Archive: 15 posts

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An Adventure in the WoodsH-O-S-M-A-R Its a forest with trees, flowers, mushrooms, a bear that blocks your path, a river and a couple of giant trees to climb. I changed the level original name, to make it easier to find.

2010-11-29 01:55:00 Author: H-O-S-M-A-R Posts: 74

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Pictures please

2010-11-29 18:40:00 Author: Blanchrocker Posts: 142

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This level was great, loved the kind of comiky ennvironment, gave it 5 stars. Could you check out my level The Arabian Ruins

2010-11-30 05:16:00 Author: nillrecuring Posts: 104

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This level was great, loved the kind of comiky ennvironment, gave it 5 stars. Could you check out my level The Arabian Ruins Thanks por the feedback. And this is what I think about your level The Arabian Ruins. Good: Playing the level feels great!. The music was adequate, it is noticeable that the areas were made carefully. It looks like what it is suposed to represent. Bad: Too short, it leaves you wanting more. Very few obstacles. No enemies. In my opinion, the level is good. I imagine there will be a second part. :star::star::star::star::star: and <3

2010-11-30 14:27:00 Author: H-O-S-M-A-R Posts: 74

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Pictures please There you go. Pictures of my level. And this is what I think about yours: Tales of Steam City: Union Freight and Tales of Steam City: Late Arrivals. Good: Excellent gameplay. Well-made scenarios. Good level design. It feels like you are in the place. Bad: The levels were too short. The path was not clear enough and sometimes you don't know where to go. I bit repetitive. In Union Freigh, the end was dissapointing. In my opinion, these are of the best levels I have played. :star::star::star::star::star: for both.

2010-11-30 15:26:00 Author: H-O-S-M-A-R Posts: 74

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Whats up H-O-S-M-A-R, Here is your feedback, Pros: +spore emitting mushrooms +interactive teddy bear that wants food Cons: -repetitive (climb up tree, stairs, platform, mushrooms) -had more mushroom theme than Giant tree (name change) -because of the repetitiveness...it felt waaay too long :star::star::star: **side note** i reviewed the proir comments, and they were all YOU giving feedback on other peoples levels. You should give them their feedback on their levels under THEIR posts.

2010-12-01 21:33:00 Author: sascha_winter Posts: 163

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Edit: I found it. PROS -Mostly well made (few obvious glitches, exploits, etc.) -Pleasent style -Mildly entertaining -Long, but not too long. CONS -Was not very dazzling, or memorable -Obstacles were not very original -Objects were very rough Notes: I realize that inventive platforming is near impossible for the average joe game designer, but at least more of a variety or challenging obstacles would be nice. As for the objects, there were too many poorly shaped platforms. Most of the rotating platforms were fat, ugly rectangles. I would suggest an unhealthy dose of the corner editing tool, and skill with making objects will come as you make more stuff. Once you improve in both of those, you're level will be a lot more memorable (for good reasons). Also, there were WAY too many score bubbles. :star::star::star:

2010-12-02 00:58:00 Author: RagTagPwner Posts: 344

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I can't find this level

2010-12-02 18:33:00 Author: Radishlord Posts: 706

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I couldnt find the level either, searched by PSN and Level name

2010-12-02 20:26:00 Author: John82wa Posts: 221

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I had such a good time playing this. The look was too simple, but worked out just fine exept for some square shaped places, and there were just long segments with just two materials and no stickers. Biggest problem was with falling and losing progress. I really did like to play this level.

2010-12-05 21:34:00 Author: ThisDudeRufus Posts: 170

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I thought this was a good level. It looked pretty good, although almost everything is made out of two materials. The outdoors section could use a bit more variation, it is quite long but only has three types of obstacle (mushroom, trampoline mushrom, rotating platform). I liked the room with loads of trampoline mushrooms, although I did get caught underneath the mushrooms a couple of times. Overall: :star::star::star: P.S. Thanks for the feedback.

2010-12-08 00:06:00 Author: Unknown User

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Nice little level. However, the visuals were nice but a little empty, with few detail. Gameplay was absent through most the level, just walking to the right, and jumping. The trees were very nicely made, and the mushrooms too, although the mushrooms could have been better executed. I gave it 3:star:'s, I would have given it 3.5 if it was possible. Overall, a nice looking level, but could be very much umproved on.

2010-12-09 17:50:00 Author: iBubek Posts: 682

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Pretty cool level, i liked the overall atmosphere. Two things though that kinda irked me a bit though. 1) That imitated water was, umm....not good, before real water was released as part of the PoTC Add-On, it'ld pass with 5 Stars, but nowadays, at least for me...nope, not cutting it. If i didn't have access to that Add-On i'ld simply make do without water in my level. 2) It was waaaaayyyy too long, at least for my liking, after the "imitation river" i was like "I should be close to the end..." and i kept repeated the same thing as i climbed.....and climbed....and climbed even more....and then descended what appears to be the inside of a tree. 3) This isn't a negative comment, just something that could PERHAPS be fixed. The tree-tops when going to get the apple are easy to fall down from, even unintentionally while trying to jump from the top of one tree to the next. Maybe it's just me though. Aside from #1, the rest are just personally opinions/ideals, if you had used real water (or none at all) i'ld have rated your level higher because it deserves it, very well designed, nice job. :star::star::star::star:

2010-12-16 17:48:00 Author: Unknown User

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thanks for the feedback! ok now to your feedback: positive: -the idea with the mushrooms, very creative -the bear, very funny -the diffyculty, it was good balanced negative: -the optic wasnt that good, but ok -i fell into the abyss and landed in a other part of the lvl (maybe u could use horrible gas) it was very long. actual thats good but it got a bit boring. but a good lvl :star::star::star: for you .

2010-12-17 12:55:00 Author: frexy18 Posts: 62

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Thanks everybody, I appreciate your feedback. I'm working on it to make it better.

2010-12-17 13:34:00 Author: H-O-S-M-A-R Posts: 74

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