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The Quest To LBPC *No Spotlight :{*

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The Quest To LBPCThe-Questor
You Embark on a Quest to find the infamous LittleBigPlanetCentral.
You Run Away from your home to Find LBPCentral (Commonly Shortened as LBPC)
Your Mother keeps telling you that LBPCentral only exists in your head, so that's EXACTLY where you set off.
That's all for the description.

I'm really excited because this is LBPCentral's first PSP level that is entirely devoted to it!
The visuals were a pain in the Sack but I got 'em done.

amazingflyingpoo
Kaiju_Kid

They'll both know why once they play the level.
F4F:
Yes there will be Feedback for Feedback, although I've still no PSP I can play levels on my older bro's.
Thus meaning I can give you some feedback!
Just State the level you want the feedback on and expect some!
If you don't post any level in particular then I'll just post some in your latest level.
If you would prefer me to wait for your new level that's going to be published I'll give you an "I O U"


CyberSora - Level, Undecided
Flashwire - Level, Undecided
Kelemonopy - Level, Unspecified
amazingflyingpoo - Level, Undecided
2010-11-29 18:38:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Hey buddy!!

This sounds awesome. i am downloading this now, and will leave you some feedback ASAP!
2010-11-30 02:11:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


A level... about LBPC? :eek:

*Runs to the PSP in dramatic, cinematic fashion.*
2010-11-30 02:37:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


Hey buddy!!

This sounds awesome. i am downloading this now, and will leave you some feedback ASAP!
Thanks! VelcroJonze Feedback is infamous for it's epic-ness!

A level... about LBPC? :eek:

*Runs to the PSP in dramatic, cinematic fashion.*

Like this? http://g-ecx.images-amazon.com/images/G/01/askville/1029645_profile/84_1029645_profile._V01_.gif
2010-11-30 04:33:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Like this? http://g-ecx.images-amazon.com/images/G/01/askville/1029645_profile/84_1029645_profile._V01_.gif

Yes, exactly like that!

Anyways, it's time for your feedback.

I liked the intro. I felt a bit sad for the kid running away from his/her mom. I thought the level was going to comprimise of the mom finding the kid or something. Kind of disappointing it didn't, but either way I liked it.

Anyhoo, the level itself was fun, but some parts could've have looked better. One example is the platforming areas. They felt a little blank. Not to mention that you overdid the whole Navigation marks (is that what they're called?), so I didn't find much excitement out of it. But I did like the transitions from area to area. Those were neat things you added, so Iiked that.

Finally, the ending was both good and dull. I liked that the ending was a kind-of-happy, but it was a little rushed. Other than that, it was nice to see the LBPCentral displayed in front of the computer.

Overall, I gave it :star::star::star::star:. Nice job Questor.

Peace
2010-11-30 05:00:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


yikes! wow, nice! do you want feedback? here goes:
logic: 9.9/10
game play: 10/10 (i'm serious, the puzzles were WIN)
corner editing: 9/10
comment: i like how you've found a use for the creature eyes. i like the floating furniture.
questions: how did you get that cart that goes to the cyber world to be like a... what's it called?.. err... a somthingscope, something that doesn't rotate
2010-11-30 05:03:00

Author:
jimydog000
Posts: 813


Yes, exactly like that!

Anyways, it's time for your feedback.

I liked the intro. I felt a bit sad for the kid running away from his/her mom. I thought the level was going to comprimise of the mom finding the kid or something. Kind of disappointing it didn't, but either way I liked it.

Anyhoo, the level itself was fun, but some parts could've have looked better. One example is the platforming areas. They felt a little blank. Not to mention that you overdid the whole Navigation marks (is that what they're called?), so I didn't find much excitement out of it. But I did like the transitions from area to area. Those were neat things you added, so Iiked that.

Finally, the ending was both good and dull. I liked that the ending was a kind-of-happy, but it was a little rushed. Other than that, it was nice to see the LBPCentral displayed in front of the computer.

Overall, I gave it :star::star::star::star:. Nice job Questor.

Peace
I love DIS guy!!!

yikes! wow, nice! do you want feedback? here goes:
logic: 9.9/10
game play: 10/10 (i'm serious, the puzzles were WIN)
corner editing: 9/10
comment: i like how you've found a use for the creature eyes. i like the floating furniture.
questions: how did you get that cart that goes to the cyber world to be like a... what's it called?.. err... a somthingscope, something that doesn't rotate
Hmmm....Ah, you mean a gyroscope lock, attach the object to dissolve, then make a switch that activates the dissolve, then activate the switch.

@CyberSora & jimydog000: Alright, choose 'yer f4f levels.
2010-11-30 15:06:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Hiya,Questa!

I'll give you some feedback when I get the chance,I promix.
2010-12-01 00:53:00

Author:
Balgarino
Posts: 377


All right time for feedback, I loved the intro got me intrested in it quickly, but you could have did more sticking in some areas that were dull, could have been longer too. I SEE your creating skils are getting better and better and I loved your lettering of the level name and your name, also you could have cleared up those pistons.

Overall here my review:
Logic 8/10
conering 9/10
intro 7/10
I gave it 4 stars and a heart great job
2010-12-01 03:13:00

Author:
Flashwire
Posts: 217


@CyberSora & jimydog000: Alright, choose 'yer f4f levels.

It's okay. Nowadays I play levels feedback free. So no worries.
2010-12-01 04:24:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


@CyberSora & jimydog000: Alright, choose 'yer f4f levels.
no worries mate you've reviewed my level. i'll be coming out with a couple of (hopefully) great levels in the holiday's though
ps: i gave it :star::star::star::star:
pps: yes it was a gyroscope i was talking about, thanks for helping
ppps: oh and it's allright if you want to call me: jim, jimy, james or blue kangaroo002
2010-12-01 05:01:00

Author:
jimydog000
Posts: 813


Hiya,Questa!

I'll give you some feedback when I get the chance,I promix.
Who has 2 thumbs, and is awesome? ^^^^^THAT GUY!!^^^^^^^

It's okay. Nowadays I play levels feedback free. So no worries.
Alrighty then, I'm gonna be ALL OVER your next published level!!.......Next Year

no worries mate you've reviewed my level. i'll be coming out with a couple of (hopefully) great levels in the holiday's though
ps: i gave it :star::star::star::star:
pps: yes it was a gyroscope i was talking about, thanks for helping
ppps: oh and it's allright if you want to call me: jim, jimy, james or blue kangaroo002
I'll definately play your holiday levels!
@P.S.1: Thanks for the stars!
@P.S.2: Your welcome.
@P.S.3: No problem.....jim!

@Flashwire: Thanks buddy, your gonna get a spoonfull of feedback on your next level!

@All Logic ratings: But What you don't know is that there is actually only one piece of logic in the entire level!!
2010-12-01 15:20:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Okay wait are we going to try to make a level based on lbpc?2010-12-01 16:27:00

Author:
The-Frez
Posts: 275


This level is already published......And I know you know that mster.2010-12-01 19:06:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


I honestly don't know why I keep coming to this forum. All it ever gives me is paaaaiiiin...

I will add this to my long list of levels to play, it sounds awesome!
2010-12-01 19:56:00

Author:
PygmyOwl
Posts: 1316


@DizzyZebra: I know you know that I know that you're getting Wi-Fi before Dec. 20th.2010-12-01 23:29:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Dizzy your getting Wi-fi.2010-12-02 00:54:00

Author:
The-Frez
Posts: 275


@mster: Off-Topic.

I hope this level gets spotlit!
It'll probably only get a Nod though.
2010-12-02 02:29:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Of topic what do you mean of topic you brought it up.2010-12-02 03:01:00

Author:
The-Frez
Posts: 275


no worries mate you've reviewed my level. i'll be coming out with a couple of (hopefully) great levels in the holiday's though
ps: i gave it :star::star::star::star:
pps: yes it was a gyroscope i was talking about, thanks for helping
ppps: oh and it's allright if you want to call me: jim, jimy, james or blue kangaroo002

scratch that no worries youv'e reviewed all my levels bit, I have come up with a new level!: Jetpack'n Adventures.

what should my avatar be?
what is the point on spotlight nods? is there a list?
2010-12-02 09:09:00

Author:
jimydog000
Posts: 813


@mster: I meant your being off-topic.

@jim:

scratch that no worries youv'e reviewed all my levels bit, I have come up with a new level!: Jetpack'n Adventures.

When the thread is up I'll Feedback it.

what is the point on spotlight nods? is there a list?
Nope, there is no list but you just get a little mention from the showcase.


what should my avatar be?
Your Current one with a Santa Hat on.
2010-12-02 14:36:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


:star::star::star::star:
like the logic
takes a lot of running though and you pretty much only go in one direction
other than that its brill!

happy if you review any of my levels
2010-12-02 14:48:00

Author:
Kelemonopy
Posts: 109


:
:star::star::star::star:
like the logic
takes a lot of running though and you pretty much only go in one direction
other than that its brill!

happy if you review any of my levels

Well Thanks Buddy! I just checked the stats and It's,

:star::star::star::star: 19

2<3
Oh and Velcrojonze has played it.


F4F: I'll definately give your levels a play.
2010-12-02 16:13:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


:

Well Thanks Buddy! I just checked the stats and It's,

:star::star::star::star: 19

2<3
Oh and Velcrojonze has played it.


F4F: I'll definately give your levels a play.

there not that good i dont think compared to the ones ive downloaded, but give em a go you may have different views had it since release but not that good at holding creating ideastogether for a good level
2010-12-02 20:52:00

Author:
Kelemonopy
Posts: 109


Okay, well I'll give 'em a go then pal.2010-12-02 21:19:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


I enjoyed the idea of it, but the visuals just didnt come out completely right.2010-12-03 00:13:00

Author:
Iceychill56
Posts: 175


Hmm.....Explain please.2010-12-03 02:59:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Hmm.....yes do explain.2010-12-03 04:39:00

Author:
The-Frez
Posts: 275


I actually had the chance to play this level last night and I'm excited that I get to leave some feedback because it has been a long time since I have had the chance to leave feedback.

The platforming in the level is great, and I liked the story that is implemented. You didn't overdue the story and try to make it a linear story level with a lot of reading and that is a good thing. Very good execution :-)

The whole time I was playing the level I was thinking to myself about how much you have improved as an author because I played some of your levels back in the day and you have come a long way!

I'd say the big thing that I felt could use improving was that there were some empty areas. Even at the start of the level, it felt like you left home and then walked through a relatively barren area which gave a bad first impression for a level that DID NOT deserve a bad first impression. There were other empty areas like this as well. If I was you, I would go through the level after it is finished (before publishing) and if there is any area like that which is a bit (or a lot) empty, then just take a few minutes to make some props or add some stickers.

But the little empty areas were not that big of a deal. Overall, the level was great and I'm glad that I had the chance to play it :-)
2010-12-03 15:21:00

Author:
amazingflyingpoo
Posts: 1515


I actually had the chance to play this level last night and I'm excited that I get to leave some feedback because it has been a long time since I have had the chance to leave feedback.

The platforming in the level is great, and I liked the story that is implemented. You didn't overdue the story and try to make it a linear story level with a lot of reading and that is a good thing. Very good execution :-)

The whole time I was playing the level I was thinking to myself about how much you have improved as an author because I played some of your levels back in the day and you have come a long way!

I'd say the big thing that I felt could use improving was that there were some empty areas. Even at the start of the level, it felt like you left home and then walked through a relatively barren area which gave a bad first impression for a level that DID NOT deserve a bad first impression. There were other empty areas like this as well. If I was you, I would go through the level after it is finished (before publishing) and if there is any area like that which is a bit (or a lot) empty, then just take a few minutes to make some props or add some stickers.

But the little empty areas were not that big of a deal. Overall, the level was great and I'm glad that I had the chance to play it :-)

If I could Thank! that post more than once I would!

Have you noticed the beginning?
That was completely inspired by your PS3 level, escape to LittleBigLand!
Does This ring a bell?

Skip to 0:35

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qQIQQkzSwDo
Skip to 0:35
That's why I special thanked you!
I can't take full credit for the beginning.
2010-12-04 17:30:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


This level is my most favorite level ever!!!!!!!!2011-02-02 21:11:00

Author:
Fygar2735
Posts: 71


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