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http://lbp.me/v/wc16zm This is a Part one of a trilogy. I've try'd to make the levels so that no part of the level repeats itself. Where you pop in is different to where you end. I like to think when you finish the level you feel you've been on a fantastic journey. http://i6.lbp.me/img/ft/2868d03d7969ac2fbf6b80c48d296c4dc9983eaf.jpg http://i4.lbp.me/img/ft/1d40bb05044dbb070aaa3124bc806676f2bda0fb.jpg http://i0.lbp.me/img/ft/e00089df23c007f92bedac8c13390531cfdccd74.jpg

2011-01-15 16:42:00 Author: Unknown User

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Try not to double post/bump if your thread hasn't had any replies. Give it some time someone will check it out since your using the F4F system. Also - might want to change the name of the thread to something that doesn't trick people into clicking it. It's sort of a turnoff. Just be honest and people will check it out. I think your opening paragraph is pretty clever and it makes me want to check it out without having to trick me into it.

2011-01-17 00:05:00 Author: Morgana25 Posts: 5983

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Hello Pab3000, i have played your level and I liked what i saw, but I do have some constructive criticism for you; You mite want to tone down the eccentricity of the level, mite be a bit 2 much, the dream thing was good, but the evil chicken dreaming of being in a garden? Odd, but i supose it does suit in a way, as the level in itself is entirely eccentric, so dnt worry to much about what i say about that. But then again as i know u are going for the funny level, instead of an evil chicken dreaming of a relativley happy garden (this is your contradiction) you could go even further of having him dreaming of a happy puffy palace in the clouds and you could have the evil chicken dressed like a girl, but still have him evil, this adds even more contradicting persanality, kids like this sorta stuff, they find it funny. You should also consider putting more detail into some areas, as they are lacking in it. But other areas... Great Job In those other areas i'm talking about! Those areas, such as the robot contain very nice and precise detail, that fits in well, u also might want to make it a bit harder, but not as hard as some of my levels can be, as your level will probably be aimed towards younger and less skilled kids who are less mature and want to play a funny easy level (i meant that in a good way). And on another note, some of your bad guys can be run past. But in all a good level, I rated 4 stars.

2011-01-17 04:13:00 Author: killerfrogy Posts: 65

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Thanks for taking the time to play and review my level killerfrogy. I agree that I need to add more detail to certain parts. You are right about the dream sequence, I was going for a childhood memory when life wasn't so bad. Possibly adding abit more detail to this part may explain things a little better. The level originally was alot more difficult but I wanted players to get to the end of the game and to complete the journey I have tried to create. As for getting past the bad guys I think the egg army may be in need of a little retraining! I will try to add obstacles so they are on a single level. My intentions are for all ages to play it, I have hopefully included elements that everybody can enjoy.

2011-01-17 21:38:00 Author: Unknown User

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Ok, sorry 'bout the delay. I wish I had been able to come up with more useful feedback for you. About all I can think of is something Killerfroggy touched on already. Towards the end of the level the decor gets a bit sparse. I can think of 1 area in particular. There is alot of rubber used through out the level, which suits the space environments well when decorated accordingly. Though one tunnel type sections towards the end kinda stuck out as a blank rubber walled tunnel. Maybe spruce that up a bit, Thermo permitting of course. That said it is far from level ruinning, so nbd in the grand scheme of things. I had a good time playing the level, I can't find any flaws with any of the logic or puzzles/contraptions you've made. They all seemed to work perfectly and it made the level play smoothly through out. I especially like the space deco parts they look nice. As a whole the level seems incredibly random and a bit "egg"centric.lol But, I think thats what you were going for and it lends to the charm of the level. You've done pretty well making it suitable for a wide range of players, and the humor suits the ovel all randomness of the level too. Nice work. I'll leave it at that and I'll post a bit of feedback in part two's thread shortly. Aloha

2011-01-18 02:40:00 Author: Fated For Failure Posts: 81

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Great survival challenge. You have come up with quite an original concept and rendered it very well. I am not great at survival challenges, however I found once the creature eggs came down I was history. Good job. Smiley face and hearted.

2011-01-22 07:40:00 Author: MicGorbachev Posts: 372

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Nice work on the level mate. Enjoyed the ice slide bit heaps. Extend that concept in future levels and I'll heart the crap out of you.

2011-02-16 04:33:00 Author: Enjayeff Posts: 5

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