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A nice little plateformer
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Try this one and let me know what u think about it ![]() http://lbp.me/v/w2w447 | 2011-01-26 22:54:00 Author: CharleyWT ![]() Posts: 38 |
I will try your level and leave you some feedback, would you mind doing the same for me? http://lbp.me/v/w1cn37 | 2011-01-26 23:31:00 Author: arsenalfan_1995 ![]() Posts: 229 |
sure ![]() | 2011-01-26 23:33:00 Author: CharleyWT ![]() Posts: 38 |
Just finished playing, a few suggestions: Some spelling mistakes ex. in the first speech bubble you spelt control "controle" At the mountain of fire a camera angle zoomed out and tilted to the side would be very helpful Avoid slang in your levels and the boat ride at the end was quite long and boring, you should give the player some sort of interesting task to do or just shorten the time on the boat Overall a good platformer this series has potential ![]() Im looking forward to the second level. | 2011-01-26 23:46:00 Author: arsenalfan_1995 ![]() Posts: 229 |
Sorry for the mistakes im only a french person who try to write in english ![]() ![]() | 2011-01-27 00:13:00 Author: CharleyWT ![]() Posts: 38 |
You can always add me if you would like help with spelling and help with levels if you would like. | 2011-01-27 04:22:00 Author: arsenalfan_1995 ![]() Posts: 229 |
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