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The Enchanted Towerssmudge228 3 days ago a warlok randomly attacked your pod. You arrive at his castle with all kinds of mischievous jiggery pokery planned out as your revenge, but the warlok isn't going down easily.... Originally my first level, which I took down to update and have only now remembered to update. This is only my second published level and I hope you guys enjoy it. Oh yeah, and see if you can find matilda (the cow) in this level! If you do, you win nothing but the satisfaction of having found her!

2010-10-18 07:51:00 Author: Smudge228 Posts: 533

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I have been going through and updating some of my levels too so I felt it was only polite to help you with your updates as well. Would suggest putting a camera near the lever at the start of the level so you can see the bridge coming down. Really liking the tree design over the water. The disappearing platforms are genius and a good challenge but they could be tightened up a bit. The lightning and gas are really hypnotic, good sense of atmosphere. The boss at the end could be better as it wasn't really that challenging. On the whole though I think the level could use some extra cameras, this level deserves to be seen from the best angles and it would really add to the atmosphere.

2010-10-19 01:16:00 Author: shotgun_69 Posts: 157

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This was great but I couldn't complete it, one of the Ice paths near the waterfalls would only spawn for about half a second. This has potential, and I will try again later and give more feedback. If you want to play it, my F4F level is in my sig.

2010-10-19 08:11:00 Author: Radishlord Posts: 706

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Feedback Positives: +Forrest looked good +Gameplay was okay +Platforming was pretty original Negatives: -Hints take the fun out of it a lil bit -After the rocks collapse theres no way to proceed on because the 1st ledge is all the way at the bottom near the gas and the other 2 ledges are at the top but to far to make the jump. So I couldnt finish the level. Sugguestions: -Instead of adding a speech saying pull the level in the beginning to cross, just change the switch to a 2-way switch and connect it to a magic mouth on the bridge. Overall from what I played it was worth playing::star::star::star: keep up the good work.

2010-10-19 13:17:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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Thanks for the feedback guys! @shotgun_69 I've just added a few more camera zones throughout the level and your right, it really does make a difference! about the boss, did you mean climbing the final tower or battleing the warlok himself? if it was the later then yes, it IS to easy any levels you want feedback on? @Radishlord fixed the timer on the platform, so none of them should be shorter then about 4 seconds, which is in some cases a little too long but better safe then sorry @Sabre_ I have changed the magic mouth at the start to a camera that shows the bridge as it falls down, should make things a little bit easier for people. After the rock collapses the platform at the bottom by the gass should automatically start moving up and down, the level must've somehow glitched as I haven't managed to make it stay down again yet.... also you didn't leave a level for me to feedback on.

2010-10-19 17:53:00 Author: Smudge228 Posts: 533

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Yea I'm beta testing my final level the now so if you could help out that would be awesome. Add me when you get this (Shotgun_69) and I'll send you a key and yea I meant the warlock boss dude at the end, it would be awesome if you found a way that you had to deflect his spells back at him to beat him.

2010-10-19 22:19:00 Author: shotgun_69 Posts: 157

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F4F: SSBB-Battleship Harlberd Interior sorry forgot it was F4F, was just doing feedback because i was in the mood

2010-10-20 02:17:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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F4F: SSBB-Battleship Harlberd Interior sorry forgot it was F4F, was just doing feedback because i was in the mood lol yea I do that as well sometimes. I'll give it a play later on today and feedback the feedback.

2010-10-20 03:22:00 Author: shotgun_69 Posts: 157

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Hi, good job on the level. Couldn't finish it though, felt a little awkward, but had a nice feel to it as far as the look. Anyone who takes the time to make a decent level deserves to be played and noticed! Great for your second level!

2010-10-20 05:00:00 Author: Quazau Posts: 44

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Couple of points to add: The explosion after the waterfalls was awesome, it just lagged the game a bit The text at the top of the rolling electricity interrupted my jumping and killed me The puzzle after the rolling was hard for me to figure out, I couldn't see another switch was being emitted Found the invisible dark matter right after this under the platforms On the last section you can spawn two lifts and they jam up. Sorry for breaking your level so much I did really like it though.

2010-10-20 21:21:00 Author: Radishlord Posts: 706

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I just played this now, and I quite enjoyed it! My few points are: Positives The forest area looked great, I love the seaweed trees! The gameplay was solid, and had some good ideas Negatives Some areas, especially the 'castle' type areas were a little dull aesthetically. Try adding to the atmosphere of the level by cutting out windows, adding some more stickers and make it a little more than just a wall of stone. Another suggestion would be that (if you have the PotC Pack) I think you should change the castle areas to the Granite Wall material, as they don't look very man-made to me. But that's just me The magic platforms also had me a little annoyed, especially the first time they came up as I kept slipping off and having to die to get back, with no other option. I don't think there should be no other option, but that, again, is just me. And glass uphill sloped are not my friend All in all though, it was solid, and I enjoyed it, so you earned yourself 3 lovely stars! Keep up the good work! If possible, could you please F4F my level: The (Evil) Castle of the (Evil) Witch Evilline (the Evil)? Thanks.

2010-10-21 16:43:00 Author: Unknown User

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Ok thanks for the comment countruby! I'll be sure to check your level out asap! I will try to add some more eye candy to the castle areas, although I'm not to keen on the granite wall material, it just doesn't seem to quite fit. I'm not sure about how I would manage to make any way other then dieing to get out from hanging of a platform after sliding off of it at the moment, but as soon as I do, I will try to implement it! thanks again for all the nice comments guys!

2010-10-21 18:14:00 Author: Smudge228 Posts: 533

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