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rock my system

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rock my systemnosemomkey
a machine from a factory that creates lethal stuff (yeah, im short in imagination today) has gone insane and its attacking everybody, to put it into rest throw rocks into its system! this is for the boss battle blitz contest in LBL.
seriously guys, this isnt a "real" level, as you just read, this will be an entry for the boss blitz from little big land, and before i publish it i whould really like to know what you guys think about it, and if you guys report anything that you dont like i whould be very happy (and i whould thank your post )

alright, let me know what you think
(and hurry up, i must submit it until december first)
2010-11-07 22:28:00

Author:
nosemomkey
Posts: 414


Well, looks like I'm your first customer!

I liked the theme, but I found the walls annoying from the start. I don't know why. I guess they didn't do my eyes good.

As for the boss battle, I found it a bit plain. If not a bit overpowered. I got around it's lethal gas ball of death, but the lazer was pretty much unavoidable. Not only that, but it felt kind of short in my opinion. Which is why this feedback is so short.

But from the outcome of all this, I really liked the sequences you included! First it's moving, shooting a lethal ball thing. Then it goes to lazers. Finally, it starts marking areas so it does like some super lazer? I don't know, but I found that kind of creative!

Overall, :star::star::star::star:. The boss can use some more muscle (and less lethal weapons that fire every 2 seconds), but other than that I say great job!

Peace
2010-11-07 23:28:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


that's quite a good name, rock my system... kinda catchy. I'm just loading it now.................
3 stars.....
really nice level 4.8 stars aka 5 stars
not the most epic boss but ok
2010-11-15 11:52:00

Author:
jimydog000
Posts: 813


Well, looks like I'm your first customer!

I liked the theme, but I found the walls annoying from the start. I don't know why. I guess they didn't do my eyes good.

As for the boss battle, I found it a bit plain. If not a bit overpowered. I got around it's lethal gas ball of death, but the lazer was pretty much unavoidable. Not only that, but it felt kind of short in my opinion. Which is why this feedback is so short.

But from the outcome of all this, I really liked the sequences you included! First it's moving, shooting a lethal ball thing. Then it goes to lazers. Finally, it starts marking areas so it does like some super lazer? I don't know, but I found that kind of creative!

Overall, :star::star::star::star:. The boss can use some more muscle (and less lethal weapons that fire every 2 seconds), but other than that I say great job!

Peace

alright so:
sorry about the walls, in the beggining i created them static, but then i found them pretty much the same walls from blueblox, and then people whould tell me stuff like:

these walls are pretty much the same from blueblox, you're out of ideas, you are unnoriginal and if you suffer from creator block, dont post obsolete levels in the comunity moon


so i made them moving...
now about the "plainlieness" : it is a lethal-stuff-creating-machine, it is supposed to only create stuff, and dont actually attack (but create lethal stuff (you must avoid))

YEAH, these are my explanations for all the level

BTW, jimmydog let me tell ya a secret: all my level names come from names of music!
it is true here is the full list:
fear of the dark by iron maiden -----> fear of the dark
fade to black by metallica -------> fade to black
no idea -------> blueblox (yeah, that name came from my imagination)
rock your body by black eyed peas --------> rock my system

so i dont create names, i just modify them
2010-11-17 21:57:00

Author:
nosemomkey
Posts: 414


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