Archive: 4 posts

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MechaStein:Introduction 1/4ZenGama Experience a life torn to pieces by experiments, experience a world full of hate, power, and science. Experience I've been working on this level for a good amount of time and i published it last month (I think) and i haven't been receiveing alot of plays so i have decieded to post this on LittleBigPlanet Central to attract more players and become known. This is a short introduction of my series of MechaStein, Theres alot of reading so i'd class this as RolePlaying. I don't want to say to much about the level as i want people to experience it for them self but here are a couple of tips. Walk slowly and try not to miss any speech bubbles as each bubble is very important for the story. Thanks for reading my post and i hope you enjoy my level.

2010-10-24 15:48:00 Author: Unknown User

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Can tell just from the start that the writing and story is going to be good, the music sets the tone pretty well and the colours help to fund that feeling of gloom. I think the camera could be positioned better at the start since most of the view is taken up with the floor maybe up a bit and tilted left or right as an off-centre camera would up the wiriness factor. I like how the first main bit of dialogue is sort of a tease for the robot and you're not quite sure what they are talking about until you are transported (nice transport btw). The robot bit could be made more exciting but I really liked the camera angle it fired at. All in all a very good, funny story with a good level and impressive bit of design on the robot 7/10.

2010-10-26 23:57:00 Author: shotgun_69 Posts: 157

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Thanks for the feedback

2010-10-27 17:48:00 Author: Unknown User

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sounds good, will check out soon! No pictures Please check out my threads

2010-10-27 19:11:00 Author: Unknown User

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