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The magic cave

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The magic cavefrexy18
http://lbp.me/v/tqzf9c
Its a jump'n run level without story. Sorry i have no picture. Optimal with one player but you can play it with others too if you like. I hope you have fun. I' m looking forward to the feedback .
2010-12-14 16:37:00

Author:
frexy18
Posts: 62


WOW add list queue here
http://lbp.me/v/tqzf9c

Is fun here pictures

http://i3.lbp.me/img/ft/c43d3bffd4401fffb420c000a5d06541231650ce.jpg

http://i5.lbp.me/img/ft/425a449d39402c4ac3f2ba88470fbbd1cf65e452.jpg

GOOD LEVEL!!
2010-12-16 08:04:00

Author:
Kaumy
Posts: 63


havent known that lbp.me opened for players who are not n the beta now.
lol
2010-12-16 13:42:00

Author:
frexy18
Posts: 62


This level is very nice. I really like it. Its original. Has a good atmosphere, the music really helps, has some cool obstacles and puzzles, the places are well made. I don't see anything bad or negative about it, perhaps that it is too short. A very good level in my opinion.

Now please check my level:
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=40606-An-Adventure-in-the-Woods
2010-12-16 14:53:00

Author:
H-O-S-M-A-R
Posts: 74


Hi there! Your level looks very nice, so I'd thought I'd give it a go. I'm writing this as I play along, so hopefully you'll get some feedback and know what needs improving, and what's good

Love the initial look as you start up. Very pretty. Really liked the water puzzle, very original, but the balls without the light on did get stuck in the area that the ball with the light on was ment to go a few times (sorry, that's probably worded really badly). Love the green lights, it's subtle but really adds to the effect. More putting a light into a hole but I didn't really know where the switch was at first. Nothing to worry about mind. My Sackboy got stuck inbetween the ball and the gap, so the speech bubble skipped itself immediatly, but I presumed I had to go left. Spikes a bit hard to see in he water. Hmm, more putting a light into a gap. Lovely watefall. Funny and clever puzzle with the fish. Nice ryhme at the jetpack puzzle. The last puzzle was good original.

Overall, a ver beautiful and deatailed level. The gameplay was fun, if a bit repetitive, and it was a tad short, but those graphics probably took up a fair bit of thermo. I actually couldn't rate is as I got disconnected from PSN, but it would have got :star::star::star::star: from me

For F4F, could you play my level Explosive Adventures (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=40361-Explosive-Adventures-A-Bomb-Based-Platformer&p=689906) please? Thanks.
2010-12-16 21:45:00

Author:
kirbyman62
Posts: 1893


Great work! The level played out well and was a satisfying experience. Nothing ground breaking but it doesn't need to be to be good...

Few suggestions: Part at the waterfall, might just be me, but the layering could use some work, you have three point bubbles to the left of the waterfall. I fell to get the three and really had no where else to go but die in the mist of the waterfall. Not sure why its a haphazard? Can't jump to bottom layer because of this...
Camera is a bit jerky above the fish that makes 'wind'.

Otherwise, great job, 4 Stars from me
2010-12-17 08:48:00

Author:
John82wa
Posts: 221


wow thanks for all the feedback! 2010-12-18 08:56:00

Author:
frexy18
Posts: 62


Hello,you havent pictures but this isnt a problem for me,I will play your level,Im sure that it will be cool.2010-12-18 09:03:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hello,I just played your level,its amazing,i like especially the lights and the theme.I like too the platformers and puzzles that have,but i was a bit confussing in some zone,expecially wen you must turn on some swiches,anyway I was recomended this level,I give it 5 stars,you deserve it,great job dude 2010-12-18 10:02:00

Author:
Unknown User


have some new photos:
http://i4.lbp.me/img/ft/50434a0f73a169d7e3f787a51538021046ed220b.jpg
http://ic.lbp.me/img/ft/f0ce3efb70cbda77f5126bec5e22b89c6db8d633.jpg
http://i8.lbp.me/img/ft/d78855257366b2e2a2a94c986e4b546037718338.jpg
http://ia.lbp.me/img/ft/bbab56656a950ed569e8377ec438b571ad926124.jpg
http://i0.lbp.me/img/ft/c3079c887a89b76a2f399df8d828a942f1e2e0c0.jpg
http://id.lbp.me/img/ft/fad59f98a48fb106fdcc20ee3769bdae7c5c539d.jpg
http://i3.lbp.me/img/ft/c43d3bffd4401fffb420c000a5d06541231650ce.jpg
http://i5.lbp.me/img/ft/425a449d39402c4ac3f2ba88470fbbd1cf65e452.jpg
2010-12-18 10:47:00

Author:
frexy18
Posts: 62


Try putting at the front and at the end of the image URL 2010-12-18 14:36:00

Author:
kirbyman62
Posts: 1893


It is a very good level with good choices in materials and the lighting looked really good. It also has some good puzzles with some nice platforming. Overall, a well balanced level. I gave it :star::star::star::star::star:
Would you mind giving feedback on my Fall of the Dark Queen level?
2010-12-25 05:34:00

Author:
Xx_Mr_Orange_xX
Posts: 115


very nice looking level! i think having no story is better than having a random one thrown in and the level was good enough to not need one. i gave it :star::star::star::star:!
i really liked the floaty green lights (i assumed they were supposed to be bugs?) it is a really nice touch. i'm trying to get better at making levels look nice like this

for F4F you can play any of my levels, thanks :3
2010-12-26 23:15:00

Author:
harbingernaut
Posts: 126


Heyy frexy, thx for reviewing my level, now heres mine for u ^^: (sry for being late)

pro
+Great design
+Good puzzles
+Materials, music etc. fit good
+Good lighting

con
-A bit short

All in all its a great level, but too short. Maybe you can make it longer if the thermo still has a bit space.

:star::star::star::star::star: and a <3 from me
2011-01-04 11:17:00

Author:
se-mi92
Posts: 101


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