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Locoroco(2) perculoka - my first old level

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Locoroco(2) perculoka - my first old leveljimdogy000
this my first level. i started making this level in december 2009 but the glitches were against me. i am sorta proud of it now
this my first level. i started making this level in december 2009 but the glitches were against me.
at the the time i din't have wifi so i published it in the middle of this year.
and only found lbpc a few wekks ago.
i was a bit ashamed about it, but finding out about other people's firsts (especially jeffcu28s) i am now sorta proud of it!
2010-11-20 05:47:00

Author:
jimydog000
Posts: 813


Sounds interesting. I will check it out when I get wifi. 2010-11-20 12:50:00

Author:
PygmyOwl
Posts: 1316


Now, I'm not trying to start a fight but It'll probably stink.
All first levels usually stink.
Mine stunk due to no logic.
With that being said I am going to play it and give you some feedback.
Also, at the time of feedback play the levels I recommend you.
They teach you about logic and performance.
They're copyable so you can copy the directly to My Moon (your my moon) and tinker about in them. I hope this level proves me wrong about the first level theory but it probably won't. If your level doesn't turn out to be good don't sweat it, all first levels
Aren't as good as your later levels.
I hope you become a great creator Jimydog000
Oh and,
Welcome to LBPCentral!

I'll give the feedback about...
3 days from now.

Hope It's 5 star material!
T-Q
2010-11-20 15:10:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Sincere welcome Questor. Welcome to lbpc jimmydog! I am a fan of locoroco and will go play this sometime today or tomorow. Also, there is a locoroco level published by a player named Phalaina you might want to check out as well, it's pretty cool.
Also a heads up for the future: When you make a description about a level you should give a description of it and what it's about rather than saying what you think of it.
Feedback: Actually, this level wasn't that bad for a first level. It was much better than what I was expecting. You discovered a lot of the game mechanics such as directional pistons and elevators and did a lot better than the first things I made. I can see you in the future becoming a pretty decent creator. Just keep searching LBPC creators for good levels to get ideas and inspiration, and check out logic tutorials such as the lbpc psp logic pack, the official logic pack thread somewhere in the ps3 section, and I've got some stuff under my PSN that's got some nifty logic contraptions as well. The only other thing that you MUST do in your levels is make sure your scenery boundaries look nice. In the level your green walls/floors were pretty thin and didn't make it look like you were actually in a green tunnel. Next tiem you should stretch them out larger so it covers all the empty space and looks neater. You should check out alismuffin's corner editing and scenery tutorials. I gave it :star::star::star::star:, good job and keep getting better!
2010-11-20 17:46:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


thanks you guys! I have already played all of the tutorials a few months ago, but have been caught up playing other peoples levels, you can see me in the high scores sometimes.
i have some brilliant ideas (I think) and ill have more time in the holidays so watch out.
GRRR! THOSE GLITCHES!!
2010-11-21 02:06:00

Author:
jimydog000
Posts: 813


Wrong words. Glitches are the things that are good, like the 3rd layer glitch and parascope glitch, bugs are the bad stuff like the infinite load screen, create mode crash and so on. Anyway, I'm looking forward to your new levels in the future. Be sure to post when they are out.2010-11-21 04:07:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


Hey! Feedback time!

This did not feel like Locoroco, by the way.

The visuals were decent considering this is your first old level.
Some of the ideas were nice but could've been carried out a tad better.
I liked the feel of this level, it was really nice.

Overall I gave you Tres (three) :star::star::star:

Also, don't be afraid of logic, it makes every level better.
2010-11-23 16:51:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


ummm... what is the parascope glitch???2010-12-18 08:47:00

Author:
sackboy7789
Posts: 280


Tell me!!!2010-12-20 01:26:00

Author:
sackboy7789
Posts: 280


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