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Little Big Pyramid

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Little Big PyramidNoGoodMonkey
http://i1138.photobucket.com/albums/n537/nogoodmonkey/LBP_03.jpgThe most important soul in Egypt is missing. And the Gods have chosen you to find him. Uncover mysteries behind, beneath and inside famous Egyptian landmarks. This ancient History isn't found in any Earthbound textbook...
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2011-01-23 19:42:00

Author:
Unknown User


Wow, this actually looks pretty decent. I'll give it a go.2011-01-23 19:55:00

Author:
Spark151
Posts: 801


This looks like a template level. 2011-01-23 20:58:00

Author:
Voltergeist
Posts: 1702


In addition to announcing my 1st published level, I want to express maximum gratitude to the LBPC community. Everyone has been incredibly helpful with their replies to my questions. I look forward to repaying the debt with feedback of my own.

For what it's worth, this isn't a template level. I just borrowed a bit of art direction from a story level. I'll add more screenshots to show off other areas.
2011-01-23 21:11:00

Author:
Unknown User


yes, it isn't wrong to take ideas from story mode. VJ took inspiration from the bazaar and jackofcourse's levels and B3's levels might as well be VJ levels2011-02-18 07:29:00

Author:
jimydog000
Posts: 813


Will be checking this out dude.2011-02-18 14:48:00

Author:
JetArtois
Posts: 232


i played it several times but u republished it each time but im determined to get the hi score 2011-02-18 15:33:00

Author:
nysudyrgh
Posts: 5482


This level is awesome! I was blown away with the incredible gameplay, and I had a blast with this from start to finish.

The level designs were great, and I liked the stickering very much.

When I first spawned into the level, I thought it was a template, but I figured out very quick it was not.

The handmade characters were all awesome, and the ending was epic. I was very impressed with this. I hope you stick around here. The psp side is a bit slow at the moment, but I think it will pick back up soon.

Great job.

Hearted and one for you as creator!! <3
2011-02-18 17:57:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Can't wait to play this one, it looks great!2011-02-19 05:33:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Wow! This is a great level man, especially for it being your first! It was wonderful visually. Your decorations were perfect and really enhanced the environment. I particularly liked the Sphinx =D It was great to keep coming back to it at different phases after solving other puzzles, it really surprised and delighted me =) I don't want to spoil anything, so I'll be vague- I thought the 'gate' was totally awesome, very creative execution

This level really surprised me with its length. Varied platforming challenges and puzzles through a surprising number of beautiful environments... I kept thinking I was nearing the end but was constantly greeted with moar! Which in this levels case was a very good thing.

I loved how the progression path through the level kept crossing over itself, like in the Sphinx area.

Man, to be honest, I loved almost everything about this level! Great design, nice visuals, and a bigger journey than you'd expect!

Welcome to LBPC-PSP, you No Good Monkey!

Great to have you on board, this is a stunning debut!
2011-02-19 05:45:00

Author:
SeekingTruth86
Posts: 151


Fantsastic for a begginer, Just wow, yes it does look like a story level but if its based around one its one of the best on the communitity moon.
GOOD JOB
2011-02-19 13:46:00

Author:
butter-kicker
Posts: 1061


Hey! I'm so looking forward to this level, it looks amazing! I would have it downloaded already, but I had to re-accept the EULA. <.< Anyway, I'm already impressed! And I haven't even gotten to it on the Community Moon yet!



EDIT: Alright, here's my feedback. (I'm assuming you want some, since this is an F4F level. )

It looks like it was mostly brushed. This is often one of my problems, so I'm not scolding you, by any means!

The electric gold is a pain. Taking the blocks off the roof would be a TON better for your rating.

The initial climbing of the pyramid is a bit.. How should I put this.. Meh. It would be better if the stairs were a slope, which can be done with the corner editor fairly easily. Also, a checkpoint at the top, and various other ones along the way would be WONDERFUL.

I have to go vacuum, so I'll edit this post with the rest of my feedback later!
2011-02-20 01:56:00

Author:
jkarow
Posts: 55


Quality level mate. Id be very proud out it if it was mine. Nice little challenge to a fairly big level. I played it about three times in a row trying to better my score, so really enjoyed it to do that.Nice little story to it and some great platforming. Looked good too dude. Five stars from me mate and will be keeping an eye out for anymore you do. Top stuff!2011-02-20 13:47:00

Author:
JetArtois
Posts: 232


Thanks one and all for playing the level and providing feedback. I'll write feedback in return as soon as I can. I'm new to the F4F concept. Is there a specific level each of you want feedback on? Or shall I just choose one from your signatures?

In the meantime, I think JKarow may have played a level I didn't create. The feedback doesn't describe Little Big Pyramid. For example: the side of the pyramid is actually a slope with a checkpoint at the top. I also don't have any electric gold in the level.

Could there be more than one level published as "Little Big Pyramid"?

Sorry JKarow, I absolutely appreciate the feedback. But I don't think I can act on it. If you get a chance, I'd love to hear what you think about my level (and ways I could improve it).
2011-02-20 19:29:00

Author:
Unknown User


Thanks one and all for playing the level and providing feedback. I'll write feedback in return as soon as I can. I'm new to the F4F concept. Is there a specific level each of you want feedback on? Or shall I just choose one from your signatures?.

Going for a wonder is my latest level dude, should be a thread about, not up to your standards but about my best one so far.
2011-02-20 19:41:00

Author:
JetArtois
Posts: 232


If you wanna do F4F I'd love to hear what you think of my Sky Islands of Oneiros trilogy. Leave any feedback for it in the Chapter 3 thread (link is in my signature), as the first two chapters are old threads

Again a great level here man, I really hope you've got more in store for us!
2011-02-26 05:39:00

Author:
SeekingTruth86
Posts: 151


I didnt know what to expect when i first started but i ended up really liking it, especially since it is only your first level. Some parts were a little confusing for me but i ended up finishing it just the same. Stickerwork was great although some parts were a little plain for my taste. Gameplay was pretty random but very solid. I didnt really expect to be flying a ufo in this level lol. Nothing very original but it wasnt too frustrating and very straightforward. Finally characters were great and sometimes pretty funny. So overall, I am excited to see where your levels go from here on. I gave you 4 stars and great way to start off your lbp psp debut no good monkey! Please leave feedback on my level, frost in the factory.2011-03-06 00:40:00

Author:
spok22
Posts: 206


Grats on the spotlight NoGoodMonkey! It is well deserved, I loved this level! <3 I can't wait to see what you come up with next!2011-03-08 05:58:00

Author:
SeekingTruth86
Posts: 151


Great level
Goods: Story was long and hard
Bads: Nothing at all Great!
Extra : Story was interesting and little"Fun" I really enjoyed
:star::star::star::star::star: And <3
2011-07-19 12:42:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964


This is a well-balanced level.
Good game-play and a funny story.
It was also varied and wasn't too short.
I think it has gotten me back into LBP when I was almost ready to call it quits on playing and creating for now.
:star::star::star::star::star:
2011-07-19 18:34:00

Author:
Morgalaga
Posts: 164


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