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A poem

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a short poem

always there,
never leaving,
because of you,
my mind is screaming

i find you,
distracting,
i find you,
disturbing.

always the same,
but ever changing,
you altered my life,
but you are still remaining

i find you,
pointless,
i find you
painful.

you are me
you are my life
you are
my right foot.

that was an original poem about my foot. please tell me what you think.
2010-10-14 22:34:00

Author:
unXpectiD
Posts: 1132


Do you really feel that way about your foot?? Hahaha, nice poem.2010-10-14 22:44:00

Author:
ShamgarBlade
Posts: 1010


yeah i do really feel that way.
ive been in continuall pain for the past 3 years. and because screaming is kind of stupid i experiment with alternate ways of showing my pain.
writng is one of them.
2010-10-14 23:06:00

Author:
unXpectiD
Posts: 1132


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