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The E.P.F.V.Ricky-III
Behold! The Explosive-Powered-Flying-Vehicle! Equipped with an electromagnetic door-opener. My winning entry for LBW's Flying Contraption Contest.
I know that this and the contest have been over for quite some time, but I had originally published the level with just the vehicle in it and now it is finished. What it consists of it a floaty vehicle that runs on emitted micro-bombs to gain altitude. After playing Poo's Greenie Go Home, I became inspired make a vehicle that uses magnet logic like he did. Then, I decided to make a flying one after reading about the flying vehicle challenge so I could enter. The idea to use emitters to propel it came from a level I found on the community moon called The EVP Returns, where it is virtually the same thing, except it doesn't fly.
This is my second attemt (I never published my first) at making a legit flying contraption, and I posted this as F4F so I can get some (hopefully) constructive criticism so I can improve even better in the future. Hope you like it!
2010-11-07 22:35:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


Hey ricky! I finally got to play your level, so here's my way-over-due feedback!

I couldn't control the thing. I flew for 2 seconds, then face planted onto the ground. While I would've given it a 3 star rating, I figured I was just a horrible pilot.

So, :star::star::star::star: for you! Nice job and congrats on winning!

Peace
2010-11-20 19:29:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


THANK-YOU!!! This is the feedback I needed! When you play a level in create mode you made you naturally know how everyhting works and are used to it! For me I am an expert at it and it works perfectly. I will work on editing it to try to get it to work better! Use of teh periscope glitch should work. Thanks you!2010-11-21 04:09:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


Hey ricky! Played your level and have feedback 4 you like you asked in my level thread.

So here's my F4F!

Well, I enter the level and there is no scenery. I do realize this is basically a DEMO level, so it won't matter much.

I can read the mouths, but I decided not to on the first try to see if it is easy enough, and it is. The controls are pretty straightfoward. Up is up, left left, right right.

It is however very difficult to grab up. I do realize that it's hard to make an open space that's fully functional, but it is hard.

The magnet was also hard to grab.



All I did was bring the magnetic key to 3 spots, it was very simple, and could've been much more fun to include more puzzles.


Overall, the mechanism worked fantastically except for the difficulty of grabbing up/down. And the main focus is the demonstration of the machine, so I gave the level a
:star::star::star::star:



Now that you have your F4F......do you mind giving me F4F4F (lol)? Since this is an F4F thread?

Feedback for the feedback that was for feedback.

On my level Metal Platformer.
2010-11-21 04:26:00

Author:
sackbot14
Posts: 59


Thanks for the feedback! I already left you feedback on the cat tyrant, but I'll leave you more feedback on metal platformer is you leave feedback on my intermediate logic theme.2010-11-21 17:04:00

Author:
Ricky-III
Posts: 732


Turned out I was busy.

I'll have feedback for it tonight got a lot of stuff to take care of. >_> Ugh....don't like this homework...
2010-11-21 21:42:00

Author:
sackbot14
Posts: 59


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