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The Spire Part 1

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Hey guys!

So, I just published my second level and it is much different from my first. I wanted something more concise and story oriented, so I based this one of off a sketch I did a few years back that I titled The Spire. Just as a simple synopsis you play as Walt who wakes up in an alley with his head spinning, not sure of what is going on. You try to figure out what has happened, but something isn't right. The looming figure of the Spire is ever present and something is following you in the shadows. I'm really looking for some people to just give me some feedback and let me know what they think because I'm really wanting to continue this story and flesh it out more. Just as a warning, it isn't a point frenzy and it is pretty easy. This first part is to set up the story line a bit, hook players in, and is more puzzle oriented and cinematic if anything. So if some people could just check it out and let me know what you think, I would really appreciate it. Not looking for hearts or positive reviews, just some feedback. Thanks a lot, everybody!

-HD
http://lbp.me/v/w1ycv8
2011-01-26 06:50:00

Author:
Unknown User


Sounds good gonna queue it, do you mind if you can test my level Celestasack Powers Sackbot Test cause i need to start my a sequel to my old level2011-01-26 07:00:00

Author:
TheDesertDrifter
Posts: 72


Just added it to my que. I'll check it out some time tomorrow. Thanks for checking mine out!2011-01-26 08:36:00

Author:
Unknown User


I just played it and left a comment. I don't have any levels I need feedback on myself right now.

~ Blob
2011-01-26 09:12:00

Author:
Blob
Posts: 10


Queueing it up for tonight. If its not a hassle, could you check some of my levels out?2011-01-26 09:22:00

Author:
XFennoX
Posts: 82


Awesome, Blob, thanks a lot! Yeah, Fenno, once you play it and rate it, I'll check out some of your levels.

Also, if anyone notices any bugs, could you let me know exactly where you find them. Someone told me they couldn't get past the very beginning, and when I asked them where they got stuck they never responded. Thanks for the help, everyone!

EDIT

Just qued up one of your levels, Fenno, I'll check it out now.
2011-01-26 17:14:00

Author:
Unknown User


Qued it up will play after work2011-01-26 17:21:00

Author:
malteseassassin
Posts: 66


consider yourself queued, sound neat. perhaps you could check out my "jelly cave" level as well.2011-01-26 17:28:00

Author:
racer1020
Posts: 71


DesertDrifter, just checked out and reviewed your level. Like I said in the review, it has a lot of potential to be an awesome game.

Fenno, interesting and funny concept, I look forward to seeing the next installment.

Thanks Malteseassassin and racer1020, I'll go check out Jelly Cave now.
2011-01-26 17:42:00

Author:
Unknown User


Sorry about the late reply HughDawg03, it was that my internet was playing up lately. Anyway the level has a really good atmosphere but the camera angles used had a bit too much angle. The level was good overall and I give 4/5. Can't wait for the next installment, the story is going to be great. I might consider working with you on part 2 if you need any help.2011-01-30 02:57:00

Author:
TheDesertDrifter
Posts: 72


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