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Metal Platformer

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Metal Platformerplayer_beyond492
http://i858.photobucket.com/albums/ab142/player_beyond492/LittleBigPlanet%20PSP/Metal%20Platformer/HNI_0047.jpgIn this level you basically platform through a world of metal. Nothing special, enjoy and please leave comments.
2010-11-21 03:48:00

Author:
sackbot14
Posts: 59


Hey, here's the feedback:
I played the level and thought you did a pretty good job on it. I gave :star: :star: :star: :star:. I enjoyed the ladder part and the rotating circles you run across. They were both fun and very challenging. In the beginning you also had some nice sticker scenery, the best was on the zipline.Everything in the level was good, but some stuff in my opinion could have been better, such as corner editing and scenery. Everything about the gameplay, mechanics, and platforming was great. You did do a decent corner editing job, this may have something to do with me being a perfectionist, but corner editing in the winding tunnel could have been better and had a few jagged edges at the ends of the floor. Also, in the beginning of the level you had some neat scenery with the jagged hill and front thin layer outlining it, but the corner editing on the front outline layer was a bit off on the top, and would have looked a lot nicer if it had followed the fat layer exactly. Lastly, at the end of the level you kind of stopped with the stickering and it looked kind of bland.
Ratings- Platforming:19/20| Scenery: 13/20 | Mechanics/logic use: 20/20 | Corner Editing: 16/20 | Gameplay/replay value: 15/20 | total: 83/100
2010-11-21 17:38:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


Hey, here's the feedback:
I played the level and thought you did a pretty good job on it. I gave :star: :star: :star: :star:. I enjoyed the ladder part and the rotating circles you run across. They were both fun and very challenging. In the beginning you also had some nice sticker scenery, the best was on the zipline.Everything in the level was good, but some stuff in my opinion could have been better, such as corner editing and scenery. Everything about the gameplay, mechanics, and platforming was great. You did do a decent corner editing job, this may have something to do with me being a perfectionist, but corner editing in the winding tunnel could have been better and had a few jagged edges at the ends of the floor. Also, in the beginning of the level you had some neat scenery with the jagged hill and front thin layer outlining it, but the corner editing on the front outline layer was a bit off on the top, and would have looked a lot nicer if it had followed the fat layer exactly. Lastly, at the end of the level you kind of stopped with the stickering and it looked kind of bland.
Ratings- Platforming:19/20| Scenery: 13/20 | Mechanics/logic use: 20/20 | Corner Editing: 16/20 | Gameplay/replay value: 15/20 | total: 83/100
Thanks!

I agree, the corner edit in the tunnel part is a bit odd.....tryed my best.

And the scenery at the end did kind of die as well.




F4F4F4F4F on your Intermediate Logic Theme coming soon, just need to download it and play it.
2010-11-21 18:48:00

Author:
sackbot14
Posts: 59


Yeah, well you'll get much better as time rolls on, I've had the game almost a year (only used create mode for only 5 months so far) and I'm still learning things, so you are DEFINITELY not the only one. 83/100 is a B rating, which is still pretty good. Good luck on your next creation!2010-11-22 03:29:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


Yeah, well you'll get much better as time rolls on, I've had the game almost a year (only used create mode for only 5 months so far) and I'm still learning things, so you are DEFINITELY not the only one. 83/100 is a B rating, which is still pretty good. Good luck on your next creation!
Making two levels right now!

Jungle Platformer (savannah theme) and Desert Escape (canyons theme).
2010-11-22 03:38:00

Author:
sackbot14
Posts: 59


cool, so it'll be like a 3-part series of levels? One last thing is I advise you to to advertise lbpc in your levels somewhere, to attract more players to the site and improve. If you don't have any yet theres some great template logos by Alismuffin, and I've got a copyable object one I made. You don't have to or anything, it's just something most people do and I noticed you haven't in your levels.2010-11-22 04:00:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


cool, so it'll be like a 3-part series of levels? One last thing is I advise you to to advertise lbpc in your levels somewhere, to attract more players to the site and improve. If you don't have any yet theres some great template logos by Alismuffin, and I've got a copyable object one I made. You don't have to or anything, it's just something most people do and I noticed you haven't in your levels.
Well yeah I've saw that a lot of people do but I don't know how to get the prize.....I found the copyable level but there are no full prizes.

Uhh....and no offense to LBPC, but I'd rather advertise LBL, if you've ever been there.....it's awesome.
littlebigland.com

You'll probably spot me quickly, my name is also sackbot14.
2010-11-22 04:37:00

Author:
sackbot14
Posts: 59


Traiter!!!!! Just kidding. I never see any lbl logos around so I can't help you there, but I've got an lbpc logo i made in a prize bubble in the level lbpc copyable logo, and you can copy the lbpc started kit off the nerd or alis moon. The huge logo is in a level by jkthree and someone else titled lbpc logo template.2010-11-22 13:14:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


Well I was registered at LBL for quite a while but I came here when I heard about the showcase stuff.

But I might just advertise here because the PSP side of LBL is kind of dead but I see that here at LBPC, you have the best creators and everything. at least LBL has AFP as a moderator!

Anyways, I'll start advertising LBPC in my PSP levels because if it's PSP stuff I'm looking for I come here, not LBL.

But I can't seem to fine an entire LBPC logo in a prize, just the smaller ones, any iDea how to get the large one? I have the small one.
2010-11-23 07:54:00

Author:
sackbot14
Posts: 59


Do you have MY small one or the thin wooden one from the template pack? You gotta have mine, it really does lbpc the justice it deserves. Not to be modest or anything, but its true. My advice is get teh big logo template, take it apart, then turn all the letters into gas and stick them all back into their place, then delethalize. That's the only way, but it takes quite a while 2010-11-24 05:02:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


I'm still confused how to get the big one, when I try to capture a large object, my popit never lets me. 2010-11-24 08:45:00

Author:
sackbot14
Posts: 59


There is a glitch that makes it all that material in one thin layer. Click the individual letters, and it should say detatch. Try detaching at least most of the letters and then copying the rest and assemble it in your already started levels, or you can just use it as a template and build new levels in the level with the logo.2010-11-26 04:40:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


Nothing special, enjoy and please leave comments.

Nothing special!?! I think you've got a great level here! Seriously, the platforming was great and original, very fun. Corner editing is good, but the main problem was the length, it could've been a little longer. Also, it was a little strange you had bizarre shaped fire in the middle of a futuristic place, but that's okay. Stickers look great and flow well. Anyways great level, and it's nice to see you join lbpc, you've got a lot of potential. :star::star::star::star::star:
2010-11-28 17:49:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Nothing special!?! I think you've got a great level here! Seriously, the platforming was great and original, very fun. Corner editing is good, but the main problem was the length, it could've been a little longer. Also, it was a little strange you had bizarre shaped fire in the middle of a futuristic place, but that's okay. Stickers look great and flow well. Anyways great level, and it's nice to see you join lbpc, you've got a lot of potential. :star::star::star::star::star:
Thanks so much valmassoi!!

Now that post I call a BIG inspiration!
2010-11-28 19:13:00

Author:
sackbot14
Posts: 59


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