Archive: 21 posts

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Jelly World: Hot Spot Part 2Cheeze-Bo Make sure you have played Part 1! Sackboy's last outing to Jelly World. The Pickles have begun growing. And the Blue Square has made a leaving pathway. I hope you enjoy this level! Feedback is appreciated! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0XnTKmFDKCw

2010-11-24 20:53:00 Author: CheezeBo Posts: 832

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Hey Cheezey!! Thanks for letting me beta test this. I think it is your best level yet. I will leave you feedback after I play it again, which will be tonight!

2010-11-24 21:02:00 Author: VelcroJonze Posts: 1305

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@VelcroJonze I tested too! WOOP WOOP! Go beta testers! ^-^ @CheezeBo I love the whole platforming experience. It was fun! I already gave you feedback on this, so it's pretty much taken care of. What's different, however, was that you added the finish gate and fixed the plane problem! Thank you! The only problem that still there is the rising platform part. It still gets stuck mid-air. But other than that, I loved the whole level. I even played the first part and understood the plot! Overall, :star::star::star::star::star:! Awesome job CheezeBo! Peace

2010-11-24 21:39:00 Author: CyberSora Posts: 5551

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@CyberSora It's incredible how me adding a finish gate and moving a thin plan down a bit can add a Whole new Star to the level's rating. I will have a video of this level online shortly.

2010-11-25 06:15:00 Author: CheezeBo Posts: 832

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@CyberSora It's incredible how me adding a finish gate and moving a thin plan down a bit can add a Whole new Star to the level's rating. Well of course; it shows that the Creator listens to the players.

2010-11-25 11:05:00 Author: CyberSora Posts: 5551

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Here is the video of the level in case you want to watch it for whatever reason (it's also in the original post) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0XnTKmFDKCw

2010-11-25 17:11:00 Author: CheezeBo Posts: 832

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Hey cheeze-bo great job on this level! its your best so far, great corner editing, i still remember your first jelly world games and they were fun but didn't look as good as these new levels. I liked how the story continued from the others and the platforming was cool, 5 stars and a heart. I still think you need to add more layers though, its easy when you get the hang of it, Here is something that may help The front thin layer: Good for patches of Grass, Sand or Snow, Tree's(but not somewhere where it could get in the way of sight) and small accessory's. The middle thin layer: Good for Tree's, Small accessory's and rocks. The Back thin layer: Great for tree's, buildings and maybe small hills. Just a few things you should add to an outside level. if you need help

2010-11-26 20:57:00 Author: SketchNZ Posts: 1668

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l played it part one and part two and the both follewed the plot and it was amazing with race at the end was very competive to me, l see you added a little of pizzazz to your level. Overall you did a amesome job. (from one of your admirers, Flashwire)

2010-11-26 21:39:00 Author: Flashwire Posts: 217

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@Sketch & Flash Glad you both enjoyed the level @Sketch Thanks You for the tips bro! @Flash You competitive little sack!

2010-11-26 21:56:00 Author: CheezeBo Posts: 832

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That level was the best level I played in two months.

2010-11-26 21:58:00 Author: The-Frez Posts: 275

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Hey Cheeze, I played this level and it was great. My favorite part of it is the race. I liked who this level tied in with the other jelly world levels. I played some of the other jelly world levels but this one was the greatest. :star::star::star::star::star:

2010-11-26 22:11:00 Author: lego12 Posts: 77

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That level was the best level I played in two months. You obviously don't play other people's levels. I admit, I rarely play other peoples levels. I did play Cell13 by SalieriAAX, however, and that is far greater. Hey Cheeze, I played this level and it was great. My favorite part of it is the race. I liked who this level tied in with the other jelly world levels. I played some of the other jelly world levels but this one was the greatest. It seems you thoroughly enjoyed it! I'm pleased!

2010-11-27 05:44:00 Author: CheezeBo Posts: 832

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@ Cheesebo how do you do it you are amazing with a capital A woo.

2010-11-27 16:04:00 Author: The-Frez Posts: 275

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Wow! Thanks mster!

2010-11-27 16:15:00 Author: CheezeBo Posts: 832

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No I am not kiding you are really great and SketchNZ, The-Questor, Taffey, Eagerneph, Afp, Dizzy, and me. And Afp stands for Amazing flying poo.

2010-11-27 18:52:00 Author: The-Frez Posts: 275

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mster, you're missing people on that list: Jeffcu28 SalieriAAX Spark151 Coxy224 VelcroJonze Fastbro Alismuffin BlueBulletBill CyberSora Domick12 valmassoi Silver39 unXpectiD randomperson3459 TheNerd There are soooo many to name I've missed sooo many from that list. Sorry if you are one of the people I have missed off. These creators are just the ones who sprang to mind.

2010-11-27 19:08:00 Author: CheezeBo Posts: 832

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Well I do not know to of them but I told you you are awsome because you reminded me.

2010-11-27 19:33:00 Author: The-Frez Posts: 275

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Thank you for the kind words mster, but I think it's time to get back on topic.

2010-11-27 20:33:00 Author: CheezeBo Posts: 832

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Hey Cheeze! I thought your level was pretty good, with great corner editing. I felt as if you let down the story a bit, because it looked as if you were gonna have to take care of the pickles, but the problem just solved itself. Also, the gameplay was really good, especially the race. 4 stars and heart

2010-11-28 14:51:00 Author: HappyGreenCactus Posts: 247

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Hey ChezBo! The platforming was great! And your really making use of that corner editing tool which is great to see! I really enjoyed the level, although there were a couple of concerns. A grabby thingy that pulls you up had been set to on/off whereas it should have been set to directional. The other issue was these gas rectangles tryna kill meh. Maybe you could have made the gas fit in to the theme by making it hot chocolate pouring out of a jug.

2010-11-28 16:58:00 Author: Alismuffin Posts: 1328

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Here I am from out of the Blue. Who ordered some Quality Questor Feedback? YOU DID!! So, lets Start with the feedback, Wow, I must say, you've greatly improved! From Jelley World 1 and 2 comes Jelley world Hot Spot! If I didn't know who created These two levels, and Jelley world 1&2, I would think that they're from Completely different creators. If I could rate your Improvement rate I'd give it :star::star::star::star::star: and a <3!!! So, onwards with the feedback. The Negatives I played Both levels, and I must say, compared to the other Jelley world, this one's story didn't go as far as the other. I didn't actually get why the Pickles retreated. Somethings didn't look like Jelley or even desert related (besides the pickle) The Positives Visually, this level was Awesome! It was very fun! I loved the race! The Pickles looked realistic. While I was playing I was thinking "Why did he spend time on making Pickles look good? The Platforming was epic, if you keep increasing the fun factor of your platforming you'll be the next CheezeJonze or VelcroBo.....Maybe JelleyJonze? I overall really liked the level! It was Jelleytastic, I also loved how much effort went into this level. I gave you :star::star::star::star: and one cute little<3

2010-11-28 22:59:00 Author: The-Questor Posts: 1328

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