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Hello! I am looking for some people who will play my levels and review them. I have about 60 plays and not too many comments at all. Anyways I will return the favor for anyone who plays my levels. Just leave me a review and I will play your levels as well. Below are some pics of my newest level. Thanks! PSN ID: Ello_2T http://lbp.me/u/ello_2t http://i0.lbp.me/img/ft/fe0fd523a4376000a7688486023f2c07a259678b.jpg http://i5.lbp.me/img/ft/985f3d3f60e5a093f2d26e4e3c56acb39137756b.jpg http://i3.lbp.me/img/ft/f43a31f09e3d5186be8fd219ce823e04935cdbd9.jpg

2011-01-10 19:58:00 Author: Unknown User

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I haven't played your lvl, but from the pics I can tell some things. (But I will play it) 1. It's not very appealing to the eye. The blue background is something people don't like very much. The square ground. The shapes are very simplistic. The only good decorations I see are the trees. 2. You can see the music box and ropes hanging the arrows, so I assume you can see other tools you used. BUT, it's an assumption, you probably took pics on your moon, though... you could have just played through the lvl on your moon with cameras to take pictures, then erased them. 3. Not very creative in the way a person chooses a path. 4. Not very creative in the ways they die. I assume they'll just drop and get shocked or gassed. 5. Not sure if no spawn point is good, though in this case it might be.

2011-01-14 08:41:00 Author: Devious_Oatmeal Posts: 1799

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I haven't played your lvl, but from the pics I can tell some things. (But I will play it) 1. It's not very appealing to the eye. The blue background is something people don't like very much. The square ground. The shapes are very simplistic. The only good decorations I see are the trees. That's a lie, I've yet anyone say so, heck, sometimes the blank BG is better than others. 2. You can see the music box and ropes hanging the arrows, so I assume you can see other tools you used. BUT, it's an assumption, you probably took pics on your moon, though... you could have just played through the lvl on your moon with cameras to take pictures, then erased them. Not necerrarly needed to be set in invisible mode, sometimes it doesn't matter, r they fit in with the look. 3. Not very creative in the way a person chooses a path. You COULD give ideas to help if you're giving feedback, you know? If you can't think of better ones, I don't see how you can critizise only. 4. Not very creative in the ways they die. I assume they'll just drop and get shocked or gassed. Wel....what else could he do? O-o 5. Not sure if no spawn point is good, though in this case it might be. Wait what? How can you judge it if you don't know yet? :/ Mind answering/ explaining furter and actually playing the level before giving baseless critizism?

2011-01-14 09:00:00 Author: Silverleon Posts: 6707

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You may want to move this to the level showcase thread and mark it F4F. I just had some spare time and did a bit of F4F, I would have played this one too if I had seen it in the threads there.

2011-01-14 09:19:00 Author: celsus Posts: 822

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Tried out your level. It was a nice ida and cute, but it suffered from several things you can fix. The beging is right by the left side of the level wall, and the pits goto the level floor, this takes away from teh game. The first three choice area looks fine, but you can only see one lever at a time. i have no clue what the first did, the second spawns bombs that never hit me, the third has infinate points, which takes away the point of the level, you should reduce that. The trees in the background are not connected, and are knocked over. The net bubbles have some bits of things that make it hard to get the keys into the slots, the mag key switches are not hidden, so it just seems quickly made, several point bubbles are in the ground, which seems quickkly done too. The pits while a nice idea, show the ground so take away, there was nothing fun about falling and dieing a few feet to the level floor, just too basic. Only two cars instead of three, you can make them take up one thick and one thin layer and get all three car in. YOu can just walk ahead and see over the ramp on which is safe, so adding an electric floor or fire could prevent. The three doors you walk behind looked the best, but the death was just a simple spike noise, add effects and action to the deaths to make them fun. The Hearts with the plz on them at the end seemed like begging for hearts, if you need to ask for hearts, then just have it raining hearts at the scoreboard or something that takes more imagination. The fact I had max points made replay pointless, the idea of random choices is nice, and has a replay value that may get you replay like survival levels, so it is worth your time adding more to this level. You could have riddles at each choice area so it is more fun. Good idea for a level, you just need to put a lot more time into it, polish it up big time. Feedback wise you can check out any of my levels I have in my sig, I coulduse advice on any one of them.

2011-01-14 20:25:00 Author: celsus Posts: 822

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