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I am writing a story to see if I get a crown. Please critique and help me get that crown and tell all your friends to check out my story. If you like it I will post more on this thread. I need this. Captain Sack+= There was a young boy named Arthur who lived in Florida. He owned a PS3. One day Arthur became tired of LEGO Indiana Jones, and asked his dad to get him a new game. But Arthur didn’t know what game to buy, so he went to school and asked his friends what game to buy. All his friends said “Buy LittleBigPlanet, buy LittleBigPlanet!” But Arthur said “Ha Ha! Is that the game with those, umm, Sackpeople. That game looks super lame.” But his friends said “Just play the demo, you’ll be sucked in.” So Arthur went home and downloaded the demo. He began playing it and absolutely fell in love with it. So young Arthur asked his dad to get him the game from GameStop. And so the madness begins. After a week Arthur had beaten the story mode and started creating levels. One Friday night Arthur was up at 3 o’clock playing create mode when he lost control of his Sackboy. Arthur said “Hey, what gives!” and his Sackboy responded. His Sackboy said in a small squeaky voice “Where am I?” Arthur was speechless. Sackboy said “Are you deaf or stupid? Hello!” Arthur replied “No. If you’re still interested, you’re in my PS3.” “Oh no! I’ve got to get out of here!” Without Arthur even touching the remote, Sackboy began creating a massive contraption with intense and complex logic. Arthur was stunned when the thermo literally cracked. After about 4 hours, Sackboy said “I’m finished.” Sackboy went to play mode and went under a massive laser and pressed a button. All the logic started working and BAM! Sackboy disappeared from the screen. Arthur heard his PS3 at work, and then a flattened Sackboy came out of the disk drive. The cloth character floated down to the ground, and then he popped into 3D. He said “A week in a PS3 does a number on the old stuffing.” Arthur walked over and scooped up Sackboy into his hands and said “What will I do with you.” If you like. Please say so.

2011-01-15 14:55:00 Author: captain sack Posts: 88

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Lol that sound like a pretty sweet story.

2011-01-16 03:45:00 Author: Lgjoka2002 Posts: 538

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No one wants to read?

2011-02-07 20:34:00 Author: captain sack Posts: 88

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Lol, it sounds like it's better suited for a live action video, but I suppose it would be good as an LBP movie as well. The plot is alright, but not exactly crown quality in my opinion. You might want to look at other films on the full game and the beta as well. The premise is good, you just have to expand on it.

2011-02-10 02:11:00 Author: Unknown User

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