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*12 Days of Christmas* Coco Cavern *Spotlighted!*

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Coco Cavernrandomperson3459
Explore a sweet cave as you spread holiday cheer to an Easter Bunny!
Here it is! The 2nd level in the 12DOC series. Enjoy!

Pics by Valmassoi below.
2010-12-15 01:53:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


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2010-12-15 01:57:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Sorry, a lot of complications...2010-12-15 01:59:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


Great level you got here! I actually really enjoyed it. It's simply a stroll through "coco" colored caves. Sure this doesn't have much of a christmasish flavor to it, but hey, we gotta have variety. Your blendage of materials was great and the platforming was solid! The only thing that keeps me from squeezing out a heart for you is the sticker and sfx situation. The sticker work wasn't really noticeable, and I didn't hear any SFX.
However this is still a great level: :star::star::star::star::star:

EDIT: I'd like to thank you for putting in that magic mouth and telling ppl about the next level. Glad you listened to me but it didn't have a sticker saying day 2 on it

Also, you might wanna add *12 Days of Christmas* on your title for this thread, just so ppl know if they aren't looking at my mega thread.
2010-12-15 02:14:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


yeah i was going to have somebody help me with those 2 stuff but time was out. Im terrible at that. Thanks about the platforming VJ gave me some help. That was the worst part on making this level bc im bad at gplay. lts my 1st level so nowhere 2 go but up. it was more holidayish than christmasy2010-12-15 02:24:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


This level was great too! It also seemed like it could have been a little longer, but you where a little short on time too. It was still great! :star::star::star::star::star: & <3

I downloaded it when it had 1 play. It was about 30 minutes ago, so I think valmassoi played it first.

EDIT: It's nice finally seeing a level from you. For a first level, that is great!
2010-12-15 02:42:00

Author:
ConverseFox
Posts: 2333


Wow! Awesome level RP! I didn't know what to expect from you but now I know to expect awesome scenery! THe materials you picked complemented well and your corner editing was OUTSTANDING! And for your first level, you're lucky to have VJ as your Gameplay Guru. Simple but fun gampeplay, awesome work!

You rock! 5 :star: and <3
2010-12-15 02:48:00

Author:
Silver39
Posts: 1703


Wow!! You have truly impressed me RP3.

This is such a great level, and for it to be your first is remarkable. True, I helped you a little bit on some gameplay in one section, but you have changed a ton since last I played it, and for the better. You cut out an entire section, but what you added is great. Everyone seems to like your choice of materials, and I agree. They look awesome. I love your corner editing. There are very few straight lines in the entire level. It looks great. The platforming segments were good and challenging, just the way I like it.

You did such a great job. You should be very proud of your level.

Five stars and a heart and one for creator.
2010-12-15 02:58:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Ever since you completed my Level Building Tutorials I was wondering why in the world you had not published any levels because clearly you are very talented. To see such a fantastic first level from you really makes me wonder when the next one is coming!

Great job RP. Great job indeed!
2010-12-15 03:06:00

Author:
Alismuffin
Posts: 1328


I love it, for your first level you really made a good first impression. Also the bubble combos were intresting, ( Love bubble combos). Materials combined with the scene was amesome along with the character design.

l gave it five stars
2010-12-15 03:06:00

Author:
Flashwire
Posts: 217


And for your first level, you're lucky to have VJ as your Gameplay Guru.

That's what I thought. It looks like a VJ level, but this one with magnificent corner editing.


Here before us, are two great creators, whom have mastered the art of little to no stickers. Both of these creators have a special gift for the use of complimenting material colors. These kinds of creators come once in a new moon, so be kind to them; look up to them; recognize them.

I didn't just come up with that on the spot or anything.
2010-12-15 03:09:00

Author:
ConverseFox
Posts: 2333


Cool cant wait to play!, But it was going to be called coco cave! now i got to change my level, unless you want to change the name of your level since you just published.2010-12-15 03:17:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


OH cool I have to play it nowwwww!!!!!!2010-12-15 03:19:00

Author:
The-Frez
Posts: 275


you dont need to change anything its fine theyll find it2010-12-15 03:20:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


Wait are you talking to me or someone else.2010-12-15 03:24:00

Author:
The-Frez
Posts: 275


sketchnz i was2010-12-15 03:37:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


Oh.. okay.2010-12-15 03:41:00

Author:
The-Frez
Posts: 275


wow! I didn't know what to expect! but i love it!

except... there was a way of getting to the floor of the level. and it looked easter themed.
gosh i'm a hypocrite
gave it 5 stars and a heart!
2010-12-15 06:02:00

Author:
jimydog000
Posts: 813


Hey great level! i thought it was cool how it was christmas themed, but had to do with the easter bunny! I liked the easter egg dying platforming the best, and your corner editing was also phenominal! There was one small issue though. When I tried jumping onto the yellow egg on the winch, I missed it, went in front of it and it made me fall through to the level template floor. I suggest before you get too many plays to go back and put some gas there to prevent it from happening. There ws also some extra stuff lying on the ground down there, so if you go through it again to fix it I suggest deleting that extra stuff to save some load time. Great job once agian, :star::star::star::star::star:<3.2010-12-16 17:04:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


Same here if I could I would give it :star::star::star::star::star::star::star::star::s tar:and a <3 so......Yeah.2010-12-16 17:43:00

Author:
The-Frez
Posts: 275


@Ricky, I thought I put some gass in front of it... And the thermo was only 3/4th of the way there.2010-12-17 01:58:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


When I tried jumping onto the yellow egg on the winch, I missed it, went in front of it and it made me fall through to the level template floor.

Yeah, I fell out of the level too on my second run through
2010-12-17 02:09:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


The front layer?2010-12-17 03:14:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


The front layer?

Yeah. I jumped and fell straight to the ground
2010-12-17 03:15:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Ahhh... I thought that was a thick layer... You were supposed to die anyways2010-12-17 04:40:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


Ya I fell strait to the ground too, I found 6 score bubbles down there though.2010-12-18 17:03:00

Author:
aceofthorns
Posts: 288


Just "retry" if you get down there...2010-12-18 17:32:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


I must say, I was extremely impressed with this level. I had never played a randomperson level before, so I really didn't know what to expect going in to this.

The moment sackboy blasted out of the entrance point, I was amazed with the look of the level. Everything went perfectly with the "Caverns" theme as everything was perfectly rounded and there were no jagged edges. The gameplay was great and it reminded me very much of VelcroJonze's levels because of all the grabbable items and winches. Very impressive level that you've got yourself here.

Five stars and a heart. Also hearted you as a creator!
2010-12-19 20:28:00

Author:
eagerneph
Posts: 1536


i want to play this level!2010-12-19 23:44:00

Author:
Riolu17
Posts: 38


@eagerneph, thanks for the feedback! 'pprecirate it!

Thanks for y'all you guys feedback!
2010-12-20 00:36:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


Congratulations random on getting your level in the Spotlight - you nailed it with your very first level. Very nicely done! 2010-12-29 19:03:00

Author:
Taffey
Posts: 3187


The level was just AMAZING and really fun! I liked it really much and it was so fun! I rated the level :star::star::star::star::star: and <3. I cant wait to play the next level if you will create more.2011-01-02 19:36:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


I did not realise this was your first level, it is a sign of great things to come.
I gave it :star::star::star::star::star: and a <3
(Even though I hate bouncy platforms, I have trouble with those )
2011-01-06 21:19:00

Author:
Unknown User


You asked for feedback so here we go!!

Feedback as I play: The beginning is pretty, it's been a while since I last played this! Not too fond of the floating circle though... Nice character design, me likes! Your corner editing has been lovely so far btw. The platforming is nothing special, but nice none the less. You do like grabbing, eh? Very good corner editing on the egg... Seriously random, you do have a lot of winching grabbers. I'm going to assume you have some obsession! The background is getting a bit samey at this stage... Maybe a few more stickers? And we're done!

Fun Factor 7/10 - I had fun, most of time.
Creativity 7/10 - Nothing ground shattering, but good.
Design 8/10 - Lovely corner editoring, but it's a bit same-y.
Music ?/? - Didn't have my sound on. :x

I'm gonna give you 5 stars! Great work my friend!
2011-07-10 20:34:00

Author:
Fastbro
Posts: 1277


You asked for feedback so here we go!!

Feedback as I play: The beginning is pretty, it's been a while since I last played this! Not too fond of the floating circle though... Nice character design, me likes! Your corner editing has been lovely so far btw. The platforming is nothing special, but nice none the less. You do like grabbing, eh? Very good corner editing on the egg... Seriously random, you do have a lot of winching grabbers. I'm going to assume you have some obsession! The background is getting a bit samey at this stage... Maybe a few more stickers? And we're done!

Fun Factor 7/10 - I had fun, most of time.
Creativity 7/10 - Nothing ground shattering, but good.
Design 8/10 - Lovely corner editoring, but it's a bit same-y.
Music ?/? - Didn't have my sound on. :x

I'm gonna give you 5 stars! Great work my friend!

Thanks for the honesty Fastbro, 'preciate it.
2011-07-12 01:44:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


Coco Cavern review:

Story: There was some little story... I don't remeber any more

My feeling of the level : The level doesn't seems to be like part of x-mas But when you play the level, you will discover that it is little bit part of x-mas. First time when I play it I thought it have no head and tail!
But on a time I understanded the Idea of the level

8,5/10 :star::star::star::star::star:
Because i founded some "Golden egg" hidden when you drop from the level
2011-08-06 11:22:00

Author:
doggy97
Posts: 964


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