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SGT. SACKSONKILLA_TODDZILLA
This is a level I have revamped twice. I spent ALOT of time making this level so hopefully you will enjoy it , but if it's not what I think it is let me know.Thank you.

2010-11-01 02:26:00

Author:
KILLA_TODDZILLA

Posts: 653

SGT. SACKSONKILLA_TODDZILLA
This is a level I have revamped twice. I spent ALOT of time making this level so hopefully you will enjoy it , but if it's not what I think it is let me know.Thank you.

Is it okay if you or someone can post pictures of the level? I cant go on my PS3 roght now

2010-11-01 02:48:00

Author:
Unknown User

Is it okay if you or someone can post pictures of the level? I cant go on my PS3 roght now

I promise tomorrow I will make a video on you-tube and post it. Unfortunately I'm calling it a night. HAPPY HALLOWEEN.

2010-11-01 02:55:00

Author:
KILLA_TODDZILLA

Posts: 653

Is it okay if you or someone can post pictures of the level? I cant go on my PS3 roght now

I hope everyone can forgive my double posting, but I made the video teaser for my newest level like requested. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4mIMIB6Nz60 Please try it and let me know what you think. I spent a lot of time and played it over and over and over trying to get it right. Thanks again.

2010-11-02 23:40:00

Author:
KILLA_TODDZILLA

Posts: 653

pros
- The giant rope swing was a a nice touch
- The chute at the end with the little curl up ramp was neat
-The storyline was simple but still fun

cons
-The dialogue is a little rough and there are some grammar errors.
-When u get the jet pack from the truck and go up and left u can see your dark matter holding things up.
- I was able to drive the ATV off the edge and got stuck under neither it. I hit restart to go back to the earlier CP and found myself stuck at the bottom unable to continue.
- The jet pack after the ATV ride confused me and made me feel like there is something I should do there... but nothing I can see.
- When you shoot the aliens they don't do anything except stand there. There is also some logic showing.

For the size and length of the level it felt really empty. I would suggest focusing on some detail of the area and cleaning up edges. I found a lot of places I could go to get out of the level area and a lot of places where I wasn't sure if I was going the right direction.
A nice concept and will be a pretty fun level with some clean up.

~~ Please F4F my level Steampunk Horror Maze, link in my signature~~

2010-11-03 01:15:00

Author:
Unknown User

pros
- The giant rope swing was a a nice touch
- The chute at the end with the little curl up ramp was neat
-The storyline was simple but still fun

cons
-The dialogue is a little rough and there are some grammar errors.
-When u get the jet pack from the truck and go up and left u can see your dark matter holding things up.
- I was able to drive the ATV off the edge and got stuck under neither it. I hit restart to go back to the earlier CP and found myself stuck at the bottom unable to continue.
- The jet pack after the ATV ride confused me and made me feel like there is something I should do there... but nothing I can see.
- When you shoot the aliens they don't do anything except stand there. There is also some logic showing.

For the size and length of the level it felt really empty. I would suggest focusing on some detail of the area and cleaning up edges. I found a lot of places I could go to get out of the level area and a lot of places where I wasn't sure if I was going the right direction.
A nice concept and will be a pretty fun level with some clean up.

~~ Please F4F my level Steampunk Horror Maze, link in my signature~~

First let me thank you for playing my level and giving feedback. I will do the same tomorrow for sure. I quickly changed the things you pointed out on account of all the promoting i did in a short amount of time. The biggest change was to the aliens. they now disappear. The grammar i will fix later and the jet pack in the far corner was just in case you were stuck on that side and needed to fly out. Thanks again and i promise tomorrow I'll take a crack at your level.

2010-11-03 03:07:00

Author:
KILLA_TODDZILLA

Posts: 653

Ive played your level and I was so confused out of my mind. First off you should do a better job with presentation, alot of the areas, actully all the areas are too blocky and plain. The alien enimes, the player can easily surpass it without takeing a hit and its pretty confusing to find out where to go. When I road the weird mini alien car the thing broke in mid air but luckly it took me to the check point so I could continue on with the level. Also theres is way to much wide open spaces that could use alot of detail and something for the player to do. I really like the parts when you slide your way through other areas and the explosions, makeing it seem more hye passed but it didnt really make up for all the other flaws in the level. This level is pretty random with alot of unecessary stuff and box explosives. Also you dont want the dark matter materila to be showing. This still needs alot of work. I couldnt even finish it because I didnt know where to go next because there is too much of vast amount of space.

Positives: Hye pase action, and gameplay.

Negatives: Uneven, disorganized, too much space, and I could keep on going.

sorry it has a good concept but you still need to work on your creative touch but with time you will master it.

2/5 stars

F4F Inception 2. Sorry for the bad reveiw. I liked it its just not complete.

2010-11-03 04:15:00

Author:
Henred

Posts: 123

Ive played your level and I was so confused out of my mind. First off you should do a better job with presentation, alot of the areas, actully all the areas are too blocky and plain. The alien enimes, the player can easily surpass it without takeing a hit and its pretty confusing to find out where to go. When I road the weird mini alien car the thing broke in mid air but luckly it took me to the check point so I could continue on with the level. Also theres is way to much wide open spaces that could use alot of detail and something for the player to do. I really like the parts when you slide your way through other areas and the explosions, makeing it seem more hye passed but it didnt really make up for all the other flaws in the level. This level is pretty random with alot of unecessary stuff and box explosives. Also you dont want the dark matter materila to be showing. This still needs alot of work. I couldnt even finish it because I didnt know where to go next because there is too much of vast amount of space.

Positives: Hye pase action, and gameplay.

Negatives: Uneven, disorganized, too much space, and I could keep on going.

sorry it has a good concept but you still need to work on your creative touch but with time you will master it.

2/5 stars

F4F Inception 2. Sorry for the bad review. I liked it its just not complete.

I understand what your saying. The problem is when you change the smallest detail in a level that size everything changes. I'll put more arrows and exit signs for you if that's what it needs but you have to see that this wasn't something thrown together in 2 minutes like some of the garbage out there. Thanks for your input I just feel your missing the forest for the trees is all. I will check your level out tonight.

P.S. Part of the challenge of the level is finding out what to do next Alla Tomb Raider.It's vast and open because it takes place in an underground military bunker underground.

2010-11-03 11:16:00

Author:
KILLA_TODDZILLA

Posts: 653

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