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Weapon Master's DojoLBPLOVER9999 Climb the Weapon Master's perilous dojo up to the top. Has a time attack available.

2010-12-21 02:20:00 Author: LBPLOVER9999 Posts: 16

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I played it and I can see that many improvements can be made. 1: All "special effects" like music boxes or switches should be HIDDEN unless they should be seen. 2: Dark matter is UGLY. You shouldn't let people see that either. You can make middair platforms by making a dark matter block out of sight and then connecting the two with a rod that is HIDDEN and STIFF. 3: I don't see much atmosphere or background. I know that it takes quite some time but it makes your level MUCH better. Add stuff in the background and in the thick layers and sound effects and etc... 4: I understand that there are challenges on the lifts but the big challenge is boredom. Add point bubbles or make it go faster. Thats all I can say for now. I'll queue your level and play it in about a week to see if changes have been made and give you a rating. But unfortunately, all I can give right now is 1 STAR. Keep wokring on it. Try my Early Appocalypse levels: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=41740-Early-Apocalyse-(1-and-2)

2010-12-21 06:52:00 Author: Unknown User

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I updated what I could, but if I try to add points to the lifts, I get the evil breaking sound and can't find out what broke.

2010-12-21 16:39:00 Author: LBPLOVER9999 Posts: 16

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Had another go. I see that you tried to cover up the dark matter but I could still see it from the side. I liked that you added at least an MM background but thats all. About the lifts, you don't have to add point bubbles. It's just that the lifts are boring and should at least be faster in my opinion. You could've changed much more things but all you did was a quick edit. My rating stays at 1 STAR until you improve greatly although I can help you.

2010-12-21 17:01:00 Author: Unknown User

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Updated more, added points to the lifts (Emitter on wobble bolt) and more stickers, covered up dark matter.

2010-12-21 18:26:00 Author: LBPLOVER9999 Posts: 16

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Alright, here's my thoughts. The level seemed very lacking in decoration. Slapping down stickers on walls is not scenery, it's just ugly. The stickers were far too big to look good, anyway. The material choice seemed bland, and the gameplay was too. You used the same lift idea over and over. The character was poorly done, I would have recommended going for some sort of cardboard creation, rather than an oversized poorly done cut-out of a photo. :star::star: For F4F, please do my level, Prisoners of the Deep.

2010-12-21 22:56:00 Author: Jaslow Posts: 775

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Level deleted.

2010-12-21 23:26:00 Author: LBPLOVER9999 Posts: 16

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