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F4F Parakee Isle ( the series )flamesterart It's a tropical island where you do various activities on your way to the end of your vacation. I still haven't made part four, because i ran out of ideas for the fourth one, so, on littlebigland, i am holding a competition for the best ending for this series. i will appreciate any screenshots from my levels that you can make, because i can't make screenshots.

2010-10-19 22:43:00 Author: flamesterart Posts: 585

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Parakee Ending Competition! i need a good ending to this series, but, i ran out of ideas! so, i am going to hold a small contest to get the best possible ending for parakee isle, the winner gets a heart, and plays on their levels, and maybe other stuff! post your submission here.

2010-10-20 22:46:00 Author: flamesterart Posts: 585

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Today, the competition for the ending of my level series Parakee isle will officially start, please, if you want to enter, make sure you play the third level first, so that you know how it ends. the entry must also end at sackboy's home. Is there a prize you ask? why yes there is. if you win, you get a heart, i will play your levels ( i would anyways. ) and You will get free publicity from my level, and maybe an xp donation from me. ( MAYBE ) to enter, please post in the parakee isle thread in this format: PSN ID: YOUR IDEA: real simple. thanks for reading!

2010-10-21 03:47:00 Author: flamesterart Posts: 585

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UPDATE TIME! here are some pictures from around parakee isle, later i will add a story that goes along with the level series, when i have the time... http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/9246/71681668.jpg http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1138/68200010.jpg http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/9969/67294730.jpg http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/115/21019298.jpg http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/2956/65381955.jpg http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6613/69987027.jpg http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/9534/26785369.jpg http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/2888/68124547.jpg http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/5690/forest1d.jpg http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/7201/forest2i.jpg http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8207/forest3.jpg http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/5948/75224943.jpg http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/6567/10569519.jpg http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/7575/46634670.jpg

2010-10-23 06:01:00 Author: flamesterart Posts: 585

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Parakee Isle Series REVIEW: Okay, where to start?? Your level idea was a good one and unique in its own right. First and foremost, when you go through the series and finish it, you are left with a lingering question on why 2 and 3 was so much shorter than the first. I would combine the last two into one so it can have some substance. As for all the switches and sound effects, they were all visible. Certainly eliminate that so the user can feel more engulfed with the world you created for them. For the art work and graphical presentation, it was good but very jagged. Take a little more time to smooth out the edges (im still working and learning this one!). I often found myself not knowing where to go, perhaps a little more direction for the users will help keep things moving along? I also got stuck in the Black vehicle and was unable to get out and had to restart the level. The other two vehicles worked fine. There was also a part where you fall down into a hole and find a teddy bear, I was confused with this one as it seemed very out of place and there was no way out, so I was left with popping my character to a checkpoint. Not sure if this was intended, but I could see many people just exiting the level at that point instead of going back to the check point. I would make a way out, or if there is one, certainly make it clearer. Oh, and certainly go back to the dialog and take the time to capitalize the sentences and check spelling and grammar. Yes I know it sounds nit picky and all, but it really shows that you take time in your work and the overall presentation is doubled. All and all, it was entertaining. I would just spend more time on polishing things out and decorate more to create a believable environment. I rated :star::star::star: -- Will certainly play it again if you make some updates! Thanks, F4F on my own would be a great help too, I would love to hear your feedback! https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=38724-Cave-Exploration-Part-1

2010-10-28 20:49:00 Author: John82wa Posts: 221

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