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Cosmic Adventure
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Cosmic AdventureBang126 Travel through this spaceship using all your platforming skills and get a surprise twist at the end!! Tthe level is in complete darkness but i had to make it light for pics as LBP-picture thingy doesnt pick up LED's very well http://lh5.ggpht.com/_5psUH-NSEbk/TKnw-cRSNgI/AAAAAAAAACk/GkvceZvHUGY/A%20Photo.jpg http://lh4.ggpht.com/_5psUH-NSEbk/TKnw-ot0HXI/AAAAAAAAACo/RUqNpDng-yM/A%20Photo_1.jpg http://lh3.ggpht.com/_5psUH-NSEbk/TKnw-urbYII/AAAAAAAAACs/r1xlxZXtXGA/A%20Photo_2.jpg http://lh4.ggpht.com/_5psUH-NSEbk/TKnw-iKUsTI/AAAAAAAAACw/PDIVSGeWSec/A%20Photo_3.jpg http://lh5.ggpht.com/_5psUH-NSEbk/TKnxG9q0j6I/AAAAAAAAAC8/QYB22pmpYm8/A%20Photo_6.jpg http://lh3.ggpht.com/_5psUH-NSEbk/TKnxHHDBkBI/AAAAAAAAADE/krfh48Ds5vE/A%20Photo_8.jpg http://lh6.ggpht.com/_5psUH-NSEbk/TKnxRA20E9I/AAAAAAAAADM/GMWGec-FS7c/A%20Photo_10.jpg This level is my latest and greatest level, my best visuals, opening sequence, gameplay etc... So i hope you enjoy it!! Please Rate and Review fairly Note: Ill be doing F4F on weekends! So thats when i will reply!! | 2010-10-13 07:54:00 Author: Bang126 Posts: 157 |
I just played your level and heres my feedback: Positives: +Intro of the level was pretty good +Gameplay was smooth +Visuals looked great +Design of the level was built nice +level was really fun +Puzzles with the time was good also Negatives: -Near the end of the level when you pop up to the surface outside the speech bubble is censored. Overall the level was very good::star::star::star::star: I liked it and got #1 | 2010-10-13 11:50:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653 |
I finished third I just played your level. I really really liked it. The intro was great. The gameplay went well The atmosphere is great The puzzles are challenging but fun I thought the part with the big things comming from above that crush you ( i think it's in there twice) were way too easy in my opinion. Could be more challenging. Overall the level is great. Awesome work. Gave it 5 stars F4F: What a Difference a Jump Makes | 2010-10-13 12:35:00 Author: MirkoQuarck Posts: 66 |
I really enjoyed myself at this level. puzzles are not very difficult but I enjoyed it very much.I liked the atmosphere so much. I gave :star::star::star::star:. good job | 2010-10-13 13:10:00 Author: Sasukeuchica Posts: 73 |
Okay, I don't know if you updated the level when I gave this feedback but here's my feedback copied from when I sent it via VM when you didn't have a thread for the level, glad ya made one. Here it is. I loved the visuals in lighting in this level, you did a great job with that. The gameplay was good but if I were you, I'd make the race longer. At the part with the giant platforms swinging up and down with the electric balls, two of the had fallen off which didn't make it as challenging so I'd fix that if I were you. When on the platforms that go up and down and you wanna get off before it shoots you up into the electric ceiling, I thought it was a good challenge but the camera angle felt too zoomed in for me, I'd zoom it out some and maybe tilt to see what's ahead if I were you. Overall, the gameplay was nice and wasn't frustrating, there was a good bit and I had fun with it. Also, maybe it was just that I was alone but the pieces that go up and down near the beginning that used to have lag which didn't make it fully go down a lot didn;t happen to me when I was just alone. I'll see what happens when I'm with another player. Anyway, the design of the buildings and all above ground was cool but it felt a bit weird since it's a spaceship and people expect it's in....space so I'd either add more gameplay in the spaceship and remove that but you worked pretty hard on it so maybe when you soot up the spaceman talks to you why the spaceship's underground. Here's what he could say. "Aa, I see you got out of my spaceship. I haven't really been paying the taxes for it so they stuck it underground as you can see." Overall, this was still a fun level and I hope you can make those fixes. :star::star::star::star: Could you give feedback on someone else's level, here's the link to it, thanks. https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=35026-OK-Choice-(Act-1-The-First-Curve-of-Mobius) | 2010-10-13 13:15:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208 |
Hey, i have played to your level and it seems to me to be interesting, i get pleased very much your intro congratulations for this good use of the lights, the level in if it is clean, simple but with a tidy design and me your work has pleased very much, the obstacles are entertained and it pleases this managing of layers, the bubbles have a good placement and it is agreeable to play it, pleases the utilization of stickers since the level has remained adequately decorated. I have given you 4 :star:'S I wait could play to my new level and I would like to know your opinion: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=37548-Sacktastic-Ptts-Pipe-Dreams-(LBP2) | 2010-10-13 14:37:00 Author: psyntens Posts: 562 |
Hey Bang, I just got through your level and thought it was a blast! It had very solid platforming throughout and your lighting kept the whole thing interesting, it's a shame you cant capture it in your screen shots. The whole thing was fun and played really well, and from the other levels i've played of yours, i'd have to agree. this is your best! Awesome work | 2010-10-15 00:41:00 Author: Duffluc Posts: 402 |
hey bang, great level and fun to play. my girlfriend was tagging along and hasn't spent much time playing lbp so it was a challenge for her lol. i enjoy the lighting and decoration, it has a good feel to it. it also wasn't too bad for 2 players to run through, there were a couple times when she couldn't make it and i went on without her, but she is a noob lol.. anyway, i really liked it and gave ya 5 stars! | 2010-10-15 15:46:00 Author: sean96sx Posts: 71 |
Hi ho... after your nice invitation for playing your level (^^) here are my thoughts. First of all: after I saw the pics in here, I expected a complete different lighting in here, even that you mentioned something about the change of it due to the problems with the screenshots... but I liked the look and style of the level very much. Right at the beginning I thought that there are some strange camera-settings (the room with the up- and down-gowing plattforms for example, sometimes the player is out of sight when you jump). All in all a very solid level with nice plattforming and a cool atmosphere. Ah, before I forget: I really liked the walks through the tubes!! Thumbs up and:star::star::star::star: Keep up the good work bang126 for F4F you can take a look at Attender-Alliance, but you'll need a buddy to play this, it's a co-op :-) have fun!!! | 2010-10-15 21:06:00 Author: (___NEO___) Posts: 206 |
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