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Alice's Village of the DoomedVladimir_Cross This level is based off of the first chapter from the PC game "American McGee's Alice". It's a darker tale of Alice in Wonderland. The Red Queen has become ruthless and it's up to you to stop her by battling through the card guards and obstacles that come about. This is my first level in LBP1, I know it's kind of late for my first level but it only shows to how much I want to do as the thermometer is limited. If this level gets enough plays and hearts I will keep the story going once LBP2 comes out since it will allow me to do what I really want to do. Critiques are always welcome as this is my first level ever published. I hope everyone enjoys it!

2010-12-02 21:14:00 Author: Vladimir_Cross Posts: 10

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I love dark tones and creepy stuff, ive heard about this so Im curious to see this level, ill play it and review it soon.

2010-12-02 21:17:00 Author: Bloo_boy Posts: 1019

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Thank you! It's definitely dark and has an eerie feeling to it so you shouldn't be disappointed in that area.

2010-12-02 21:23:00 Author: Vladimir_Cross Posts: 10

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Not sure if anyone has played my level yet but I did fix a few things and republished it.

2010-12-03 05:48:00 Author: Vladimir_Cross Posts: 10

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I Played it, I loved the art style the levels has you barely see anymore art related levels, I really liked those swirly thingys you made (forgot the name >_<), the lighting was cool, it had my 2 favorite colors Purple and Blue, The Cart section was cool but I found a little problem there that made me restart the level, so you might wanna check that out, Its the part where your pushing the cart to an Elevator so it goes up etc, other than that It was cool, I Loved the Art style and the dark tone in the level, I gave it 5 stars a heart. There barely any art related creators anymore, keep it up.

2010-12-03 14:21:00 Author: Bloo_boy Posts: 1019

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I seem to have the most problem with the cart, I thought adding a tip before the cart would help solve the issue some are having. Do you have any suggestions? Maybe moving the tip closer to the cart? I'm really stumped as to how to make it work without having to put a tip, that a lot do not read.

2010-12-03 18:30:00 Author: Vladimir_Cross Posts: 10

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Just queued it up and will play soon! I can't wait!

2010-12-03 18:42:00 Author: Unknown User

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Sounds cool, ill check this out and review it later, Ive heard about this game, Ill check it out and tell you how well you did .

2010-12-03 21:07:00 Author: Purple* Posts: 58

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This is what I think about your level: Good: Good obstacles. Well-made scenarios. Good gameplay. The atmosphere is cool. Bad: Short. Too little action. A bit repetitive. In my opinion, this level is good. :star: :star: :star: Now please check my level. http://https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=40606-An-Adventure-in-the-Woods

2010-12-04 15:17:00 Author: H-O-S-M-A-R Posts: 74

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I do agree that is is short but it's all I could do since my thermometer wants to explode. Do you have any suggestions on how to make it a better experience? And since you say it's a bit repetitive, any suggestion to make it appear not so ?

2010-12-04 19:47:00 Author: Vladimir_Cross Posts: 10

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I didnt find it repetitive, and remember this level is from an Art concept which is from a actual game, if your going to re-create something from a actual level you have to make it exact if you would add more action then its just a remake so dont worry, stick to your thing not what anyone else suggests, the leve is great dont worry =).

2010-12-04 21:03:00 Author: Bloo_boy Posts: 1019

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That's the thing about the first chapter in the actual game, there isn't much action in it. Chapter 2 has more action which I will possibly do once LBP2 comes out. I'm just waiting to see if I can get a certain amount of plays and hearts. My goal is around 50 hearts.

2010-12-04 23:23:00 Author: Vladimir_Cross Posts: 10

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Very good style, I loved art concepts and you really captured the remake very well, not many people know what this level is about but this is very well made, I got a glimpe of the original and it did remind me of it. I Like the colors you used (Purple is my fav color ) this level shouldnt fade away I really hope more people play this, I understand about the action thing that this level doesnt have much action but I know it will get better in time, good luck, and great job. I gave it 4 stars and Artistic.

2010-12-06 21:03:00 Author: Purple* Posts: 58

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Alice is really a great game, I''ll do it.

2010-12-07 00:44:00 Author: ThisDudeRufus Posts: 170

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Very good style, I loved art concepts and you really captured the remake very well, not many people know what this level is about but this is very well made, I got a glimpe of the original and it did remind me of it. I Like the colors you used (Purple is my fav color ) this level shouldnt fade away I really hope more people play this, I understand about the action thing that this level doesnt have much action but I know it will get better in time, good luck, and great job. I gave it 4 stars and Artistic. Thank you, and the second chapter once I get to it will have more action in it, I guarantee it. I'm just waiting for LBP2 to come out first then I can get to work. Since I won't have to worry too much about the thermometer in LBP2 I can also add more to my current level since, like I previously stated, was limited and also have it tie into the second chapter.

2010-12-07 08:02:00 Author: Vladimir_Cross Posts: 10

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Absolutely up to my standards for an Alice level, I wish you had done somewhere more unique. But I left the level. around halfway through the level there is a tilting platform that isn't for jumping on. Get on the right side and jump on the gear, then grab the light and you're on top of the playable region of the level.

2010-12-08 00:51:00 Author: ThisDudeRufus Posts: 170

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Absolutely up to my standards for an Alice level, I wish you had done somewhere more unique. But I left the level. around halfway through the level there is a tilting platform that isn't for jumping on. Get on the right side and jump on the gear, then grab the light and you're on top of the playable region of the level. I had thought I fixed that... When I added it I knew people were going to want to jump on it so I added some invisible barriers, something must have broken, I'll look into it. Was there any reason as to why you left the level? Any area you couldn't get through?

2010-12-08 02:19:00 Author: Vladimir_Cross Posts: 10

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Okay, fixed the area that you could jump atop. Can't get up there now. There was also another bug I found that I fixed.

2010-12-08 08:12:00 Author: Vladimir_Cross Posts: 10

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Fixed a couple things. Changed some wording in the pop up bubbles and edited the balloon basket a bit.

2010-12-13 08:58:00 Author: Vladimir_Cross Posts: 10

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