Archive: 11 posts

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This is the second part of Chapter 2 of the Red River series. To be able to follow the story play the prologue and the first part of Chapter 2. (Single Player recommended.) The Cleaner, this is how he was called since he was taking care that the Red River stays clean from the living ones. He did his job as the guardian of the Red RIver very well, over the centuries he gained some kind of pleasure in wiping out the living ones. The humiliation of defeat was inacceptable for him. Sackboy seemed to have found a safe way to the volcano where it was said that the Captain of the Flying Dutchman would be there. He was the one who would be able to help Sackboy. But he didn't know that he had been watched by the Cleaner. A short snarling like noise and the boat was destroyed. Sackboy found himself afterwards in a Sewer System (who would have guessed that the Red River has got a sewer system). Don't miss this episode where Sackboy finds his way through the sewer system with its stinky dirty water. Will he find a way to the volcano? Will he be able to win the final battle against the Cleaner? http://lbp.me/v/v35jsk

2011-01-03 19:46:00 Author: StarrKable Posts: 196

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I really like the look of this, im working on a series myself before LBP 2 comes out >_<, ill check this series out and leave feedback next time im on.

2011-01-03 20:37:00 Author: Bloo_boy Posts: 1019

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that'd be great i'd really like some feedback

2011-01-03 21:38:00 Author: StarrKable Posts: 196

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I played your levels, my fav one was the second one it felt really creative and I loved the whole steering the ship thing, kinda reminded me of Pirates of the Carribean levels. The boss was well made a little funny cause of the things he said but I liked it. The part where your swining over him while his hand is trying to catch you, that was pretty cool. I see these are some of your first levels. These are pretty good, some stuff needs improvement like the begging, maybe some scenery and platforming and the Volcano was really hard >_< I wanted to pass it but It really gave me a hard time. I see you've played bomberman ^__^. I noticed XD those enemies in the volcano, well idk if you have but they really gave me flashbacks of my childhood. The sewer level was great, the platforming was simple but well made. The lighting maybe some improvement and other stuff. But I see your getting there =). You'll get better and better as you go by. Other than that the story is awesome, kinda like a MM style and the beggining, the Intro's are really cool I loved how you made those. I gave all 4 levels so far 4 stars and I hearted Ch.2 part 1 which was my fav ^____^ Keep up the good work.

2011-01-04 16:54:00 Author: Bloo_boy Posts: 1019

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glad you liked it (and I'm glad I got at least some feedback XD). what exactly do you mean with 'begging' when you said 'some stuff needs improvement like the begging' i guess chapter 3 really turned out hard (that may be the reason why the people play it but never finish them XD) could you tell me where the difficulties are? ^_^ so i know where i should make it easier after all i want that you guys finish my levels and don't get stuck somewhere

2011-01-04 17:39:00 Author: StarrKable Posts: 196

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Hey you stole my level name lol "Red River"

2011-01-05 04:58:00 Author: clarkdef Posts: 138

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lol, really ? sry man, didn't mean to steal it. you know, at first i called the series was named Black RIver...but then I noticed that the water in my level is red so i called it Red River XD sry again!

2011-01-05 08:07:00 Author: StarrKable Posts: 196

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All good man. Anyway I played your level and enjoyed the challenge, didn't die but still I enjoyed trying not to die because of the elevated threat. However once I got to a certain lift (the first lift) I fell off it half way up. Then it would not come back down. I had to go out for a run after that so I haven't replayed yet. Anyway hardish levels are good because nobody makes em because of wusses that, well, don't like to feel they are being slowed down.

2011-01-06 02:38:00 Author: clarkdef Posts: 138

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What elevated treat? (sry, don't really see what you mean v.v) And with that certain lift, you mean the lift in the boss battle after you shoot the first skull?

2011-01-06 07:58:00 Author: StarrKable Posts: 196

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Yes the lift after the skull guy that shoots all those plasma balls. And sorry I meant elevated threat.

2011-01-06 08:11:00 Author: clarkdef Posts: 138

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Let me see. There's that first skull who shoots these throwing stars. Then there comes the elevator, you pull on the lever and it goes up. You move to the other side and there the second skull shoots the green plasma balls at you. I guess you mean the first one, right? Yeah, I sorta thought that it would make trouble like that. I guess I gotta fix that

2011-01-06 08:22:00 Author: StarrKable Posts: 196

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