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Shade: A Series In The Making

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I am currently working on a kind of sequel to this one. I would love to know what the community thinks about my lvl so I can revamp it up, and make it even better.

http://lbp.me/v/vwre97






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2011-01-04 05:42:00

Author:
Devious_Oatmeal
Posts: 1799


Like and hate at the same time hey

I should keep a like hate meter - lets start neutral

Hate |----O----| Like

Opening scene - camera angle and trees - pretty flowers and just a hint of mushroom from the background
Hate |-----O---| Like

Birdies and Rolling hills - then sudden change of scenery
Hate |------O--| Like

Screaming, skulls, falling and blood
Hate |-------O-| Like

with the dripping sound effect I'd like to see some of the pipes actually dripping, nevermind there one goes
Hate |--------O| Like

My ability to jump, run and jump on sinking platforms - low but the light coming on as a hint when I grab the ball cancels that negative.

The ball puzzle is very awesome - great control method had trouble seeing the switch in front of the electric block - only noticed because I almost tripped when I ran through it

Very nice boss, scene I have my lb set to larger screen size so I could see where the second plant phase ended - so it was ust a separate floaty bit - maybe extend that so it is always coming from off screen


Final verdict - all like no hate - false advertising

I kno thi is not F4F but if you feel so inclined .. Lost Christmas Tree Angel (http://lbp.me/v/vnzt8p) Thread for feedback is here (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=42218-Lost-Christmas-Tree-Angel)
2011-01-04 08:35:00

Author:
Unknown User


Thanks. I think I will keep the love hate relationship though. Not sure if someone will come along and be like looks great, but I was annoyed. ToT

lol. funny. <<<Redundant

Was there any bad things about it, besides the switch? And I'll put some material down there to hide it.
2011-01-04 08:52:00

Author:
Devious_Oatmeal
Posts: 1799


Just played your level and I wanted to give you my feedback =P

The atmosphere and the scenario was very well done! Love it
though the puzzles are sometimes a bit tough because of the darkness and because the ball gets stuck quite often.
and there's another thing: in the room, where the word Shade is, there's something like a gap where you can walk and then fall down on the level ground. Perhaps you should make an invisible wall or something else to prevent this.

But besides that, awesome! Gave :star::star::star::star::star: and <3 !
2011-01-04 20:27:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196


Thanks for your review Starr. I plan on revamping the lvl as soon as I finish the one I'm working on.

I figured there would be a gap somewhere.

The ball resets if you press the button again.
2011-01-05 08:20:00

Author:
Devious_Oatmeal
Posts: 1799


I know that the ball resets but it's a bit annoying when the ball gets stuck in the third room...but it just happened once so actually it shouldn't be mentioned XD2011-01-05 08:33:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196


Oh, did it do the infinite loop thing? Like it keeps shooting and shooting never making it to the last cup? LOL. I don't know how that happens. There's nothing in the way or it's not hitting anything. Must be a very, very, very small problem with the launchers.2011-01-05 09:45:00

Author:
Devious_Oatmeal
Posts: 1799


nahh, i didn't have no infinite loop thing 2011-01-05 10:17:00

Author:
StarrKable
Posts: 196


I tried to take a picture of my stage, but the background came out gray. I hope you weren't disappointed. So there was nothing else you say that was a problem. I will work on the boss, make him more epic, longer lvl, and work on the opening better.2011-01-06 21:46:00

Author:
Devious_Oatmeal
Posts: 1799


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