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Trials LBPJetArtois Strap up that helmet and kickstart that bike, it's time to Trial! Please try out my new level. It's a revamped one of Trials PSP (it's now got a roof, so no blasting over everything to the finish). See if you can get the fastest time. Trust in ya bike!

2011-01-19 22:56:00 Author: JetArtois Posts: 232

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I'll try it out!

2011-01-19 23:48:00 Author: The-Questor Posts: 1328

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I'll try it out as well...once I finish this homework ugh

2011-01-19 23:55:00 Author: WoodburyRaider Posts: 1651

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I'll try it out 'cause I'm on holidays!

2011-01-20 02:45:00 Author: jimydog000 Posts: 813

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Let's do this thing! The Bad You can see the level floor A LOT! I had to retry too much. You should've made your own Motor Bike. It kept messing up, flipping over, and such. The Goods There was some pretty EPIC bike tricks! There was a lot of corner editing! The What I didn't get the point of saying: "Ain't no mustard on my bike" Over-All I gave you :star::star::star:

2011-01-20 23:27:00 Author: The-Questor Posts: 1328

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I gave the same rating as The-Questor and here's why: Needs Improvement: __________________________________________________ __________________ - I had to retry a lot (the first time I fell of the bike and tried running. After realizing I was couldn't make a jump I fell and hit the create mode floor.) Try starting your level up higher maybe even at the top. (I've noticed when I'm creating I tend to go to the right and down. - Use your own bike! This helps you show off your skills and what you can do and doesn't spam other people's creations or the story mode creations. - Corner editing seems sort of random. Maybe it's just the level but try and stick with a sort of theme. - Materials seem random too. Try sticking with one or two base materials for the floor and ceiling and a third for the thin background layers and front layers. It makes the level pop more and seem more put together. The Good: __________________________________________________ ____________________________ - A lot of good-looking corner editing. You had some really detailed corner editing and the more you work on it the better you'll get. I seriously think that if you look at some of the above things and improve on them, everything else will just come more naturally and look that much better. - Potential. Although it may not receive the best ratings, your level is really good especially if it's one of your first levels (assuming since you're new to LBPC. If you spend some time working with the level creator and corner editor you'll learn more and more. Final Rating: 5.0/10 Please don't take any of this personally as it is just feedback. I see good potential in you and if you keep creating and looking at other people's levels you'll get really REALLY good. Best of luck and keep creating!

2011-01-20 23:57:00 Author: WoodburyRaider Posts: 1651

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Thank you people for the comments, taken on board and feedback is what I'm after. The track is based on a game called Trials HD on XBLA, that's where the mustard comment is from. It is a pain havin to restart when you fall off or get stuck but I didn't no how to get the bike to restart when you would restart your sackboy, if ya get me. To be honest I didn't even think of doing a different floor. I first released it with no roof, not thinking, mistake as you could just blast to end. I then put a roof/top on it and it crashed when finished cuz I used some 'Turbo' materials i think, so had to do again. It's about my fifth level I've done, others being more platform style, but thank you again, I'll try to improve and thanks for the advice guys.

2011-01-21 22:11:00 Author: JetArtois Posts: 232

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