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I'm planing to build 3 levels of 1 trilogy that's will called "The Destruction Machines Trilogy" (not the finally name) The all game will be played in meches walker (walking robots with guns,lunchers and other stuff.) and every level you will play with another mech with his special skills. Game type: Action,shooting,fighting Game vision: Second person (platform) Year: 3012 Place: Planet-X The Destruction Machines Trilogy - The invasion (1) Story: The Year is 3012 1,000 years after Earth was destroyed. *flashback* In 2012 NASA just invented the most advanced robomech after hundreds of experiments. The mech called "Project - 001" after few months from the event something happened. suddenly the z-bots army of planet Z attacked Earth (aliens) NASA used project 001 because there was not another choice and then, the worst happen. project 001 destroyed all the aliens easily but with the aliens he destroyed Earth also, and all the humans have died. only us, The robots that was invented by the human survived. after the big destruction we left to another planet and we settled in this planet, planet X. *end of flashback* present: (3012) Now the history repeats and the z-bots army attacking our new planet, and now is time to revenge! Gameplay: this level you playing the main mech called "Project 917" he is the leader of the robots of planet X and the most strong with the guns and the long range fighting. your job is to stop the Z-bots army from invasion and send them back to the place they come's from.. in the end of the level you beet them and they says that you maybe won the fight but not the war. The Destruction Machines Trilogy - Spying mission. (2) Year: 3012 Place: Planet Z -1 (they have few planets) gameplay: Project 917 drops you at the enemy secret base and wish you luck. you playing Project 007, a spy robot that similar to scorpion , small and quiet. Your mission is to get secret information about the war and not to get caught. In the end they discovered you but it's part from the story. you run away and project 917 rescue you in the last second. In the information you got you discover the date of the war and another troops information. The Destruction Machines Trilogy - The final war. (3) Year: 3013 Place: Planet X main country. (capital) Story: the X army get ready for the war and you and your friend planting some traps. The Z army arrived and the war begins. you playing with the robots you played so far (projects 917 and 007) and some new as project 916 (the brother of 917) - special abilities is the all short range Fight (swords knifes and that stuff) Every time you play with some robot you fight against other enemy robots and aliens. you and few more soldiers in front of a lots of enemies. in every end of a battle (every robot play time is a single "battle") you lose and shout to the others that we are going to lose the war. after you "lost" all the battles there is a cut scene. in the cut scene all the robots talking and saying stuff like "we are losing this fight" and "we have no choice." and they all decide to use project 001 although this is too dangerous and because they really haven't another choice. Then the cut scene moving to some bunker. you see some robot with dust and rust. at one moment the robot is off and in the other his eyes lit in red. the robot comes to life and getting out with a bang from the ground. all the enemy army starting to shoot him all in once but it seems it's not affect him. the robot continues to move like nothing happen and then he stops. 5 seconds he doesn't move and the robots still shooting at him. and then he start to fight back. he takes them all down in once with rockets,bombs,guns and every thing and after 10 seconds there is no one in the enemy army that left. Victory is us and all the X robots cheering and celebrating the victory. The End Tell me what i should improve and what you think about the level.

2011-01-10 19:24:00 Author: Unknown User

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Come on guys!!!! 24 views and not even one comment?

2011-01-11 13:20:00 Author: Unknown User

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Wow, that sucks. 42 views and no comments, that's just not right. I think this is a good project in the making, it's just that it needs some work. Maybe a Problem: - The humans just died off like they were nothing. - So did the Z army. - Sounds like Transformers. - Why doesn't 001 destroy their planet as well? - When you say platforming, you mean there will be a bot as small as Sackboy jumping and stuff on platforms right? - A lot of grammar errors in the first post. When the grammar is right, it shows how much dedication you have for the project. - Maybe too many cliches, and it doesn't sound too original. - Calling a bot "Project", doesn't really give the bots much character. Name them something like ZPQ-9 or something, but give the letters some reason. Hopefully these aren't the final names of the planets and bots. - If everything was destroyed on earth except 001, how can there be more robots in the future? Like right now (modern times) we don't even have other robots capable of learning. Maybe change the year it happened. Also, how did the other robots escape? - Every fight you do in 3 sounds really short. - There's more, but I thought I was ragging on it too much. Interesting: - In every fight you die. Not sure if I've seen this. - If it's jumping around as a bot, cool. - Playing as different robots. (Though just 3 main ones kind of sucks) - I can see many different kinds of bots. Metal Slug-like bots, Gundams, Metal Gear 4 (spy bot), and others. - I guess I need more info on the project to see what else is cool. Good luck and farewell, Cryogen <(^w^<)

2011-01-12 11:40:00 Author: Devious_Oatmeal Posts: 1799

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Wow, that sucks. 42 views and no comments, that's just not right. I think this is a good project in the making, it's just that it needs some work. Maybe a Problem: - The humans just died off like they were nothing. They really are, like nothing versus the aliens! - So did the Z army. No, The Z army are much stronger then the x army, in fact you almost lose the war but in the last moment 001 kill them all.. - Sounds like Transformers. It's similar to transformers.. - Why doesn't 001 destroy their planet as well? the other robots shut down 001 because they scared he will do even worse.. Also the x army not looking for war.. - When you say platforming, you mean there will be a bot as small as Sackboy jumping and stuff on platforms right? Kind of.. I mean that the robots will walk,run,fly,jump and all this from second person view.. - A lot of grammar errors in the first post. When the grammar is right, it shows how much dedication you have for the project. I had a lot of work to do and i didn't have time to focus on that.. I promise that when the game will released I will pay attention on this! - Maybe too many cliches, and it doesn't sound too original. - Calling a bot "Project", doesn't really give the bots much character. Name them something like ZPQ-9 or something, but give the letters some reason. Hopefully these aren't the final names of the planets and bots. Thanks for the advice, but I said before that all the names are not final.. - If everything was destroyed on earth except 001, how can there be more robots in the future? Like right now (modern times) we don't even have other robots capable of learning. Maybe change the year it happened. Also, how did the other robots escape? All the robots have survived, but all of them except 001 have been upgraded and haves future technology. - Every fight you do in 3 sounds really short. It will be something like 4 min each. But you will have 3 fights to do and maybe even more.. It's all done to give you a war feelings and not just a single fight. - There's more, but I thought I was ragging on it too much. Interesting: - In every fight you die. Not sure if I've seen this. You are not die.. (maybe some of them will just for the story) - If it's jumping around as a bot, cool. It will be more than that but you have to remember that the bot you talking about isn't a sackbot, it's a mech (a walking robot, huge robot) - Playing as different robots. (Though just 3 main ones kind of sucks) Maybe i will add some others but that's the idea.. you will see more robots of your side in the background. - I can see many different kinds of bots. Metal Slug-like bots, Gundams, Metal Gear 4 (spy bot), and others. I not really sure if I know what you are talking about.. if you will add a picture or a video it will be great. - I guess I need more info on the project to see what else is cool. Just keep waiting.. Good luck and farewell, Cryogen <(^w^<) Thanks for the honest response I will think about your ideas.

2011-01-12 13:15:00 Author: Unknown User

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If the humans just died like nothing then there is no point of even having them in it. Maybe they died out a long time ago or something. If it was so easy to shut down, why couldn't the humans shut it down? I'm aware that it'll be a giant robot, but how much of the screen will they take up? I was just wondering HOW they survived. I know they survived, but there needs to be a way they survived. - I can see many different kinds of bots. Metal Slug-like bots, Gundams, Metal Gear 4 (spy bot), and others. I not really sure if I know what you are talking about.. if you will add a picture or a video it will be great. What I meant is that you would play as different robots types, models. So that all of them aren't just on 2 legs shooting stuff.

2011-01-13 08:58:00 Author: Devious_Oatmeal Posts: 1799

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If the humans just died like nothing then there is no point of even having them in it. Maybe they died out a long time ago or something. The humans are not an important part of the story.. The robots are the best friends of the humans and they want to revenge the death of them. If it was so easy to shut down, why couldn't the humans shut it down? Because 001 created to be useful they wasn't planning to shut him down but he had some bug and because of that he killed the humans. I'm aware that it'll be a giant robot, but how much of the screen will they take up? I cant explain the size of the robots but the screen and the environment will feet to the size. I was just wondering HOW they survived. I know they survived, but there needs to be a way they survived. The way the humans have died was something like nuke for example and the robots not harmed from this (They resistant) What I meant is that you would play as different robots types, models. So that all of them aren't just on 2 legs shooting stuff. That's the idea.. For example 917 will walk like a robot and fly and everything 007 maybe will drive with tank wheels and will be smaller. and another things like that.. every kind of robot will give you a different experience from the gameplay and will feel different.

2011-01-13 13:09:00 Author: Unknown User

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Up..................

2011-01-15 09:42:00 Author: Unknown User

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Up.................. Be careful with the bumping, you could get moderated for it. I think the rule is you can bump after a week, or if you update a project. I guess the last thing is will you be able to move left and right with the mechs? And not just going in one direction.

2011-01-15 09:57:00 Author: Devious_Oatmeal Posts: 1799

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Be careful with the bumping, you could get moderated for it. I think the rule is you can bump after a week, or if you update a project. I guess the last thing is will you be able to move left and right with the mechs? And not just going in one direction. Good question.. The idea for now is to make the mechs move one direction only because i don't know if 2 directions can be done.. (till i have the game)

2011-01-16 05:40:00 Author: Unknown User

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