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The Lost World of Great WondersCalvin_and_kyle (Sackboy is flying his plane home, and encounters a terrible storm! He crashes in a strange but beautiful place.. Or does he? Please leave your thoughts and enjoy your visit to: The Lost World of Great Wonders!) Sackboy is flying his plane home, and encounters a terrible storm! He crashes in a strange but beautiful place.. Or does he? Play your way through this simple yet very detailed scenic adventure! Full of COLOR, Lots of vegetation and foliage not of this world! and solve the mystery for yourself! In The Lost World of Great Wonders! Please enjoy yourself and leave your thoughts or feedback! Here, or on the game! Sorry if the level seems short, The Thermometer is overheated :/ PHOTOS! 2532025321253222532325324

2010-10-16 18:10:00 Author: calvin_and_kyle Posts: 32

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Ive played the level, and the design is very well made, I dont know if the gameplay is as solid though, the part where the bridge collapses, I thought that was part of the level, but then I couldnt find another way up to there, you might want to fix that, and It was also a bit laggy, I think, if you just give the level a little bit more work, you can be a very good creator, and I think that if you make these few improvements, you can get on top of the competition. Design :star::star::star::star::star: Gameplay: :star::star:

2010-10-16 19:37:00 Author: Merc Posts: 2135

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lol you just swim to the right! when the bridge collapses theres a big hole in the side of the dirt wall to youre right.. and there you go!

2010-10-16 19:41:00 Author: calvin_and_kyle Posts: 32

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Hey I gave it a play and I thought it was nice. There was a lag though and some points it got fairly bad, I remember one spot in front of waterfalls particularly. One thing that bugged me, I love my bubble chains and a cutscene camera magic mouth interrupted my chain. It's at the bridge where the speech says it must be man made, I suggest removing the cutscene cam or at least move it's trigger radius so it's possible to chain the bubbles to the right uninterrupted. The transition from when your subconscious tells you your asleep to waking up in the plane again is too rough I think. it could fade to black, heartbeat sound etc for more atmosphere. A blob of glass killing you and the camera flying to the left back to the plane isn't very immersive. Final thing that struck me was the ending. I thought oh it starts here when your name popped up presenting but then a scoreboard was 2 feet away. I'd either put that at the start of have it more like "this was presented to you by _____". If you have time some feedback would be appreciated here (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=37932-Sacktastic-ptts-Pipe-Dreams-2)

2010-10-17 02:36:00 Author: OneEyedBanshee Posts: 1370

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Updated the bridge section to be more obvious where to go. sorry for any confusion that may have arisen.

2010-10-18 02:31:00 Author: calvin_and_kyle Posts: 32

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Here iz ma feedbakz Aesthetics: :star::star::star::star: The theme of the level was good and I very much liked the foliage. Excellent job there. There were some parts I felt looked a bit bland, such as the areas with only grass and dirt materials, but for the most part it was a good looking level. Gameplay::star::star::star: There wasn't much going on in terms of gameplay. Most of the level felt like it was just running through logs or over bridges. I liked the grappling hook at the end, and the way there are multiple paths to take for bubble chains, but that was about it. Creativity: :star::star::star::star: I have to say, my favorite part of the level was the scientist appeared and told you it was all a dream, and the whole level restarted. Props to you on that. Overall a :star::star::star::star: level, one gripe I had was that it felt very short, but I don't know if that was just me. Nevertheless, a good level, you have potential my boy.

2010-10-19 03:55:00 Author: booXely Posts: 654

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Here iz ma feedbakz Aesthetics: :star::star::star::star: The theme of the level was good and I very much liked the foliage. Excellent job there. There were some parts I felt looked a bit bland, such as the areas with only grass and dirt materials, but for the most part it was a good looking level. Gameplay::star::star::star: There wasn't much going on in terms of gameplay. Most of the level felt like it was just running through logs or over bridges. I liked the grappling hook at the end, and the way there are multiple paths to take for bubble chains, but that was about it. Creativity: :star::star::star::star: I have to say, my favorite part of the level was the scientist appeared and told you it was all a dream, and the whole level restarted. Props to you on that. Overall a :star::star::star::star: level, one gripe I had was that it felt very short, but I don't know if that was just me. Nevertheless, a good level, you have potential my boy. Thanks a lot! i enjoyed the feedback greatly! and i appreciate your play and time put into the feedback and level! as a side note the level was short :/ im very sorry about that. but the thermometer will not allow me to add anything to it. and since the detail is what was key it also took the most of the thermometer. However i do plan to continue this level on LBP2! where the thermometer as promised, is to be three times the capacity, where i will continue the looping level! with several mysteries and more encounters with the scientist!. but for now this is all it will allow me to fit

2010-10-19 05:04:00 Author: calvin_and_kyle Posts: 32

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