a box like Goody Two Shoes.
Doo doo...doo doo... doo doo doo dooo.... doo doo doo doo.... doo doo... doo doo doo doo~
2011-01-29 11:41:00

Author:
Fumo161
Posts: 210


Yeah Its kinda of hard to make a cardboard box look/feel like a cardboard box, but i'll look into add some background details etc. And i'll add Goody Two Shoes when i go back on the game 2011-01-29 19:13:00

Author:
xForrest
Posts: 72


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