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I drew this a couple days ago because Sage's costume is pretty darn cool. I'd like to have a bit more feedback on it.

As you can see, I didn't want to scan the thing onto the computer and edit it at all, so I used some color pencils to color everything in. Drawing digitally has been a bit of a pain lately, so I decided not to this time. What do you guys think?

http://i756.photobucket.com/albums/xx210/eagerneph/SageDraw.png
2010-12-24 17:47:00

Author:
eagerneph
Posts: 1536


looks pretty cool you are pretty good i have to say.2010-12-24 19:30:00

Author:
Lgjoka2002
Posts: 538


Most shapes are good, including the feet, the head,(Not sure about all of it but of what I see is good, the rest that I wonder is covered by hair so no points against Griffindor) but the arms seem a bit thin no offence and the zipper seems like it could be bigger. Between the pant legs, it's kinda slanted, not sure why it's like that but overall, you did a nice job with some proportions but a few might need a bit of work, it seems clean, no mess and same thing with color and the costume rocks. Overall, it is one of your best sackperson drawings, keep up the great work eag2010-12-24 21:05:00

Author:
Dragonvarsity
Posts: 5208


Thanks! Yeah, I realized that the slant between the legs looked a little awkward after I was finished. And I've been told several times that the arms look too thin, so I'll be working on those things for the next drawings.2010-12-24 21:58:00

Author:
eagerneph
Posts: 1536


Thanks! Yeah, I realized that the slant between the legs looked a little awkward after I was finished. And I've been told several times that the arms look too thin, so I'll be working on those things for the next drawings.

they are a bit to think i was in the beta and while playing it there was a bug for a gigantic sackbot and i had looked at the arms and found out it curves a bit so it is sort of fat in the middle then it starts to get thinner to the body a bit hard to explain but its the easiest way i could have said it.
2010-12-24 22:18:00

Author:
Lgjoka2002
Posts: 538


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