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The Cardboard Caverns (UPDATED and SPOTLIGHTED!!!!!)

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The Cardboard Cavernsaustimerr
After surviving Cardboard Island you fell in a hole. This hole placed you at the top of a huge series of caverns. Platform and puzzle your way through The Cardboard Caverns to finally get home after your great adventures!
This is my second level I ever made but I stopped working on it a while ago. Now it is finished!

READ: This level has been edited to be all around better!

This level doesn't have a deep story, it is just a light hearted runabout in a cave!

I really enjoy this level and I hope you do to!

Well that's all I have to say, I gotta get back to working on Christmas Decorations!

Thanks in advance bros!
Warning old pictures:
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http://i54.tinypic.com/2iseez8.jpg
http://i52.tinypic.com/23vdr9v.jpg
http://i55.tinypic.com/j633h1.jpg
http://i51.tinypic.com/20jl65k.jpg
http://i54.tinypic.com/2e1y7mh.jpg
http://i52.tinypic.com/30atd04.jpg
2010-12-04 20:25:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


Yay new cardboard level! I'll be back2010-12-04 20:28:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Hmmm, Ill go check it out.2010-12-04 20:41:00

Author:
Astronaut
Posts: 162


The Cardboard Caverns
Score: 7.8/10
Rating: :star::star::star::star:
By: austimerr

It's great to see another installment of your carboard "series," but a little disappointing to see a downgrade.

Story: N/A/10
None. All good.

Music/SFX Choice: 7.4/10
Music selection is alright, but the "cowboyish" song did not really fit in. Some more sfx would be nice.

Appearance: 8.2/10
A bit of a downgrade from Cardboard Island, but still decent. Materials blend well, but the level is missing the unique blend from the first level.

Creatures/Objects: 7.7/10
They were okay. That's the best way to describe it. The palm tree objects and crabs look amazing in the first level, but it seems this one is lacking something that makes you say "Wow."

Gameplay: 7.4/10
Much of the level is original, but it lacks quite a few things that made your first level a hit. Such as a boss, better bubble combos, and so on. The puzzle at the end was new and cool, but was a little frustrating after a while.

Overall: 7.8/10 (not an average)
This level is decent, but lacks qutie a few things that made your first level awesome. I really want you to make another level in this "series" but be sure to add some more "wow" factors. :star::star::star::star:

Pictures below...

http://i55.tinypic.com/15yyk2x.jpg
http://i54.tinypic.com/2iseez8.jpg
http://i52.tinypic.com/23vdr9v.jpg
http://i55.tinypic.com/j633h1.jpg
http://i51.tinypic.com/20jl65k.jpg
http://i54.tinypic.com/2e1y7mh.jpg
http://i52.tinypic.com/30atd04.jpg

If you don't know how to get them, just click http://i51.tinypic.com/2j0idtg.png and copy the links for the ones you want.
2010-12-04 22:07:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


l'll play any Austimeer level, my friend.2010-12-04 23:46:00

Author:
Flashwire
Posts: 217


Hey austimerr!

I'm being a bit random but I don't think you'll mind.


The Bads
I Got stuck on the + thingies on the way down twice.
You used a LOT of disolve and stickers.

The Goods
Visually Epic.
Pretty wicked Platforming.
Innovative gameplay.
A Pretty long level.

The What?
I didn't like the music, so I turned on Dance Forever.
It's not your fault, It's my taste in music. Once again, not your fault.


So other than that, I gave it :star::star::star::star: and a <3!!
I hope this gets spotlighted! It deserves it!

Riding That Pony
The-Questor
2010-12-05 21:11:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Hey austimerr!

I'm being a bit random but I don't think you'll mind.


The Bads
I Got stuck on the + thingies on the way down twice.
You used a LOT of disolve and stickers.

The Goods
Visually Epic.
Pretty wicked Platforming.
Innovative gameplay.
A Pretty long level.

The What?
I didn't like the music, so I turned on Dance Forever.
It's not your fault, It's my taste in music. Once again, not your fault.


So other than that, I gave it :star::star::star::star: and a <3!!
I hope this gets spotlighted! It deserves it!

Riding That Pony
The-Questor

That was the greatest review ever! LOL
2010-12-05 21:18:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


Yeah, I don't think that the music in LBP PSP sucks, I just prefer nowaday music to it.

Hope you liked the feedback.
2010-12-05 23:18:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


*bump* Please, this is my last level because lbp2 is coming out soon!2010-12-13 23:00:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


It looks amazing I got to play it..... and let me try something.Uh it's not coming up Wait? AWSOME!!!2010-12-14 01:00:00

Author:
The-Frez
Posts: 275


congrats on the spotlight.
i sooo have to play this again...
2010-12-14 21:56:00

Author:
unXpectiD
Posts: 1132


Congratulations on the spotlight!

*bump* Please, this is my last level because lbp2 is coming out soon!
Iv'e GOT TO get a ps3. eeek! lbp2!
2010-12-15 07:17:00

Author:
jimydog000
Posts: 813


Congrats on the spotlight mate!!! I still havent played this level...i will tonight 2010-12-15 11:14:00

Author:
Hellobob5
Posts: 382


Yeah great job congrats on the spotlight.2010-12-15 14:42:00

Author:
The-Frez
Posts: 275


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