Archive: 6 posts

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Try this one and let me know what u think about it http://lbp.me/v/w2w447

2011-01-26 22:54:00 Author: CharleyWT Posts: 38

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I will try your level and leave you some feedback, would you mind doing the same for me? http://lbp.me/v/w1cn37

2011-01-26 23:31:00 Author: arsenalfan_1995 Posts: 229

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sure queued

2011-01-26 23:33:00 Author: CharleyWT Posts: 38

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Just finished playing, a few suggestions: Some spelling mistakes ex. in the first speech bubble you spelt control "controle" At the mountain of fire a camera angle zoomed out and tilted to the side would be very helpful Avoid slang in your levels and the boat ride at the end was quite long and boring, you should give the player some sort of interesting task to do or just shorten the time on the boat Overall a good platformer this series has potential Im looking forward to the second level.

2011-01-26 23:46:00 Author: arsenalfan_1995 Posts: 229

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Sorry for the mistakes im only a french person who try to write in english lol will try to check for them. The camera at the fire mountain is a good idea and will be fix. I was already trying to think about something more for the boat ride. Thanks for the feedback

2011-01-27 00:13:00 Author: CharleyWT Posts: 38

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You can always add me if you would like help with spelling and help with levels if you would like.

2011-01-27 04:22:00 Author: arsenalfan_1995 Posts: 229

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