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I made this level a while back and i decided to finish it up and publish it. Like the what the description said, Due to LBp2 coming out i have to stop this project and star my MAIN project. Wake up for another day of school as you take control of the life of Ethan Anderson. Take arts and paint a master piece! http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_16-1.jpg Or fall asleep in history class, carefully not to get caught as the teacher is a crazy war veteran http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_18.jpg School grounds http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_17.jpg http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_15-1.jpg an dont worry this isnt like those ordinary high school levels about romance and getting the girl and all that nonsense http://lbp.me/v/wcgyxs

2011-01-08 04:50:00 Author: wait wtf Posts: 853

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here's a step by step review! +very nice job with the house! looks great! -i couldn't tell what the buss was supposed to be. i thought it was a giant padlock. i'd add some stickers or lights to the back so it looks more like the back of a bus. +the high school looks very nice too! i can tell you spent a long time on the visuals! -i couldn't figure out where i was supposed to go in the school. i think there was a dialouge box i missed so it was probably my fault -the bio class room is hard to navigate. i tried to jump into my seat and got squish killed somehow? +i love how you did the bio assignment thing! the sticker trigger is visible on the one for the head though. -eww geometry homework. once was cool but now i have a feeling the rest of the level will be like this :c -the painting took me awhile. i didn't know i had to paint the tongue black. maybe you should add a pink sticker for the tounge? +i love how the mood immediately changes when you go into the history class! -the 2 hours later sign shows up before the screen goes dark in the history class. -i wasn't sure if the class was over. all the other classes said where to go next before you left, so i was waiting for that. i left eventually to see that it told me AFTER i left the class. -can't jump off the roof, lol. +nice use of the 3D glitch on the PE field -when you go to the scoreboard you can see through the ground. i gave it 5 stars and a heart because you did a great job at what you set out to do with this level. i didn't think it was particularly fun but i kept playing because the level was very well done. i hope you keep creating! for F4F please play: ginormo burger

2011-01-10 01:07:00 Author: harbingernaut Posts: 126

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Thanks for playing Little Big Christmas and giving me four stars! I just queued up Eden Province High School and I'm looking forward to playing it. Judging from the screen shots, it looks like a unique level. I took note of what you said about the horse at the end and made the trigger radius on his mouth larger so the words would appear before people got too close to him. What did you mean when you said you were low on air? Did I accidentally put a water object somewhere? Please let me know. I agree that the boss fight was too easy. A lot of people said similar things, as well. I ratcheted up the difficulty, but now I'm afraid he may be too difficult! If you get a chance, please check out my Halloween level, Trick or Terror! Here's a link to the F4F thread for that one. https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=43065-Trick-or-Terror! Is there anything else you'd like me to play and give feedback, in addition to your high school level? -- BronchoNate http://lbp.me/search?q=bronchonate

2011-01-10 21:13:00 Author: BronchoNate Posts: 38

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It's been a while since I graduated from high school, and it was nice to go back last night when I played your unique level. The house was well-done, but maybe could use a couple touch-ups, especially in the kitchen. No major complaints, though. The school looked great, and the layout worked well. I'm also glad to see you included places that weren't necessary to go to, like the library, although it would have been nice to have some reward for going there, like maybe overhear a funny conversation between the librarian and a student about a long-overdue book? The triplet humor outside the cafeteria was funny. The overheard conversations were funny. At first, I was wondering what all the gun talk was about, but then when the girls said what they did about Black Ops, I understood and thought the whole thing was very funny. A couple lines of dialogue made me thing there was some kind of subplot forming, like the missing student and the teacher who keeps a gun in his desk. I was prepared for this to turn into something and was a little disappointed when it didn't. I actually enjoyed the homework in each class, and I thought the way you pulled it off was very clever. However, art class gave me some trouble. The sample we're supposed to copy has a pink tongue (even though there's no pink sticker???) and red mouth, and there's no face outline, just a yellow field. I had a hard time figuring out how we are supposed to do this and almost gave up. Others might give up. On that note, you should probably put some kind of warning in your level description about needing to turn on community items. I already had them enabled, but a lot of people turn them off because they don't want to get overloaded with community items. In this case, your level would not be completable unless they first turn them on because of all the sticker switches. Historty? I think you put an extra "t" in your history class sign. Or maybe my TV is too small? Both are possibilities. P.E. class looked great, but was kinda boring. Run from left to right? Maybe add some hurdles that are possible to knock over. I think that would make it 10X as fun. Overall, excellent level! Thanks for publishing it. I gave it one of those heart thingies. Is there anything else that you've made that you'd like for me to play? Here are my F4F threads. Please play one (or both, if you're feeling generous!) and give me any feedback you can. All will be appreciated. Little Big Christmas https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=42985-Little-Big-Christmas Trick or Terror! https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=43065-Trick-or-Terror! -- BronchoNate http://lbp.me/search?q=bronchonate

2011-01-11 17:37:00 Author: BronchoNate Posts: 38

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thanks for the feedback so far guys, ill make changes ASAP

2011-01-14 04:07:00 Author: wait wtf Posts: 853

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